un named os par 3 pg 4 NOV 23

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She turn & looks at her baby who is sleeping peacefully. She smile at her. she exactly looking like her father , his hair colour , his skin colour , his anger , his facing , only eyes like her , she goes to kitchen & starts to do her wrk.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Hmm Maharani so gyi hai tab tak sab kar deti hue " she talks to herself..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
She about to complete her wrk , when she hears her cry , she immeadtly wash her hands & dries it compltely with napkin.. She goes to bedroom & sees her crying bitterly..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
She tieds her loose hair in a high pony while talking to her baby..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Oh na na dekho Mumma aa gyi.." she remov her chappls & seats besides baby , she takes baby in her lap..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Oh , bhookh lagi.."
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
She take one large towel & place it on her shoulders  she open her dress buttons & take her baby under towel..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
She sees baby's feets .
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" hmm nails kafi bade ho gye hai , cut karna hoga "
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Baby starts to hit her with her little legs ,
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Samu no..."
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
After sometime she look at her baby , who is try to remove towel.. She buttone up her dress & then removes towel..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Ab khush mera baccha "
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
She take her on her shoulder & starts to pacing into room.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Baby holds her mothers hair & playing with it..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Chalo ab hum khlete hai " she took her into hall . & places one large bedshheet on floor & put her baby on that , with her toys..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
She sees news , " kya ho raha hai is desh mai " she angrily says..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" ek Coffee pee  leti hue. " with that she goes kitchen & stars to prepare Coffee , but she also peep in hall to check her child , who plays thr..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
She take her Coffee Mug & comes into hall.. & sees baby she is not there..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
She immeadtly put her Mug on Sidetable " Abhi to yahi thi " suddenely she sees her baby goes near shoe rack..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Oye , kaha chali Madam , Papa ko aane mai badi der hai"
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Baby just blables somthing " uuu aaa mmm"
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Chalo Papa ko call karte hai "
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
She takes her in her arms & pick up phone & call him..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
He sees call id & pick immeadtly..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Ha bolo"
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Sameer aapki Princess uth gyi , aur aapko dhund rahi hai.."
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Rathod smile at that..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Ayesha use bolo Papa jaldi aayenge "
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Dedede diii" Baby blabling again..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Suna bol rahi hai , jaldi aao" Ayesha says..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Sameer smile at that ,
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Ha , bas kaam khatam , aur Sameera ke Papa uske saamne.." Sameer Rathod answers..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
He keep phone & sees Arjun talks over phone..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Ha Ariya aaj dineer karne bahar jaayenge , acha Maa nahi aayegi , ok Shree Uncle bhi chelnge , ae Maa ko aise bure nahi bolte , ok baba jaldi aa jaayenge.."  with that Arjun keep phone & dial  another no.. " Ha Riya , kyu daata use , to vo abhi bacchi hai , to kya hua , vo sirf 6 saal ki hai.. "
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Rathod smile at him.. " kya hua?"
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" kuch nhi Maa ghar saaf karti reheti hai aur ye ghar ganda karti reheti hai.." all smile at that..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
"Aur tumhara kya haal ?" Arjun ask him
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Kuch nhi , bas chal raha hai , abhi abhi ek nayi baat sekhi hai , kuch bhi bola Maa ne ki na na karke sir hila do aur Papa ne kaha to zhat se maan lo , aur to aur Ayesha kuch zabardasti se khila de to throw kar deti usper.." Rathod says smilingliy..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Arjun smile at that
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Aur vo crawling karne lagi?" Arjun ask him
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Ha , dinbhar vahi chalta reheta hai , ek bhi cheez neeche nhi rak sakte , Ayesha ne to pura kitchen ka interior hi change kar diya , aur Sameera to jo haath aaye use phek do , Ayesha laakr rakhgi vo cheez theek se to phir se phek do... "  Rathod anwers..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Ha Sam are Ariya bhi ekdum same , Riya itna ghussa hoti thi usper, aur vo Madam aaram ghar mai  paper phad dalti ... " Arjun says
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Are pata hi kal to Ayesha ki ek Nailpaint ki bottole  phek di , aur jab Ayesha use daat rahi thi , to use aise dekh rahi ki " i dn't like it"  Rathod informs Arjun..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Sir Sameera baat karne lag gayi?" Shree ask him..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Ha thoda thoda , sirf Papa , Mama , Maa itna hi aata  hai , per sab ke naam bhajan karti hai dinbhar..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Ha , Sir pichli baar ghar aaya tha , tab dekha tha , Mama , mama bolkar mujhe paresha kar diya tha..." Shree says..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Arjun & Sameer smile at him..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Ye to kuch bhi nahi , jab vo bolne lagegi na Sam tab dekh , tera phone bhi din bhar aise hi bajete rehega , aur har time Maa ki nayi complaint darj hogi teri saamne.. Arjun says & picks his cell ,
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Ha Aru . acha , beta aise nhi karte , Per vo sabzi achi hoti hai , pata hai , aap ekdum strong ban jaaoge , plz abhi kho lo vo sabzi , raat ko hum bahar jana hai na.." Arjun try to convince his daughter.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Here Sameer  cell also rings.. He picks cell & ans
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Sameer ufff ye Samu bhi na... "
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Ayesha what happen?"
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Sam usne aaj T.v & uska remote tod diya.."
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" what ? "
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Ha . Tv ka remote liya & seedha t.v pe phek diya , acha aate time naya t.v lekar aana.." with that Ayesha keep her phone..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Kyu hua Sir ?" Chotu ask him..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Kuch nhi Sameera ne T.V tod diya" Rathod answers..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Arjun smile at that..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
At night Rathod goes home with T.V.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Sameera  sees box in his hand & widens her eyes
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Kuch nahi beta Mumma ke liye gift.."
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Rathod & Ayesha unpack box & adjust & set T.V
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Sameera looks at big pack & bags around & sees her parents busy at somthing. so she haiiply goes there & try to hold on that pack.. finally she hold on pack ..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Ayesha sets T.V channles & Rathod look at old T.V ..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Suddenely Ayesha held him he look at her & she pointed him towards Sameera who try to stand with the help of box..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Rathod about to go near her , but Ayesha stop him.. Sameera try to stand on her feets , but she fails . she angrily mumbles somthing " da da da ada iii uuu "
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Ayesha smile at her & whispers in to Rathod's ear " Dekha bahi se Dam it... "
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Both smile at her. Finally Sameera stnds on her feets. Ayesha & Rathod happily look at thr daughter , who stnds on her feets & look at them smilingly.. Suddenely Sameera 's gaze  fell down to catch somthing & then she give them " oops " expression..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Dekha na , kitni nakhre karti hai yeh.. " Ayesha complanits Rathod..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Kya Ayesha sirf Su su ki na mere baby ne.." Rathod says & goes near Sameera , he pick her & remove her dress.. 7 takes her in room.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Ayesha just look at them...
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
" Hmmm ab chalo Mumma sab saaf karna hai , kyu ki papa aur beti to chale gaye maje karne.. "  
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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