Akdha ss: Lovestory part 4B and 5 COMPLETED 20 oct 24 pg

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Posted: 10 years ago
So guyz Im writing an ss on akdha as i really wanted to write one. So guyz hope u like. And plzz
Prologue
She was in her room all alone. The couple of events that took place in the previous weeks had shaken her from the inside. She couldnt believe that the man she loved cheated her. He never loved her. Y did she fall in love with him?? All these thoughts were making her cry more and more. She didnt want to see his face anymore. The face she wanted to see everyday. she no longer want to see him. "Jalal can never change. He will always remain a Jallad! I hate u more than anything!" cried out JOdha to herself.

Jalal's palace

Jalal was lying down on his bed. He couldnt sleep. He tossed around the bed. The other side of the bed where Jodha used to sleep was empty. His mission was complete but he didnt feel good. He felt as if he had lost a very precious thing from his life. He felt empty. All he could think about was Jodha. All the sweet moments he has spend with her came back to him. He didnt know what was happening to him. " I have made the Rajputs head lower by using Jodha and I won but y am I feeling so bad? JODHA is no more a part of my life and thats the truth!"

So how was it? i will continuw if u guyz like. Silent readers plz write something!! If pm is needed like this post!
>Index</font>
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3652833?pn=5
part 1
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3652833?pn=10
Part 3
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3652833?pn=11Edited by ..Tahniat.. - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
This idea was even in my mind...

But I was not able to pen it down...

Thanks for that...

And it was really awesome...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Arya75

<font color="#9900ff">This idea was even in my mind...</font>


<font color="#9900ff">But I was not able to pen it down...</font>

<font color="#9900ff">Thanks for that...</font>

<font color="#9900ff">And it was really awesome...</font>

Thankx dear!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved the new twist in your story plz update soon ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Sunshine001

<font color="#cc66ff">Loved the new twist in your story plz update soon๐Ÿ˜ณ</font>

Okay I will n thankx
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very nice concept. Please, update soon.
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Sounds really interesting! Excited to read more ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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nice concept
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Interesting..lukin 4ward 4 further updates...:)
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Ooo! Cool concept! :) Update sooon! :D