MG FF - Mere Brother Ki Dulhan! - last pt on pg 35

--                                             Mere Brother Ki Dulhan'.

 

 

Khuranas

Dadi -  Savithri Devi

Maan Singh Khurana ' Angry Young man

Dev Singh Khurana ' step brother

 

This is just yet another version of GHSP'..

Samjo GHSP ka ek rewind hai'

Lekhin kahaani mein thoda twist hai'..

Kaisa twist? Ye toh bahot jaldh aapko patha chal jaayega'..

Hummari Geet Handa toh wahi hai'.

Bolibali bak bak karnewali Hoshiarpur express''

Maan Singh Khurana bhi wahi akdu hai, aur sadu hai'.

Aur h

Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago

congrats for the story dear

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WOW Ek Aur...

Keep Going ...



will be waiting😊

for the new ff
nice prologue
waiting for the update

                                                                Part – 1

 

Maan Delhi ka business man hai, aur Dadi ke saath Delhi mein rehtha hai

Ussne apne kudh ke mehnat se KC ko banaya hai……

Maan just couldn't stay with his step mother after his father's remarriage…..

He spent his childhood in the hostel and he just hates vacations….

It's only Dadi that he loves and Dadi too takes good care of him….

She takes him to different  temples and other places during holidays as he hates Hoshiarpur….

Pammi ne toh Hoshiarpur ke sare properties apne naam kardhi…..

Ab Maan bhi bada hogaya aur Dadi bhi apne bete ke bina Pammi ke saath nahi rehna chahathi….

Ye ghar jahan Dadi ne shadhi karkke pehle katam rakha tha bahut hi chota hai….

Lekhin Maan aur dadi ke liye toh kaafi hai……

Shukar hai baabji ki Dadi ke naam mein kuch toh fields hai jissko bejkke Dadi ne Maan ko apne naye business ki shurauvaat karne ko kaha…..

Maan Delhi mein apna business shuru kartha aur apne kadhi mehnat se sirf paanch saal mein KM ko kareedhkke Dadi ko apne paas bhulatha…..

Delhi jaane ke badh dadi bhi Hoshiarpur nahi aathi….

Lekhin ab toh Dadi ko Hoshiarpur aana pada….

Aakhir apne pothe ki shadhi hai……

Dadi had to come and that too with Maan…..

Maan has come here against his will, just for the sake of Dadi….

Ye Pammi aur Dev ne toh khurana khandaan ki naam hi mitti mein miladhi….

Ab toh Hoshiarpur ke log sirf Dadi ka izzat karthe hai aur unkko patha hai ki Maan ko Dadi ne pala hai toh Maan zaroor apna khandaan ka naam ko bacha payega….

They are eager to meet Maan Singh Khurana, khuranaji ka potha haina?

Khuranaji Hoshiarpur ke sarpanch the…….

Aajkal Dev unkke naam ko lekhe yahan gundagiri karthe rehtha….

Patha nahi kiss ladhki ki kismat karab hai jo isse shadhi karnewali hai….

Suna hai ki ladhki Hoshiarpur ki hi hai …koi Meera naam ki ladhki…..

Ye Meera bahut sundar hai aur Dev ko woh bahut pasand hai…..

Pammi ke paas itna paisa hai toh woh apne bete ke liye koi bhi ladhki kareedhkke de sakthi…..

Ye bechari toh bahut gareeb khandaan ki hai…….

Aur usske papa bhi nahi hai, sirf maa hai……

Issiliye usske maa ne socha ki jaise bhi usski shadhi ho….

Dev ke barein mein jaanne ke badh bhi ussne shadhi ke liye haan kardhi….

Maan ko iss shadhi mein aane ki koi diljasthi nahi hai….

Par dadi ne jab shadhi mein jaane ki zidd kiya tha, Maan ko unkke saath aana hi pada…

Dadi ko akhele hoshiapur kaise jaane desaktha?

Woh bhi usskke ghar, Maan aaisa kabhi nahi kar saktha….

Chahe kudh ki kitna bhi beizzatti ho Maan bardaasht kar saktha lekhin dadi ki ek beizatti nahi sheh patha…

Issi liye aaj Maan bhi yahan aaya hai Dadi ke saath….

Dadi shadhi ke ghar pe hi rukhthi…

He is not even interested in attending the wedding…..

Lekhin Dadi chahathi hai ki Maan 5 minute ke liye toh aaye…

Shadhi ka din….

Dadi calls Maan….

Dadi: Maan bete, aap aarahe haina?

