Mohabbat barsa dena tu saawan aaya hai
Tere aur mere milne ka mausam aaya hai
Sabse chupa ke tujhe seene se lagana hai
Pyaar mein tere hadd se guzar jaana hai
Itna pyaar kisi pe pehli baar aaya hai...
meri update ko tabhi asli swaad atha hai jab thum isi shayari jodethi ho ,.. loved it ,.. meri essence of love ki asli essence thumhari shayari dethe hai ,.. beautifull dear thank.u very muchOriginally posted by: sheetalvasa
Mohabbat barsa dena tu saawan aaya hai
Tere aur mere milne ka mausam aaya hai
Sabse chupa ke tujhe seene se lagana hai
Pyaar mein tere hadd se guzar jaana hai
Itna pyaar kisi pe pehli baar aaya hai...
Originally posted by: sheetalvasa
Awesome update...
Anu, kya likhu? Bahut hi achha update hai...Dev ka Maan ko tease karna aur Maan ka shaadi 6 mahine baad hogi ...jo haal hua ...achhi tarha se likha gaya hai...mujhe laga agar Dev nahi aata toh humein kuch jyada romance milta na!!!! Dev ki entry galt time pe ho gayi!!!Ab Maan aur Geet ke baarein mein jo bhi likhu kam hi hai...pyaar ko dono ne jo izzat di hai woh bahut khub hai...dono jo karein achha hi lagta hai...chahe woh baatein ho ya romance...kahi bhi aisa nahi lagta ki yeh umr mein aisa nahi hona chahiye...yeh tumhari writing ka jadu hai...bahut sahajta se tum sab likh pati ho ki padhne mein kuch galat nahi lagta aur sab sahi lagta hai...tumne meri wish puri kar di ki ek update sirf Maan aur Geet hi chahiye...ab ek aakhri baat hai ki story ko sirf shaadi tak khatam mat karna par honeymoon hamein chahiye...dogi na?
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