*COMPLETED*#1!! FF:THE BROKEN BED,Chapters 1 to 11 - Page 63

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: massu91

amazing update loved it
girls like waiting fr d first kiss by der husband do exist...

love hw arnav was controlling himself...

bt i dint like y arnav bought d aukat part here...

m glad khushi dint take dat seriously...

this arnav is who i like...i hope he doesnt distance himself frm her


plsss update d nxt chp soon


Yes, girls like that do exist...are you and I one of them?πŸ˜ƒ
thanks for your comments.
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Posted: 10 years ago
πŸ‘ beautiful update dearπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago

Loved it!

The wait was worth it
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jdd1959

Oh  WIWY     WIWYYY...once  again   u have done  it,  very  well   N   beautifully  written    update.I  liked     d  way   u   blended   d  scene   of  MAMI &  ANJALI      TALKING  ABOUT   "MAA     KI     BAHU"  IN  D   ARNAV'S  ROOM    & OTHER  SIDE  OFF  D  ROOM      ARNAV   ROMANCING     Khushi.

U  r     one  of   d   writer  ,  whose    thread  i  check  everyday   4   new   update.
THANKS   4  D  PM.      LUV  U...





  


Thankyou so much for liking the blending of the scene! I enjoyed writing it! 
You always have such lovely things to say about the SS and me😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Aashisrivastava

Haye re mai mar jawa kya update h yar n d kiss smebody just stop me m floating in the dreamland :-)


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Posted: 10 years ago
wow...it is indeed an awesome update...
at first Khushu denies the kiss and surprisingly Arnav agree on that and hide his frustration y showing his anger on Khushi...the most intense part is while they are having their passionate kiss which by the the way initiate by Khushi   a few feet away from the family and Anjali is reading the letter...as if Khushi is taking away all his anger and pouring love to him..❀️

thanks for the PM
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: cinthiann1758

Wiwy just wonderful.  You can make even his thumb sound so hot!  Loved it.  Want more, more, more!!!πŸ‘


Dil mange more, Cyn ? πŸ˜† Why dont you take my Arshi to Paris, Venice, Goa and Lucknow with your two? πŸ˜† πŸ€—
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rulama

Very interesting. Stopping him from the kiss saying she want her husband to be the one, she kisses him on his lips!

When angrily he kisses and she gives in Anjali reads the letter his mother had written to her Bahu about his anger and how to deal it with love! Amen!


Awww! thanks for the superb gist of the chapter! πŸ‘ 
Do keep reading and commentingπŸ€—
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: tvserial2012

wow...it is indeed an awesome update...
at first Khushu denies the kiss and surprisingly Arnav agree on that and hide his frustration y showing his anger on Khushi...the most intense part is while they are having their passionate kiss which by the the way initiate by Khushi   a few feet away from the family and Anjali is reading the letter...as if Khushi is taking away all his anger and pouring love to him..❀️

thanks for the PM


Thanks for your brilliant observations!⭐️ πŸ€—
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Posted: 10 years ago
tread lightly for ye tread in dangerous waters.  the queen of interruptions is in his room along with blabbermouth mami and these two throw caution to the winds


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