Maan: nahi dadi, mujhe kuch zaroori kaam hai

Dadi:lekhin bete, yahan sab aapka intrezaar kar arhe hai

Maan: Dadi, mein yahan sirf aap ke liye aaya hoon

Dadi: par bete, ghaavwale toh aapse milna chahathe hai

Maan: unkko mein kal bhi mil saktha, haina?

Dadi: toh aap nahi aayenge?

Maan: please Dadi, aap jaanthe hai ki mein kyun nahi aana chahatha, I just ahte that woman

Dadi: sshhh, Maan bete, aap tension mat hojao, teek hai bete, jaise aapki marzi

Maan: apne khyaal rakhna Dadi, aapko bhi koi tension lene ki koi zaroorat nahi hai, aap jaanthe haina, mere liye aap ke alawa iss duniya mein koi nahi hai

Dadi: haan bete, hum sab jaathe hai, aap hummari chintha chodiye aur haan, aapne kuch khaya hai ya nahi, mein Ramu se kehthi hoon ki aap ke liye kuch banayein

Maan: Dadi, aap meri fikar mat kijiye, mein koi chota bacha nahi hoon

Dadi: teek hai bete, hum aapse badh mein baat karthe hai

Maan: bye Dadi, aap wahan sambalkke rehna

Maan is worried about dadi, Dadi uss pagalon ke beech kya karegi?

Kaise unkko sambalegi?

Lekhin hummari dadi toh pammi ko bahut achche se jaanthi….

Issilliye koi dar nahi, Dadi ko patha hai ki ussko kaise sambalein…..

Meanwhile pammi is busy attending the guests….

She is so happy for her son….

Woh bhi apne bete ke liye itne achchi ladhki nahi doondh pathi…

Aakhir beta kisska hai?

Meera jaise bechariyon ka kya kami hai?

Warna  kaun apne beti ki shadhi Dev ke saath karne ke liye tayaar hoga?

Itna kuch jaanne ke badh bhi log kaise aaise shadhi ko accept karthe hai?

Isse achcha toh Maan ki tarah shadhi hi nahi karne ka faisla lethe, haina?

Kyun shadhi karkke ek masoom ladhki ki zindagi ko barbad karne mein dhule hue hai ye log?

Maan just can't digest this, how could he witness such a shadhi?

Issi liye Maan iss shadhi se dhoor hi rehna chahatha….

Par Kismat ka khel toh bahut alag hai……………….

Ye shadhi Maan ki wajhe se hi hogi, warna ye shadhi rukh jaathi….

Aaisa Maan ne kya kiya tha?

Jaanne ke liye ek din intrezaar karna padega……

nice start waiting for the maan and geet meeting

nice update dear

nice prologue, continue soon!

                                                Part  - 2

 

 

 

Geet Handa''.Darji ki pothi'..

Geet  bhi abhi abhi Hoshairpur aane ki tayaari mein hai'..

Geet lives in Amritsar with her beeji'..

She has just now finished her higher secondary and is eager to join college'.

Beeji toh Geet ki shadhi karna chahathi hai'..

Unkko Geet ki bahut fikar hai'..

Lekhin Geet toh aage padna hi chahathi hai'.

She knows Beeji would not agree'.

Her only hope is he rbrother Brij'..

Agar Brij ne Geet ko college join karne ko haan kardhi toh Beeji bhi mana nahi kar sakthi'.

Aur Geet apne bhai ki ladli hai'.

Brij Geet ka har baat maantha'.

Who toh sirf Geet ki kushiyan chchatha'.

Geet Beeji se ladhkke Amritsar chodkke apne bhai ke paas jaane ki faisla karthi'..

She leaves Amritsar''.Beeji is not willing to send her alone'.

But Geet is so adamant that beeji had to send her''

Ye ladhkki toh kissi ki baat nahi sunegi?

Patha nahi shadhi karkke kya karegi?

Geet ne toh shadhi ke barein mein socha hi nahi'.

Pehle padayi, phir naukri, phir dekhthe hai ki Salman jaisa koi miltha hai kya? haina babaji?

Geet apne kuch saheliyon ke saath Hoshairpur aathi hai'.

She is very excited'.

Haoshiarpur aathe hi Geet ko bahut kushi hothi'..

Ye usski gaav hai, apni mitti mein katam rakhne ka kushi hi alag hai'..

Geet ko lagtha hai ki yahan ka har cheez ussko welcome karna chahathi'.

Chahe ye tande hawa ho, ya panchiyon ka Ghana'.

Aur toh aur saawan bhi Geet ke aane se bahut kush ho gaya'.

