OS:Ek Nayi Zindagi(Epilogue-B in pg7) *COMPLETED*

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She was sitting on the park's bench.

She was quiet.Silent tears rolled down from her eyes.She looked so serene and calm.

She closed her eyes and let the remaining tears flow down.

She needs to bring out all the bottled up sadness,that she kept inside her heart.

Her only way to let those pain out,is to cry,but,she didnt have a shoulder,where she can keep her head and cry her heart out.

She still remembers the day,when,she took the bullet,which was shot for Arjun,while solving a human trafficking case.

She still remembers the day,when she saw a smile on the girl,Naina's face.

She still remembers that day,when,she lost the ability to walk and write.

Today,when she remembers that day,she shudders from the core,but,she feels happy,that,she gave Naina a new life,by,sacrificing her own life.

Yes,she was none other than Research Specialist of ETF,Riya Mukherjee.

Suddenly,she felt a hand on her shoulder.
It was Naina,who was saved by Riya on that day.

After that incident,Naina became really close to Riya.

Once Arjun shouted on Riya for unknown reasons,which led Arjun speak ill of Riya's family.

This happened after Naina was saved by Riya.

Naina couldnt take this insult of her Riya di.

Yes.

Naina considered Riya,her saviour,her elder sister and her best friend.Naina knew each and every single detail of Riya and her family.

Naina became really sad when she heard that Riya's parents were no more.

Naina: How dare you,ACP Arjun? Aap hote kaun ho mere Di ke baare mein aisa kehne wale? Aap jante bhi hai,aap kya keh rahe thhe aur kiske baare mein? Riya di ki parents bachpan mein guzar gaye hai.Riya di anath ashram mein pali bari hai,phir bhi,unke paas wahi sanskar hai,jo ek maa baba apne bacche ko dete hai.Aur,kaun kehta hai ki,Riya di mere upar bojh hai? Riya di meri aur meri family ke upar bojh na thi aur nahi hogi.She is my elder sister,got that? Ayinda,agar mere Di ke baare mein kuch kaha,toh,mujhse bura koi nahi hoga.

Saying that,Naina sprinted out of ETF.

Riya knew her touch.It was her Naina.
Naina: Di,aap yahaan kya kar rahi hai?
Riya: Kuch nahi,Naina.Bas aise hi baithi hu.Lachar larki ki tarha jee rahi hu.Sab kuch hokar bhi,mere paas kuch bhi nahi hai.Maa,Baba aur tum ho mere paas,par,pyaar karne wala koi nahi hai.Shayad,kisi galti ki saza de rahe hai Bhagwan mujhe. Tu bata,tu kaisi hai? How is Alina?
Naina:Aap thik ho toh main thik hu.Alina bhi acchi hai.Bas,har waqt aapke baare mein bolti rehti hai.Apni maasi ki ladli jo hai.Di,aap udaas mat ho.Apne jo mere liye kiya,woh toh,koi apna bhi nahi karta.Main janti hu,ki,aap ajke din yahaan har roz aati hai,apne dil ko sukoon dene keliye,apne mann ki shanti keliye,kyunki,aaj hi woh din hai,jahaan apne Arjun ji keliye goli apne upar li thi aur mujhe bachaya bhi thha.Di,main aaj bhi aapka shukriya kaise adaah karu?
Riya: Aisi baat nahi hai,Naina.Bas socho,ki,agar,usdin tere jagah main hoti,toh,toh kya hota?Main ss baat se bohut khush hu,ki,tu sahi salamt hai.
Naina: Di,aapka yeh ehsaan main zindagi bhar nahi chuka paungi.Apne mujhe ek nayi zindagi di hai.Aapka bhi haq hai apki khud ki zindagi jeene ki.
Riya: Nahi,Naina.Woh haq mujhse bohut pehle chheen chuka hai.Mujh jaise larki se,jo chal phir bhi nahi sakti,kaun pyaar karega?Kaun karega mujhse shaadi? Main toh usski bhi kabil nahi hu.
Naina consoles her...



So,how was the concept?
Should I continue with it?



Index:

Ch1-Pg 1
Ch2-Pg 2
Epilogue: Part A-Pg 4

Epilogue(Last Part): Part B-pg7Edited by zebbie0504 - 10 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yyeeyyy... Me first!

Concept is really good... And zebbie, I've read almost all of your Arjun and ArIya works... They are awwsome!

Continu soon dear. And yeh, if possible, then don't make it a FF. Make it a SS. Regular update karo, aur time pe khatam karo. The concept is really vry nice. Hang karke maat rakhna...ok?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Di rula diya..
Naina is really sweet.and riya ko kya hua tha..
Jaldi continue karo di..
Intresting hai story..
And naina ne arjun par chillya..
Arjun har waqt kuch na kuch karta hai..
And sab ko rula deta hai..
Huh..
Pls continue..
Luv u di.
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nice concept 
continue soon..
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hey nice one zebbie. Good to see u back with ur writings. Really missed it. Nice concept n continue soon.
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lovely concept...
loved naina and her bonding with riya...
feeling bad for riya... :( she lost the ability to walk...
love how naina was trying to cheer her up...
continue soon...
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Omg di
so emotional
lov it
nyc title..!
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Very emotional. And ya do cntinue.
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fantastic concept.

continue soon.
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Ch 2.

