*COMPLETED*#1!! FF:THE BROKEN BED,Chapters 1 to 11 - Page 66

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha

Wiwy This is for you for your HOT update



Omg
the second pic is soo apt...!!๐Ÿ˜ƒ
amazing dear...๐Ÿ˜ณ

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Posted: 11 years ago
How could I miss such a cute ff...I loved the fact that u have incorporated IPK s beautifully in ur ff
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Posted: 11 years ago

Too Romantic Updateโ˜บ๏ธ

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Posted: 11 years ago
Really really nice n terrific update.

So finally the so wanted kiss happened.

I hope the wedding happens soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
WoW i mean really WoW

Wiwy...you hav outdone yourself this timeโญ๏ธ โญ๏ธ

wat a well written chapter ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

whn Khushi backed out from the kiss...i was lik "you really hav good control to resist his kiss" ๐Ÿ˜†
nd whn she pointed out her reasons Arnav's reaction to tht

have you alighted from some old time machine'. fast forwarded into time?"- amazing...LoL

her thoughts as to why she can't pursue him - tht their worlds were different...made me think...so thr is more to Khushi's life than you've mentioned!!! cuz as a college student...she wouldn hav thought it tht way...so m guessin thrs more to the story
chinscratch.gif!!!

whn she fell into the pool...i was literally ๐Ÿ˜ฒ...i mean i hav always read him savin her no matter wat the situation...but let her fall get wet completely nd ignite the passion even more between them ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ Amazing

Mamiji barging into their room to tell tht she leavin ...is she Mad !!! Khushi is smart...immediately she pulled them out of site ๐Ÿ˜‰

nd their make out...haye...he kissed her palm...nd she couldn resist...she went ahead pecked his lips...he took off the palu...Kissed her lik nvr before โ˜บ๏ธ Lovely

nd Anjali had to sit in the room itself to read the letter...i really hope they don intrude on Arshi...
nd Khushi heard the letter...my heart was fluttering ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Love this line -
For Khushi it was as if a hundred fireworks had burst inside her and she was floating on scented water with roses beneath her feet and stars above her heavenโค๏ธ

Really well written chapter
clap2.gif...their lines were too good...amazing updateโญ๏ธ
fanfic.gif don stop writing ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Posted: 11 years ago
Just read the Whole story and

I LOVED IT

They Kisseed eeeppp *Dancing*
But you cant leave us like this come on

What happened after the kiss

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Did Di and Mami caught them?

Which happened please continue naa

Or We Will die out of curiosity

Also can you please add me in your Pm list?


Pretty pretty please with a cherry on the top

Lots of Love

Marrie x

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Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome chapter, Wiwy! ๐Ÿ‘ I'm glad Khushi ended up kissing Arnav first! You go girl (Both Khushi and you)!! ๐Ÿ˜† I think the temptation was too overwhelming that she couldn't resist! I must say their subsequent kiss was electrifying! My heart went dhak dhak dhak along with our Khushi!! ๐Ÿ˜ณ

I love these lines! โญ๏ธ ๐Ÿ‘
"For Khushi, responding to him was like something ordained by nature, something just meant to be, with no questions asked and no answers expected."
"For Khushi it was as if a hundred fireworks had burst inside her and she was floating on scented water with roses beneath her feet and stars above her heaven..."
Fabulous job on writing Khushi's pov and her reactions!
While they were kissing, Anjali was reading her ma's letter to the daughter-in-law! How fitting and symbolic that is!! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ I like the pace and the progress of the story so far! I love reading every bit of it! Kudos to you, Wiwy, for putting tons of sizzles in our Arshi's chemistry! Yeesss... Eagerly waiting for your next update!
Edited by Katelyn - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: wiwy



Sorry, I don't whom I sent PM and whom didnt๐Ÿ˜•

Next update! Oh! i forgot !๐Ÿ˜ฒ Will start writing one soon๐Ÿ˜†

Keep reading and commenting!๐Ÿค—



its ok
waise i have received a pm frm u fr d first time...

I like to stalk..

Wen i received a pm i thot u mite have updated a new chp...dats y was sad

love dis story

enjoying reading it ๐Ÿ‘
Posted: 11 years ago
Waiting

Waiting

Waiting

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Posted: 11 years ago
wow amazing and awesome update...
simply superb..loved it...

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