*COMPLETED*#1!! FF:THE BROKEN BED,Chapters 1 to 11 - Page 92

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: salooni




kya baat hai janab
ab aap bhi shyari karne lage
waah waah

arz hai
isk nai kiya yeh haal
humara
ishq ne kiya yeh haal humara
ki firte rehte hai har ghar
liye apne adhoora dil
iss umeed mai ki kissi
din mil jaye voh
jisse dekh kar
phir se yeh
dil kar udhe
dhak dhak

i know it is
really

thanks for pm


this is di
i not miss
commented back
thsnka for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chalhov

tumse mujhse mujhe tumse hai pyaar par main nahi bataungi but I wont tell .😉 loved the update


Awww! Chalhov! ⭐️Thank you for following my story, liking and commenting!
It makes me so happy!😃
❤️🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sohara

it was too short.😔

i know your busy with you AD, but next time longer update. Promise?
So La was his ex. And Arnav indirectly confessed that she loves Khushi.

I loved how the sherni attacked him in the elevator.
"you two time" just cracked me up.And his sexy answer is always deadly. he knows he is irresistible.
Khushi felt bad when he himself didn't want to drop him. So she didn't even wanted his help.
Anjali is a sweet girl that called her to know she reached home safely or not.
When Arnav heard he met an accident, he just couldn't resist himself and ran to his Khushi.
it was really awesome reading.


Sohara my dear❤️
I would like to promise you a longer update but cant. I am neck deep in sh*t till the 6th
But I promise you an update that is going to be one of my fav⭐️ Cholbey?😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DurgaS

cheerleader.gifWiwee, I loved this chaaapter. 😃Arnav had already broken up with La. 😉 Khushi has an accident, ouch. 😕 But, Arnav came running for her. 😳 And, now rain hug. 😊 Barsaat mein humse mile tum sajan, tumse mile hum, barsaat mein, tak dhina dhin. 😆
So, Anjali was checking Khushi's reaction. Smaaart womaan. 😉 Arnav broke up with La, the day he met Khushi, really? So, was it because of Khushi or was he planning to do that anyway? Or, was he thinking about it, but after meeting Khushi, he finalised his decision? chinscratch.gif


Durgey!⭐️ Not again! Uff! So many questions!😆 You are a sweetheart! 🤗 Muaah!
You will get the answers to your questions but I know you won't be satisfied!😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: IssPKaur

Uff Wiwy! Maar daala!! Restlessness chalega big time. Fikar not. And you really are a serious, effortless writer, aren't you? Aapko pataa hai na?!
My favorite bits:

Khushi was punching furiously at the elevator button

Arnav stared at her for a few seconds nonplussed. Then something floated up in his eyes.

When the lift reached the ground floor he walked out, hands in his pocket, his face stern without so much as glancing at her.

She acknowledged the voice within her that told her she wanted to be alone with him.

Disappointment formed a painful lump in Khushi's throat.

They stood hugging each, a thunder raging within them, making them oblivious to the storm outside.

Kya baat hai! 👍🏼 Bahut impressiya madam bhickeds!!
They flow so smooth and easy, your thoughts!

Aur ye 👏👏...


Please to continue the thunder!!!


I am a seroius, effortless writer! Me! And you like my edit and thunder! Awww!
I need tto make an index of your compliments now Issk
Keep them coming! I am loving it!❤️🤗


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Posted: 11 years ago


kya baat hai janab
ab aap bhi shyari karne lage
waah waah

arz hai
isk nai kiya yeh haal
humara
ishq ne kiya yeh haal humara
ki firte rehte hai har ghar
liye apne adhoora dil
iss umeed mai ki kissi
din mil jaye voh
jisse dekh kar
phir se yeh
dil kar udhe
dhak dhak

i know it is
really

thanks for pm

Thanks for the above Soni! I saw it and then missed it, not you!
Wah wah kya shayari hai! And love your emoticons and gifs!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: wiwy



kya baat hai janab
ab aap bhi shyari karne lage
waah waah

arz hai
isk nai kiya yeh haal
humara
ishq ne kiya yeh haal humara
ki firte rehte hai har ghar
liye apne adhoora dil
iss umeed mai ki kissi
din mil jaye voh
jisse dekh kar
phir se yeh
dil kar udhe
dhak dhak

i know it is
really

thanks for pm

Thanks for the above Soni! I saw it and then missed it, not you!
Wah wah kya shayari hai! And love your emoticons and gifs!


thanks
di
i think you should take rest
its so long
be relax😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: wiwy



kya baat hai janab
ab aap bhi shyari karne lage
waah waah

arz hai
isk nai kiya yeh haal
humara
ishq ne kiya yeh haal humara
ki firte rehte hai har ghar
liye apne adhoora dil
iss umeed mai ki kissi
din mil jaye voh
jisse dekh kar
phir se yeh
dil kar udhe
dhak dhak

i know it is
really

thanks for pm

Thanks for the above Soni! I saw it and then missed it, not you!
Wah wah kya shayari hai! And love your emoticons and gifs!


thanks di
now take rest and relax
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: wiwy


I am a seroius, effortless writer! Me! And you like my edit and thunder! Awww!
I need tto make an index of your compliments now Issk
Keep them coming! I am loving it!❤️🤗




Sweetheart the number of pages you have here, with more coming, you don't need me to tell you this is working! So you keep writing the way you are cos we're all hooked here...and everyone'll keep coming back am sure😊

As for me, lemme tell you that i have HUGE respect for people who can create something with their thoughts and words. I compliment cos it makes me happy to see something take form and evolve! It is the hardest, most challenging thing to do in my opinion. And as you can probably tell by now, i take it very seriously😆 but that's me!


Big hug to you wicked one
🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: wiwy


😃😆 You are so sweet Komal🤗 Sorry for chotu update😳
My Jhansi ki Rani⭐️ I love you❤️ for loving my story . Okay?
I love that word 'okay'! You know why? Barun said it to me during my phone convo with him

Yes I fight with student section people all the freaking time n after that cry on phone saying that I totally hate my life, wanna see you...OMG i am getting emotional, it has been an year I haven't seen her. So m totally dhongi Jhansi ki Rani😆
love u too<3
fine I will add Okay to my Barun anthem, which includes, what the, shut up, Khushi, get out😆

Edited...
Did I just forget Dammit...man I feel like lady Ghajni..lol...
Edited by cheesemad - 11 years ago
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