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I am eagerly waiting for d update!!
And hope u surprise me wid d update ;)

I hope d next post will b ur update ;)
plzz do update soon!
I am waiting to attend d party wid akash and khushi to see d colour green !

What I love majorly about this and the previous chapter is how immaculately you've captured both Arnav and Khushi's side of the story. This chapter made me feel for Khushi like no other. The part where she hears Arnav asking Subbu out, made me wanted to hit Arnav hard, but more than that, I cried with Khushi when she broke down. And all that Khushi has become today, because of herself and Arnav, and that part about the judgement is so amazingly executed. That had to be my favorite part and the most heart rending.

update was good...but it gets boring to read both sides POV on the same incidence...sometime, somethings shud be left un written, and un-veiled at a later time, so that readers can deduce their own things, in the mean while...

this whole chapter was bt that night from khushi's POv so mostly i just skimmed through it...

hoping the story wud go ahead in the next update...and fankly i dont want khushi to be with Arnav at all, now...she shud just move on...leave, go anywhere...break all communications with Arnav, just vanish for some months...not because Arnav is a jerk and deserves it, but because Arnav still doesnt care for her...seriously, thats what i understand...

I think it would be better if you get used to my habit of un-reserving late. 😆

No more bakwaas. 😆

I LOVED this update. I was dying to read Khushi's POV on the entire situation and you did absolute justice it. The flow of words from start to finish was just impeccable. I felt for Khushi, really, going through your first heartbreak is really a monumental task, more so because you're ot sure of cming out unscathed. Deep inside, she is still that 16 year old nursing the pain of losing her first love, and more than that, her best friend.

Did I mention I just LOVE Varun? He's such a sweetheart and a gentleman! What he did shows that his feelings for Khushi were genuine. 😊

I knew that Arnav was up to something really fishy the moment I read about Akash's persistence and him coercing Khushi to come for the party! Yayyy! :D They are already partners in crime, eh?

You just HAVE TO update this super soon now. Don't leave us high and dry, P!

A cliffhanger! No! :O

nice ff

finally we get khushi pov!
loved it!
after all now we know what she felt and went through and somewhere i believe arnav was more at fault, khushi was trying to protect her heart from breaking all over again!
and arnav knows this, that is why he is making the first move now!
eagerly waiting for the next update and the looking forward to the party!!!