*COMPLETED*#1!! FF:THE BROKEN BED,Chapters 1 to 11 - Page 64

ArnieBoyBarun

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Posted: 10 years ago

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I am late I think😊

"You are married?" he managed in a whisper.

what will he do then other than whispering😆, he must have almost fainted hearing that.

Miss Touch-Me-Not and Mr. I-Want-To-Kiss you were quiet enjoyable today. The time machine was so good, ha ha. Like her comment on his towel falling off and his besharam reply.

today it was ...😳

Edited by KittenRose - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

#632

🤗❤️o wow that was a super duper kiss :)...loved the whole ambiance which u have created while they kissing ...like hundred fire works,roses and stars wow too good...u have written it beautifully dear,loved it to the core...and last paragraph is just more than awesome...to drink in all of his gussa and give him all of her''pyaar(love)''..👏

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Posted: 10 years ago

#633

lovely

and romantic

love how you connected letter and khushi surrender

tfs

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angeldream14

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Posted: 10 years ago

#634

wowww loved it

hope he doesnt say something stupid aft the kiss

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 10 years ago

#635

wiwy

That was the best update ever...loved each and every part of it.So she gave him a peck and he kissed her hand literally and then Miss Touch me not changed into touch me all over...

Nice ambience of the kissing,Maa's letter,and Mami -Anjali talking while they were busy...Hmmm...nice adventurous kiss👏

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mutermuter

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Posted: 10 years ago

#636

thats nice😊

mami in his room ,omg

she will create a scene if she find out them

haha loving it very much

thnx for pm😊

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wiwy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#637

Originally posted by: angeldream14
wowww loved it

hope he doesnt say something stupid aft the kiss

Thanks for loving it😃

Okay will ensure he zips his mouth after the kiss! What say?

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wiwy

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha
wiwy

That was the best update ever...loved each and every part of it.So she gave him a peck and he kissed her hand literally and then Miss Touch me not changed into touch me all over...
Nice ambience of the kissing,Maa's letter,and Mami -Anjali talking while they were busy...Hmmm...nice adventurous kiss👏

Awww!😳 Thankyou Arshi! ❤️ My guruji says its my best update ever! I am dancing

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Addicted87

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Posted: 10 years ago

#639

They finally kissed...!😳

When Khushi said 'Husband' I was like what the??!? n after reading her explanation I was face-palming...!!!

Anyways Khushi kissed him first and gave him the green signal... How can Arnav possibly resist then?!?!😊

Fabulous update

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wiwy

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: lalarukh
🤗❤️o wow that was a super duper kiss :)...loved the whole ambiance which u have created while they kissing ...like hundred fire works,roses and stars wow too good...u have written it beautifully dear,loved it to the core...and last paragraph is just more than awesome...to drink in all of his gussa and give him all of her''pyaar(love)''..👏

Thankyou so much dearie! That was a super duper comment on my story! Muaaah!😃

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