OS: INTEZAR...

Ek khwahish,... Jo rehgayi hai aadhoori...
Ek ummeed,
Jo ho na saki poori...

Ek dua,
Jo usne na suni...
Kyu ye hua...
Dard hame diya...
More piya
Haa, mana,
ye hamari hai khata...
Qubool hai hame,
teri di hui har ek saaza...

Wada karte hai,
ae sanam,
bhula denge tere har gham ko,
Jo hamne tha diya...

Hoo...
Aye khuda,
ha khuda...

Mafi de,
Ham nahi bewafa.
Ham to haar gaye,
tere pyaar se.
Aise muh na mor,
ab sath na chor,
Haa ji maante hai,
ho hi gaya...
Tujhse pyaar,
ab tu to dil ka karar...

Tujhpe lutadu mai apna jaan o dil,
Aise ruthe na raho, O piya...

Ab to ham tere hai hamsafar,
Ham pe kar zara Aetbaar...

Khayr wada karte hai,
tujhpe kardenge duniya nisaar...

Khayr..
jabtak ruthna hai ruthle,
yakeen hai manalenge...

ya phir kar lenge
Intezar...

Agar tune kia hamse itna,
Kya ham nahi kar payenge,
thoda sa Intezar...??


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Intezar: {Offeretory refused, want unquenched...}Edited by Sumu4JayD - 11 years ago

It had been 7 months now that day when she swallowed the XOra12, miraculously she had been saved but she was in coma.
Still, silent, sleeping...

that ill-fated day had finaly managed to break his shell...

the thought of losing her, who penetrated his soul was too much for him to bear he finaly gave in to his heart...

yes!! He loved her!!!
**********
It had become almost a daily routine for him, at sunset he would go to the hospital, just to see her.
he would change the flowers, and recite the Ganesh Vandhana for her, knowing it was her usual time for prayer...
After the recital he would sit for hours holding her hands and talking to her,
until they called for him.
Before leaving he would dutifully peck her lips and apply 'Sindoor'.

yes, sindoor...
he had even changed her surname to Rawte...
claiming to be her husband.
he knew she wouldnt mind, but be so happy!!
he was finally reciprocating.

yes Arjun Rawte had truly fallen in love again,
and maybe this was truer still

Wow somu...nt bad...short nd sweet...i luv it...

_@_

this was any other day, he was in the hospital reciting, when her fingers twitched...

his heart stopped at that moment.
was she finally going to come back??
He called for the doctor who came rushing in...
he did some checkups...
Arjun looked at him expectantly...

Ar: doctor??
Doc: Mr. Arjun, something has triggered her, par shayad ye waisa response nahi hai to indicate to something...

Arjun bowed his head, devastated.
the doc came forward n put a hand on his shoulder..
Doc: hosla rakhiye, atleast she responded...
he gave an encouraging look n left...

Akhir kab lautogi riya kab??
he gazed at her with tears brimming out...

***********
Tere har jhalak mein dikhe wo rab,
Tere naam ko hi dua kahe...
Tu pohonch gaya mere rooh tak,
Ab tujhse kaise juda rahey...??

********
he wiped his tears, kissed her and smiled.

No matter how long she took!
He will wait...

PYAAR TO WOH AAG HAI, JO JALAKAR BHI EK MITHAS CHORH JAYE,
EK MEHEK CHORJAYE...!
*The end* <3

Originally posted by: Swaronvrushan

Wow somu...nt bad...short nd sweet...i luv it...

Thnx amit!!

1 more part updated.

P.S sugestions!!!!?
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Originally posted by: Sumu4JayD

Thnx amit!!

1 more part updated.

P.S sugestions!!!!?
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hmmm i m impressed somu...tht was indeed beautifully written...sad bt a complete ending...nd suggestion...naa u write perfect sweeto...

Originally posted by: Swaronvrushan

hmmm i m impressed somu...tht was indeed beautifully written...sad bt a complete ending...nd suggestion...naa u write perfect sweeto...

thnx Amit!!!!!!
*me going jumping japak*
😃
😉 🤣 😳
um...
ab tak sirf tum hi ho ek jisne comnt kia hai Big B!!!

lets wait 4 my behna company.

*looking at the watch n impatiently waiting*
😡

Behna...
It was a very swet,emotional and a beautiful story.
Loved it.
PS: name this OS: Intezaar.

write more on Ariya.
love this Os very much,
really very nice.

Originally posted by: sumbulqaiser

write more on Ariya.
love this Os very much,
really very nice.

sure di,
n thnx.

P.S sugestns..???
n do hit the LIKE butn please.
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