New SS: A Destiny Of Love, Part 20/Page 54 - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
nice story line

can u please add link in index it will be easy to read
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awesome story

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can u please help me ...
how can i  add link in index plz...i tried it but..not getting sucess in this...
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Originally posted by: butterfly.tanu

<font color="#ff6600">can u please help me ...</font>

<font color="#ff6600">how can i add link in index plz...i tried it but..not getting sucess in this...</font>

just like u posted in daily ffs thread
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Thanx all who like my story and comment on it...
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Part 4

 

Before we said goodbye that evening, Maan asked me out on a date again. Geet is delighted to say  yes, Geet is not sure if romance or just friendship was on the cards. For her part she was absolutely dying to find out more about this charming, enigmatic man.

"Soo"

"okey"

"Yesss" Maan's heart dance happily'

Geet : .  .  .

"Umm'"He giggled'"Well..errr.."

" Yeah,um'I gotta go..Bye.." Geet said shyly..

She waved and maan watched geet go into her house.He saw her smiling and thought

"She is MY GIRL."

 

I always think what's to life, why should I care?

You bring light to the eternal darkness of my soul forever.

I began to see and understand the taste of love,

Now, my heart  knows who you are.

I cant get my mind off her,

It leaves me awe,when my ears are met with her laughter.

My mind is longing for your love,

Love you, is the best feeling my words cant describe.

( Poem By Me)

 

Geet just rushed upstairs happily,She could not stop smiling.She dance around.

 

Rano (Geet's mother) :"Beta , Why r you soo happy for??

"Nothing Mam" she looked down..

"Okey beta abb fresh hoke jaldi niche aja tera khana laga deti hu. Dekh aj tu kitni der kardi aneme.Abse college se jaldi nikalna"

"Okey Mom"

 

Next day in Canteen,

Geet and her friends chatting and taking their lunch when maan join them'

Geet turned and see him staring at her,he was smiling.His smile was beautiful , thought geet. She smiled back and blushed a little. he winked, She choked on her food and Maan started laughing. Dev and Pinky looked at each othe confused.

Meera : "Geet , What was all that?? I saw Maan smile and wink at you."

Geet : "Hmm..nothithing..We are just friends."

Meera : "If you say soo."


Hope you like it. Will be waiting for your likes and comments.

 Love you all

Edited by butterfly.tanu - 11 years ago
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very sweet and interesting story...

I have send buddy request...

please pm me whenever u update...
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nice updates
loved it...
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lovely update

maan wink

geet choked
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Hey lovely update & maan😉