Barish bhi aathi hai as if to welcome Geet''.

She hops in the rain and heads to her house'..

Dadi yahan Khurana haweli mein apne pothe ki shadhi mein busy hai'..

Dadi apne purane rishdedaron se milkke bahut kush hojaathi'..

She looks for the young girls'..

Yahan ka sabse sundar ladhki kaun hai?

Hare Dadi toh apne Maan ke liye dulhan dhoondhthi hai''

Dadi ke zamane mein toh shadhi ke ghar mein hi kahin rishtey pakki hothe hai'.

Dadi ne socha ahi ki Maan apne liye kabhi bahu nahi layenge'.

Ab dadi ko hi kuch karna hiana?

Maan kehtha hai ki shadhi nahi chahiye, aur kissi ki saath ki zarrorat nahi hai toh dadi kaise manegi? Dadi ko patha hai ki apne Maan ke liye kya sahi hai, haina?

Dadi wahan ki sare ladhkiyon ke informations collect Karthi''

Lekhin koi bhi Maan ke liye suit hi nahi hothe'..

Dadi is disappointed'.

Ye kya hai? hummare Hoshiarpur mein koi bhi sundar ladhki nahi hai kya?

Dadi: pammi, tumne sare Hoshairpur ko shadhi mein bhulaya haina? Kssi ko choda toh nahi

Pammi: kaise chodthi? Ye mere eklautha bete ki shadhi hai

Dadi: lekhin humme lagtha hai ki zaroor kuch galthi hogayi hai, ho saktha hai ki aaj Hoshairpur mein kissi aur ki shadhi bhi ho

Pammi: nahi toh, aap bahut din se bahar rehthe haina? Issi liye aap sab ko bhool gaye ho

Dadi: nahi nahi, hum Hoshiarpur ke logon ko kaise bhool sakthe?

Pammi: pehle aap Dev ki Dulhan se toh milliye

Dadi has totally forgotten about Dev's bride'.hum toh yahan Dev ke shadhi mein aaye hai'..

Maan ke liye toh koi na koi ladhkki intrezaar kar rahi hogi'..humme bas unkko dhoondhna hai'

Aapko dhoondhne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai Dadi, Maan apne dhulan kudh dhoondhlega''

Aahir kismat ne Maan ko Hoshiarpur tak laya hai toh kya babaji maan ko apne jeevan saathi se nahi milayenge kya?

Aaap fikar mat kijiye, Hoshiarpur express station aagayi'..

Yahan ek chota sa break lekhe jaldhi apne manzil pohunch jayegi'..haina?

 

dadi is disappointed...

 

she goes and checks the arrangements and takes charge of the wedding...

 

aakhir dulhe raja ki Dadi haina?

 

sab dadi ka bahut izzat karthe hai, issiliye unsse thoda darthe bhi hai...

 

pammi comes...she is happy to see Dadi involved...

 

Pammi: hummmari bahu lakhon mein ek hai, Hoshairpur ke sabse sundar aur samajdar ladhki hai

Dadi: achcha, waise khurana khandan ki bahu jo hai

Dadi ko apne bahu ki yaad aathi, hare Pammi ko toh dadi kabhi apne bahu nahi maanthi'..

Dadi toh Maan ki maa Sheetal ki yaad karthi'.

Woh bhi bahut samajdar aur susheel ladhkki thi'.

Mr. Khurana ussko bahut pyaar karthe the, aur woh bhi apne pariwaar ko bahut pyaar karthi thi, khaas karkke apne bete Maan ko toh ek pal bhi apne se dhoor nahi jaane dethi'..

Khuaranaji hamesha ussko dhaantthe the ki woh aaise karkke Maan ko kamzoor karthi hai'.

Ussko apni zindagi kudh jeene do, warna woh kabhi independent nahi hoga'.

Khuranaji ne toh Pammi se shadhi sirf Maan ke liye kiya tha'..

Pammi bhi shuruwaad mein bahut achche se apne zameendariyon ko nibhaya tha'.

Pammi was too young and innocent'.

Dadi didn't want her to get married to her son who was 15 years older'..

But pammi's father insisted that he is very happy to get his daudhter married into the Khurana khandaan'..

He convinced Mr.khurana that Pammi will look after Maan as her own son'..

Dadi had to agree atlast as her son wanted to marry her'..

pammi itne pyaari thi ki Dadi ne bhi ussko dhere dhere apnaliya tha'..

sab kuch achcha chal raha tha'.par jab Pammi pregnanat hui usske attitude change ho gayi'..

