Awesome chapter, Wiwy! ๐ I'm glad Khushi ended up kissing Arnav first! You go girl (Both Khushi and you)!! ๐ I think the temptation was too overwhelming that she couldn't resist! I must say their subsequent kiss was electrifying! My heart went dhak dhak dhak along with our Khushi!! ๐ณ
I love these lines! โญ๏ธ ๐
"For Khushi, responding to him was like something ordained by nature, something just meant to be, with no questions asked and no answers expected."
"For Khushi it was as if a hundred fireworks had burst inside her and she was floating on scented water with roses beneath her feet and stars above her heaven..."
Fabulous job on writing Khushi's pov and her reactions!
While they were kissing, Anjali was reading her ma's letter to the daughter-in-law! How fitting and symbolic that is!! ๐๐ผ I like the pace and the progress of the story so far! I love reading every bit of it! Kudos to you, Wiwy, for putting tons of sizzles in our Arshi's chemistry! Yeesss... Eagerly waiting for your next update!
Edited by Katelyn - 11 years ago
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