Thanks a lot Purvi for always being there... in each part and update. A tight hug for you dear 🤗 🤗Originally posted by: honeygrape
woah!!!!!!!! soo many facts he is realising now...just a week away from her made him think about all those tyms he disappointed her n he had seen them all in her eyes but never acknowledged...she shoud have done this deed earlier...
loved the first part where you wrote about the clouds n stuffs😊loved the comparison between maan n moving clouds...The distance and space was required for him to think and ponder in everything that was forming a big space between them. She too has her own follies in this whole situation both of them are at present, its only that Maan's POV & thoughts are being explored and in front so... 😊Glad you liked that cloud and sea analogue ... I was nervous about it that I'm going too tangent or out of context 🤗omg how did you write all those dance steps Onir...haa... i felt like am seeing her dance in front of my eyesDance is something I love a lot.❤️ Writing those steps were a bit difficult as I wanted to write it a lot simpler for the readers to understand the emotions behind the steps and feel it all, didn't want to make it very technical ... I'm so happy you could visualise it, it makes my efforts feel worth it. Thanks!ohh my God, very very beautiful update my dear...i had my mouth wide open by the end of the part...really i was sitting like that...how do you write so beautifully dear...the relief which he felt and all the emotions she went thru i felt like am also goin thru the same...music is also too good...am sooo happy to have you here dear...thanx a looot😊😊feel like comin in thru my lappy n giving u a tiiighttt hug...😳😃 donno y , but this update made me very very happy...
Thanks! Glad you could visualize it so 😊Originally posted by: Ubiquitos
Awesome! No words!! It was as if they were in front of me!
Yes for once he needs to let go and just feel... you caught on the right pulse of the update 😊Originally posted by: chavvi16
wow i guess all he needs to do is think from his heart
be the maan she fell in love with
or just make her realise that you are still the same maan she fell in love with and married
so close and yet so far
am glad he is somewhere realising what could have gone wrong
yes maan you are what she thinks about all the time
that dance just showed you what you needed to see
so all he has to do now is embrace this
hope it works out
wow those feelings she has for maan came out in the ballet didnt they
Thanks! 😊Brilliant update...!!
Loved all the descriptive paragraphs that you used... superb..
cont soon..
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Thanks! 😊Originally posted by: sudha_gc
Woah !! Realizations on its way!
Awesome update! Loved the intricacy in your writing, specially about the dance.
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