FF: Dhoka Ya Saccha Pyar UPTD22 pa142/143 NOV 16

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Guys, janti hue mere bahut sare wrks pending hai , par kya karu , ye concept mera peecha hi nhi chod raha , i love this concept , its different . Concept is mine fully... Ek gana suna aur ye concept dimmag mai aa gye.. Hpe u all like it..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
PART 1
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
All seat in hall . one person comes there & seats middle in Sofa , all people starts to chant his name, he only raise his hand & ppl stop..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Bhaisaab , ab hame kuch karna hoga , varna vo Suryakant Rawte hamare sare Vote apni aur kheech lega.." One person says..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Bhaisaab , yaha hamare kuch log bhi unhe mane ne lage hai " Another person inform him..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
The person gets up from his seat & says , "Hum vada karte hai , is baar Election mai ham hi jeetnge aur vo bhi bhari Votes se, aap bas apne kaam jari rakhiye.." He says
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
After that he talks to his Party Member.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
After one hour he goes to his room , he is talking with his frends..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Hame kuch baat karni hai , aapse... Akle mai.." He says..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
His frnds goes from there.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Ab wqut aa chuka hai ki aapko kuch karna hoga.." He says to him..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
He just look at him .
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Par kya is khel ka koi fayada hoga? " He ask him..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Kabhi nuksaan hua hai aapka? aur vo bhi mere karan ?" He ask.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
That person about to leave room , but stop & says , " Bas itna dhayn rakhna Sameer ki bazi hame pe palat na jaye.."
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Ji" Sameer says..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Sameer look at his cell  that lays on bed. He pick up it & dial no.. In one ring she pick up call.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Kaise ho?" He ask her lovingly..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Theek , aur aap, khana kha liya?" She ask him in concern.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Mujhe kuch aur baat karni hai " He says seriously.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Kya hua? Sab theek hai na?" She worridly ask him..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" vo... mai... matlab... vo..." He loss for words.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Sameer , plz bol dijiye na , mujhe tension ho rahi hai " She ask him while seating on her bed.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Vo , mai mera matlab tha ki hum ... vo Baba sa meri shadi tay kar di hai.." He inform her slowly .
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Her cell phone fall from her hands , she just look at her cell which is broken into pieces.. She dn't know what to do, she love him very much , she closes her eyes & tears roll down from her cheecks , her heart beating fastly, she knows he also loves her so much... she cry bitterly
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Sameer hears phone fall from her hands , " Hello , Hello "
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
but there is no response from her..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
He end call & put phone aside & smile at himself..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Sameer Damsigh Rathod kabhi nahi harta " he says & start to watch T.V..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
AT her HOME.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Servant comes there to call her for Dinner.  he knock on door , but no response , he slowly open door & enter in her room & yells loudly...
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Vahini ( bhabhi) Vahini jaldi aayie..."
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
One lady comes there & shows her daughter lays in a pool of her own blood.. She cuts her both wrists ..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
She hurridly takes to Hospital by her parents..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Parents are worried for their daughter , they dn't understand why she take such a drastic step. what a reason behind her this step????
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
AT Sameer Rathod's HOME.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Everybody enjying their Dinner. Suddenly Motilal comes there & switch on T.V
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Bhaisaab news dekha aapne?"
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Nahi to "
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" To dekhiye " Motilal says
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Kyu kuch hai kya ?"
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Kuch khaas nahi , bahut khaas ..." Motilal replies..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
All look News..
 
 
 
