*COMPLETED*#1!! FF:THE BROKEN BED,Chapters 1 to 11 - Page 86

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Posted: 11 years ago
Asr to arnav ...he can change fast for khushi. Very well written.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks for updating...

awesome chapter
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Posted: 11 years ago
dear a good update. please write longer ones. i really love your story
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg khushi pushed arnav😲

arnav's care 4 khushi


loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
in this update, i'm glad you showed Khushi's restlessness.., and Arnav's anger on being doubted by Khushi about his intentions and charecter!

Whenever feelings get too strong, vulnerability increases and soo the pain at heartbreak, which our Khushi doesn't want thats why she accused him, without thinking much!

But at the end, its him who asks 'khushi tum theek ho na.'
its his presence in which she feeels secured.. Its him who came running to her thinking about her only, forgetting all his anger.. I love this arnav.. A lot ;D
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update ...
I like Arnav said that he break up with lavanya when he first meet her...
Too cute ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
so i m commenting for 1st tym as i just found ur ss today and read it.
ur ss has everything comedy,romance,flirting,passion..and some weirdness..


wen i first read title of the story i thought there will b something in this story...(hey not in that ahem ahem way.as title somewat indicate😆)

and yeah it was.i never read arnav climbing buildings,arshi choosing ahem ahem bed,mamiji's cricket comment..

now story is moving..and i m loving it till now with arshi's romance..looking forward for more...
i think snake shyam has also a role to play in it..wish it is not big..

continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally both have accepted love for each other. Great update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update dear...yar wt is this with TUM THEEK HO...uff how romantic it sounds...loved th update...and the pics u used they r fitting the best to the scene,loved it more:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was so beautiful wiwy, wonderful update. Waiting for the next one👏
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