Lekhin Dev ke janam ke badh woh bahut insecure ho gayi aur bahut selfish ho gayi'.

Maan ko paraya samja aur Dev ko bhi Maan se dhoor rakha'.

Ussko laga ki sab Maan ko hi asli waris samajthe aur ussko hi pyaar karthe'..

Khuranaji toh Maan se itna pyaar karthe the ki Maan ko kabhi bhi Pammi ke saath akhela nahi chadthe'.

Dadi toh unkko kitne samjane ki koshsish kiya tha ki aaise karne se Pammi ko lagega ki usspe humme koi barosa nahi hai aur ussko sirf ek naukrani ki roop mein sweekar kiya hai'..

Lekhin Khuranaji sheetal ko kabhi bhool nahi paye aur ussi ki yadhoon mein alchoholic ho gaye'.

Pammi issi moke ka faida utaakke Khurana ji ko kudh philakke apna sara kaam puri kardhi'.

Sare properties apne naam jo kardhiya tha'.

Khuranaji bimar padgaye aur ajldh hi guzar gaye'..

Lekhin kismat ne ussko Maan se cheenliya hai aur Maan hamesha hamesha ke liye akhela ho gaya'..

Dadi purane bhathon ko saochkke aaj ka din ko karab nahi karna chahathi'.

Jaise bhi ho, Dev bhi unkka hi potha hai'.

Aur Dev ka issme koi galthi nahi hai seva ye ki woh Pammi ka beta hai''

Bachon toh hummare parwarish se hi apna character banathe haina?

Dev has been brought up like that''he thinks that he is Hosiarpur's prince'.

He owns everything here''..Dadi feels bad for him at times'..

Maa hi apne bachon ki pehla guru hothi hai'.haina?

Agar aaisa maa milthi toh bacha kaisa hoga?

Pammi takes dadi to the bride's room'..

Lekhin wahan toh sirf Meera ki maa hai'..

Meera's mom: namasthe sambandhiji, aayiye

Pammi: insse milliye, ye Dev ki dadima hai

Mm: namasthe Dadiji

Dadi: namasthe bete, hare hummari bahu kahan hai?

Mm: Meera naha rahi hai, mein bhi toh usska hi intrezaar kar rahi hoon

She goes and knocks the door'.

Dadi: rehne do, humme koi zaldhi nahi hai, hum intrezaar karenge

Pammi: aaise kaise? Wahan Panditji ne toh sare tayaari karli aur ye abhi tak naha rahi hai?

Pammi too knocks'..

Someone opens the door''

But it's not Meera''

It's Pinky, Meera's friend''

Mm: tum? Tum yahan kya kar rahi ho? Meera kahan hai?

Pammi: ye ladhki kaun hai?

Dadi: Pammi, ye hummari bahu nahi hai kya?

Pammi: nahi, ye koi aur ladhki hai, ye sab kya hai? kahan hai Meera?

Ma: bataho Pinky, Meera kahan hai?

Pinky is so scared''

Pinky: Meera, Meera toh neeche chali gayi

Mm: kya? Lekhin panditji ne toh abhi abhi ussko bhulaya hai

Pammi: jaldhi chalo, ye pagal ladhki kahan chali gayi?

Dadi: pammi. Pareshaan mat ho, hummari bahu Dev ke saath hogi

Dev comes''

Dev: maa, kya baat hai? aap log itna pareshaan kyun lagthe ho?

Pammi: Meera apne kamre mein nahi hai

Dev: kya? Aapne teek se dekha?

Pammi: haan dev, mujhe lagtha hai ki woh bhaag gayi

Mm: aaisa nahi ho saktha

Dev: aapne ussko samjaya nahi

Mm: meinne toh ussko bahut samjaya tha

Dev: ye zaroor uss brij ka kaam hoga

Pammi: dev, ab kya hoga?

Dev: aap fikar mat kijiye, usski itni himmat? mein bhi dekhtha hoon ki woh Dev Singh Khurana se kaise bachkke jaathi?

Dev calls his men and they go and search Meera'..

Actually Meera Brij ki padosi hai aur woh donno ek dusre ko bahut chahathe hai'.

Lekhin beech mein dev gusjaatha aur Meera ke saath sagayi bhi kar liya tha'

Meera  ko ye shadhi pasand hi nahi'

Pinky helped them run away''

Pinky Meera ki saheli hai'..

Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago

Beautiful story dear
so meera eloped with brij and geet is in hp to meet brij
hope brij ke karan geet problem me na fas jaye