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Posted: 11 years ago
chap 7 part A

Arnav u took khushi for granted 😡

part B

damn u Arnav 😡 😡 😡 take that on behalf of khushi

chap 8 part A

this part truly belongs to Jaiswal - u r a true gentleman 😳

part B

oh come on Arnav u just cannot play on both sides at the same time 😡 u should know where ur loyalties and priorities lie... u just cant say i need khushi as a friend and LK as girlfriend when u know the real situation...

part C

and u still haven't found a way to repair that 😡


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Posted: 11 years ago
loved the update
lovely saree too sweetie

she should speak to arnav maybe hint it
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chap 9

Yo!! there u go Akash u have hit the nail on the head...Finally u saved ur self from grave (quite literally ) danger and man! you definitely have self-preservation skills...but what is this your love is making you sooo mushy that u r clumsy in front of the love of ur life ???😆 😆😆

chap 10

Finally !! it has dawned on our thick headed Raizada that what he feels for khushi when he sees her with another is pure jealousy 👏 👏 👏

chap 11
firstly congratulations on hitting a century 👏

khushi is scared and scarred ... she is vulnerable and suffering ... but finally ASR has come to pick her...will she heal???

thanx for the update...pls continue soon 😃



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Posted: 11 years ago
Its all a tangled mess which even though is justified in its own way, still the lack of communication and fear is eating them both and their relationship as well :(

I hope things start changing now.. and they find strength to face the other person's feeling and be upfront about theirs coz they never know when they realize that what they've been looking for since years has always been by their side.

-V
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very well written.
Helped understand her character better.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey ...
Fantastic update !!

Khushi's turmoil was portrayed so beautifully ... I had misty eyes while reading her side of the story ... The heartbreak which was followed by jealousy, insecurity and the taunts in the following years was just a facade and that deep inside was a girl who was vulnerable and who's still harping on Arnav just made me so poignant !!! :(

Whoaaa !!! Arnav is at khushi's doorstep ?! :O
This is an absolute shocker ...

Thanks for the pm :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 1

Now I know where Khushi gets all her filminess from - Mr. Shashi Gupta. Don't they say daughters take off from their dads?

I love the following technique, because I have been using it since I was born probably and it works for me all the time. I hope it will work with you too for quicker updates.

jab ghee seedhi ungli se nahin nikalti toh ungli tedhi karni padti hai!

Jokes apart, the fact that they both didn't want to hurt Shashi highlights the fact that behind the brat, arrogant and childish faade there are mature individuals who are responsible and professional.

Looks like they literally grew up together, rather were together but never grew up.

Chapter 2

And they are back again!! Loved this chapter!!

It was like watching ping pong between Arnav-Khushi-Payal and funny too. I like the subtle humor that witty lines generate and you seem to be good at it.

Subbu seems like the balancing factor between Arnav and Khushi and probably torn and tired trying to keep them apart and defend too. I like her.

Akash is so smitten by Payal and it's so adorable. Yes, definitely Devi Maiyya has written Akash in Payal's fate.

Arnav and Khushi can't stand each other and at loggerheads all the time. They do not miss a chance to tease and insult each other. But can they live without each other?

Arnav cannot stand anybody other than him paying even slightest of attention. Gosh! He is so JEALOUS!! I really worry for Akash or any other guy who comes into Khushi's life.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update, thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved the chapter!!!
Khushi's POV was beautifully written.
Cant wait to read more
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Posted: 11 years ago
Updated my comment here.

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