Originally posted by: preeti.1
gud update ...
sameera nand geet met aur apne pyaar ki baate share ki but they dont know k they loves ssame person ...but i trust maan chahe kuch bhi ho bhale hi wo geet ko apni wofe na maanta ho par uski feelings ko hurt karne k liye kuch bhi galat nahi karega
Originally posted by: preeti.1
is ff ka thora jaldi jaldi update mil sakta he kya?😳
Originally posted by: drashtirockzz
yeh sam ku aae h :'(
i hate her
waiting for next
Originally posted by: doublecross
next part please
waiting dear
its an awesome concept and the story seems quite gripping
please jaldi se continue karo
Part 4
Geet : maan chale
Maan : hmm
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Both sited into car...both are totally silent...
Aaj kitni chupi hai
Itni to tb nhi thi
Jb hum ek dusre ko jante tak nhi the
She looks towards maan many times but not get words to say him...
Maan : geet tum kuch khehna chahti ho
She little smiled and denied...
In this between rain started...and geet screamed "maan stop the car"
He stops the car at side and worriedly asked from her "kya hua geet?"
Geet : maan barish
Maan : ha mujhe bhi dikh rhi hai
Geet : maan chaliye na
Barish mein bigte hai
Maan : geet mujhe
Geet : barish pasand nhi hai
Mujhe pata hai maan
Pr ye barish hamehsa hmare liye bhut khas rhi hai
.
.
She came out from the car...
.
Maan : geet
His take umbrella and came out from car...
Maan : geet ye bin mausam ki barsaat hai
Tum bimaar pd jayongi
Geet : maan ye barish
Kitna khuch chupa leti hai na
Aashu aur pani mein bhi farq hi nhi rhne deti
.
She covers up hurt with fake smile...and said to him
.
Maan asi hi barish mein phli baar aapko
Apne pyaar ka ehsaas huya tha
.
Aapko lag rha tha "Maan singh khurana kaise badal sakta hai"
.
Asi hi barish mein aap firse mere karib aa gye the
.
Maan : geet mujhe kuch yaad nhi
Geet : jaanti hu Maan
precap:- link
( coming soon)
previous part 3 on page 30
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