OS: Guilty Heart

😃Edited by MeghnaA - 10 years ago

Nice OS

'thats really interesting... would love to see how the story progresses from here... btw do we also get to see pov of maan

Originally posted by: yappingduck

'thats really interesting... would love to see how the story progresses from here... btw do we also get to see pov of maan

I'll ans you just as soon as I figure out if I will continue it😆 

Nice one.What Geet did was wrong and now she regrets it, regrets her lost love. Hope she gets a chance to redeem her mistake. Also hope you continue this.

nice one
she regrets her doing now
but she can't rectify her mistake
she lost her love
continue soon

Nice. The beginning of journal about how she isnt much into writing journals was very very good, then came the revealations, one after other, first I thought, Maan was her husband but then you surprised me, quite different and realistic why they are separate.

Do continue if possible :-).

Awesome os...plz continue :)

Awesome one, Hope it will have a IInd part too.

painful part ..get hrt maan and maried with someone ewlse ...plz make maaneet one ...waiting to know how story will progress...aesome