Naina consoles Riya.

Naina:Aap kyun aise sochti ho?
Riya:Naina,tum bohut acchi ho.Mujhse behtar kaun jaane adhure pyaar ka dard,kyunki,"Pyaar ka dard sirf wohi samajh sakta hai,jiska pyaar adhura reh gaya ho".
Naina: Di,aisi baat nahi hai.Accha,chalo,ek game khelte hai.Aap apne aakhein bandh karo,aur,jiska chehra apke aakhon ke samne aaye,wohi hoga apka saccha pyaar,kyun ki,har pyaar ki kahani adhuri nahi rehti.

Riya was a bit confused,when she heard Naina's last words.But,to keep Naina happy,she let in to her demands.

Riya closes her eyes and the only image she sees of,is,Arjun,her Arjun.A series of moments is replayed in her mind,their first meet,their first case,their first fight,she making Cutting chai for him,etc etc.

Suddenly,the scene of that unfateful day is played in her mind.She clenches her fists tightly.She is feeling uneasy.Sweat beads were visible on her face.Suddenly,Naina observes that the paralysed hand of Riya starts moving.She is shocked.She turns behind and signals the whole ETF team to come,especially,Arjun.

Naina signalled Arjun to stand behind her.Arjun followed her orders.

Riya clenched her fists tightly.Her eyebrows were knitted together.

Suddenly,she let out a shout.

"Arjunnn..." Riya shouted,not realizing that she raised her paralysed hand and was standing on her feet.

Everybody,who observed this,were shocked to the core,to see their Riya safe and sound.

Riya was sweating profusely.She,then,realized,that,
she was standing on her both feet and her paralysed hand moved.

Naina ran towards Riya and hugged her tightly.Both of them broke down,in tears of happiness.

After a while,they broke the hug.

Naina: Di,aap bilkul thik hogayi ho.Aap phirse dourne lagengi,phirse likhne lagengi.Bhagwaan ka lakh lakh shukriya ki mere Di ko thik kardia.

Naina observed that,Riya was still trembling with fear.

Naina cupped Riya's face.

Riya(scared and trembling):Na..Na..Naina... Wo..wo.. Ar..r..jun... Unhe k..k..uch nahi h..hua hai..Woh yahin hai,mere paas...Unhe mehsoos karsakti hu.
Naina(wiping Riya's tears):Aapne bilkul thik kaha.Aakhir kar,apka pyaar jeet gaya.Haan,Arjun ji ko kuch nahi hua hai.Aur,aapne sahi mehsoos kiya hai.Aapke Arjun wahaan hai(pointing towards him).

Arjun was standing,with a sweet smile,adorning his lips,with arms wide open to hug his Riya,tightly.

Riya turned to see him,but,she also saw the whole ETF team over there.Each and everyone came and hugged her.Rathod and Ankita gave her a bear hug and blessed her.Shree,Chotu and Ayesha gave Riya a big Hug.

Yes,Riya was smiling like never before.She was so happy to see her team mates back.Her smile made Arjun smile more.

As the hugs were done,she saw slowly started walking towards Arjun.She was only a feet away from Arjun.She couldnt hold her tears back,and,crashed into Arjun,hugging him tightly.

Arjun felt complete,at last.Arjun also hugged Riya with the same passion.He drowned his head into her thick,long black hair,smelling her freshly shampooed hair.

On the other hand,Riya hid herself in the most safest place of this whole world,that is,in Arjun's heart.

Naina,Alina,Rohan,and the whole ETF team were the witness of this beautiful re-union of two hearts,which was seperated earlier,because of distance.

People truly say,that,Distance makes the heart grow fonder.

Naina signalled the others to come in the farmhouse,which is just five minutes away from the park.
Except,Arjun and Riya,all left for the farmhouse,leaving a SUV for them.

After a while,both,Arjun and Riya broke the hug.Arjun carressed her cheek with the back of his palm and wiped off the tears from Riya's eyes.And,then,placed a soft kiss on Riya's forhead and,on her eyes.

After so many days and months,she felt relieved.She felt in heaven in Arjun's arms.

Then,they noticed that they were alone in the park.

Arjun thought of making Riya laugh.
Suddenly,ACP karomance wala dimaagh ki balti jal gayi.

Arjun cleared his throat to grab Riya's attention.

Riya looked at him,intently,and,a sweet eyelock hua.They were looking into each other's eyes,intently.Silent interactions were taking place through their eyes.

Arjun put his finger underneath Riya's chin and pulled her towards him.

Riya closed her eyes to save this beautiful moment in her mind and conscience.

"Meri taraf dekho,Riya.I wish to drown in those beautiful doe shaped eyes of yours.I want to spend my whole life with you,Riya.I want to be the father of my children.I love you,Riya.I really do.Main vadaa karta hu,ki,main tumhe zindagi ki sari khushiyaan dunga.I promise from the bottom of my heart.Kya tum mujhse shaadi karogi?" Arjun proposed to Riya.

Riya was surprised to see her love proposing her.She felt so happy and elated.She immediately nodded her head in a YES.

Arjun and Riya were both very happy,because,they are going to start a new phase of Life,"Ek Nayi Zindagi."

Precap: Epilogue.Edited by zebbie - 11 years ago