" Abhi abhi khabar mili hai ki Maharashtra ke sab se bade Neta Suryakant  Rawte ki Beti Ayesha Rawte ne khudkhushi ( Susicide) karne ki koshish ki hai , unki is step ka reason hame abhi tak pata nahi chal paaya , per hamare sutro ke anusaar ye shayd koi emotional baat hai . aur hame ye bhi pata chala hai ki unhone apne kamre hi apni dono haath ko nas kaat kar khudkhushi karne ki koshish ki hai , abhi unki haalat gambhir hai "
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Motilal says , " Bhaisaab sab channles per yahi dekha rahe hai"
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Ha , sab se badi news jo hai unke liye " Sameer says.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Per Sameer baba isme unki koi chal to..." Motilal leave his sentece incomplete when Sameer glares at him..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
After Dinner Sameer watching Movie in his room, when his Dad enter in his room ,
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" To tumhara teer sahi nishane pe laga " His father says..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Sameer just llok at him .
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Ab aage?" His father ask him.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
"  Bas , dekhte jaayie , bata ne mai kya maza?" Sameer says..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
His Father look at him & goes from there.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
HERE IN HOSPITAL
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
One person come runngily & whispers into  his ear
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
He immeadtly wakes up from his seat,
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Ye sach hai??? , agar zhooth hua , to kal ke baad tum paida hue the ya nhi kisi ko pata bhi nahi hoga"
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Nahi ye sach hai , dekhiye" Person shows him some papers.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Ye no. uski ka hai.."
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Uski itni mazal ki hamare beti se... hame use baat karni hai.." person angrily yells..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Suddenely another person comes & inform .
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Dada Ayesha beti ko hosh aa chuka hai"
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
He goes in her room. She is so weak , she silently look at celing , her mother curses her for doing this , but she is just statue , her eyes fix on celing.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
He comes there & caress her hair softly..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Beta , bata do ab , tumhe kisi se darne ki jarurat nhi , jo bhi hai bata do, " he ask her..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Baba , mai ... mai...( her tone changes , she sobs ) hame unke bina nahi jee sakte , aur aap kabhi  bhi hame unke paas jane nhi denge , hum pyar karte hai unse , bahut pyar , "
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
He just look at her & about to go from there but Ayesha agin speaks , " Kisi  aur se hame shadi nhi karnge , use acha to hame marna pasand karnge.. aur aap hame jante hai "
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Tum bhi jaan lo mai tumhara Pita hue.." he says & leaves from there.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
His Mother try to tell her that her father is right , but Ayesha does not want to listen anything.. her Mother also goes from there.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
AT Mid- Night Suddenely  his cell ringing , he answers " Hello Surya kant Rawte "
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
He listens &  gets angry , he immeadtly changes his cloths & go Hospital , his wife is also with them . He reach near her room & slaps hardly on Gurad's cheeck.. & goes inside. He gets angry  when he sees Ayesha happily cover herself in his embrace..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Ayesha " 😑 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Baba , hum jante the aap yaha aaynge , par baba ..."
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
he just raise his  hand  , she stop & look at him..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Ise kaho chala jaye yaha se "
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Ayesha hold his hand tightly & says ,  " Nahi Baba , hum apni jindagi ko apne se dur nahi jane denge... Ye ... ye Pati hai hamare , "
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Precap :
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Ayesha suno "
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Maa , plz vo hamare Pati hai aur unke khillf hame kuch nahi sunege"
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Bahut buddhu hai tumhari beti  , sirf do chaar philophsy ki baat kahi , aur pad gayi mere pyar mai , kya baache paida kiya hai aapne..."
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Aaap hame yaha se le chayie , Sameer ab hum yaha nahi rehenge.." 

 


 
                                        
                                       INDEX  
 
 
 
PART 1 - PAGE 1
 
PART 2 - PAGE 4 & 5
 
PART 3 - PAGE 8
 
PART 4 - PAGE 11  &12 & 13
 
PART 5 - PAGE 17
 
PART 6 - PAGE 19
 
PART 7 - PAGE 21 & 27
 
CS OF PARENTS - PAGE 24
 
PART 7 - PAGE 27
 
PART 7 - PAGE 28
 
PART 8 - PAGE 34
 
PART 9 - PAGE 38 & 39
 
TEASER - PAGE 48
 
PART 10 - PAGE 51 , 54  , 55 , 56
 
PICS - PAGE 55
 
PART 11-
 
PART 12 - PAGE 68 & 69
 
PART 13 - PAGE 72
 
PART 14 -
 
PART 15 -
 
PART 16 -
 
PART 17 -
 
PART 18 - PAGE 100
 
PART 19 - PAGE 103 , 104 , 105 , 106 , 109
 
PART 20 - PAGE 127 , 128
 
PART 21- PAGE 133 ,134
 
PART 22 - PAGE 142 143
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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