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Posted: 11 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: PaintedSky

Bookmarked! will read :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: tanubag

Nice update. πŸ˜Š


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 8

 

Next day in college,

 

Maan and Geet came together in his bike.They walked into the college holding hands together..

Whole college saw them together. All girls and are boys were jealous to find them

together .Girls want to be with the most handsome dude and boys tried their luck to be with the princess of the college but failed. Some are very happy to see them together..

Pinky :"They looked Amazing together. "

There was someone who is not at all happy with the turn off event. Rage & anger flooded through him.He is none other than Dev.. He cant see Geet with anyone. When he first saw Geet he had huge crush on her. Days have past and Dev's feelings towards Geet developed.

 

Maaneet sat down in the canteen with their friends.

Meera : "You guys look so sweet together. The most of the college talked about you two."

 

Pinky : "sahi kaha Meera ne …You two are like, Made For Each Other."


Geet smiled and looked at Maan who gaze her intently..

Dev : "You never Know what happened.."


Geet  looked at Dev Who smirked. He looked At Geet up and down and licked his Lips. Geet looked away she felt disgusted the way he looked at her.

 

After college ,

Maan stopped his bike in a Hill Top…

"Wow Maan, the place is soo beautiful." She squealed with delight."

"Hmmm..and peaceful also, When I feel lonely I come hare, Ahe koi nehi ata."

Geet looked at Maan's eyes which has pain in them.. She tip toed and kiss Maan's eyes one by one..

Geet hugged him and he hugged her back..

"You will not leave me na Geet?  I love you so much..I can't leave without you"

"I am scared of happiness geet  it always snatched from me..You will not go away from me na?"

Geet felt he insecure about him so he try to sooth him..

"I will never go away from you maan.. I love you Maan.. jiteji main upse kabhi dur nehi jayungi."

Maan interrupted Geet with a sweet and long passionate kiss on her lips.It lasted so long, Geet kissed him back.


Maan slowly pulled away..and rested his forehead over her forehead..

He closed his eyes remembering the taste of her sweet lips..


Precap : Leap..


  

So how was it. My fingers crossed for the story. As m first time writing something  here.

Hope you like it. Will be waiting for your likes and comments.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
nice part
hate dev cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
lovely part

maaneet kissed

hate dev

continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
iss dev ka kuch karo...kabab mein haddi...

awesome n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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there is separation on the way...

the way there confession was so smooth and easy that it gave me idea that something sure will happen...

Dev is going to do something...hate him...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 11 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: butterfly.tanu


I give update regulerly dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: suhaaana

nice part
hate dev cont soon

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