New SS: A Destiny Of Love, Part 20/Page 54 - Page 23

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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow amazing update..
so romantic...
luved it.. continue soon
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loved the update specially maneet moment n the confession...
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thanx and a big hug who like the story and comment on it...
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Part 15



Maan was lying on Geet's lap and  in  moonlit night looking at the innocent face of geet.. 

 "Aaj ghar nahin chalna hai kya???Raat ke 12 baj gaye hain aur Janab ki ankhoon main neend he nahin. "

 "Aaj ke baad yeh neend kise ayega." 

Geet (bholi bante hue): kyun ??? aisa kya ho geya hai jo aapko neend nahin aayegi. 

"Mera matlab ke ab akele neend kise aayegi." 


Her jaw dropped listening to the shameless comments of maan😲

"Maan ab sach much der ho rahi hai chalo na.."

"come I will drop you home"
"
 umm!!"
Geet get in maans bike..

geet hugged him good bye 
maan whispered in her ears..."Love u Jaan"
 
geet blushed  "Me too" & pulled away from the hug
☺️

.she sneaks inside her room
rano comes in  "Beta, Party kaisi rahi?"

"Achi thi Mamma"

"Or Maan"😉

"Mamma.."She whined..

 "Me too tired Mamma Good Night.."

Rano smiled at her Payari Guria kissed her forehead
she smiled & slept back


 

. At morning it is 6'o clock. Pinky open her eyes her head is on Dev chest.

He wrapped his arms on her waist tightly in the fear of loosing her. She looked her self and Dev. she closed her eyes with shame. Her hole body is paining.  some of the wounds are still  bleeding. Plenty of marks are left on her body .

she came from his grip.. she covered her self from bed spread. There are too much of blood stains on spread. Tears are rolling thinking of her faith. 

She looked at Dev, He is sleeping like kid.

she has gone to the washroom, locking herself in anguish,, she sank in the ground,,, water started pouring on her,,  the night was flashing again n again in her mind,,, soon pinky's tears wiped of with the water' She cried and cried,, 😭😭

but then she thought,

"why there is pain knowing that he don't love me,,I love him he didn't said that he loves her.. it her fault her to submit to her love.."

Dev got up with a heavy head,..

he felt a lump in his heart when his eyes fell on the blood strains on the duvet' it was her 1sttime..for him she lost it..She was pure and its him who have stolen it
Pinky kept a lemon juice..  she didn't want to say anything'

 She try to walk away...

"I am sorry" he pleaded
He held her from back 

mujhe pata nahi  kya ho raha hai. I just go crazy when I saw geet with maan. Main use bahat pyar karta hu. I know I am wrong, mujhe tumhare saat aisa nehi karna chaiye tha.but i m helpless to this heart which only beats for her. "

his eyes fell on her red brushes and her swollen lip,

his heart sunk, he inhaled deeply He closed his eyes in pain' what have he done

 

Dev looked into her cold & emotionless eyes ' "I am really sorry"

 the eyes that only make him more guilty'. 

" I even want to stop thinking about her , but  I just can't stop thinking about her."

 Pinky looked away How much ever she wants to stay away from him she is not able to, her feelings just get back to take care of him, worry for him... 

"She doesn't even want to talk to me now- a- days."

He hugged from the waist burring his face in her stomach'crying like baby'😭

 

 

 She wiped her tears & straightens her self. Helped him to rise. She know that Geet loves Maan but she cant see her Dev like this..

I feel you should try to impress her. I will try to help you. "

 He dropped his head in guilt "why r you doing this for me especially what I have done to you yesterday it is a sin!!!" 

she turned away & wiped her eyes," because I want to see you happy. and You are my best friend Dev, Atleast yeh to kar sakti hu na main tumahare liye'"

He hugged her tightly & thanked her ..

 



Sorry for late update, I was busy with my Exams..so couldn't come online when came... when i get time net wasn't in my favor...😡

So how was it. 

Hope you like it. Will be waiting for your likes and comments.

Love you all⭐️

Edited by butterfly.tanu - 10 years ago
Pumpkinseed thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update

maaneet chota sa moment was awesome


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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update. But i don't like this dev . 
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update
hope nothing bad will happen btw maaneet
cont soon dear
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Posted: 10 years ago



yaar iss Pinky ke liye to hadd ho gayi...

she loves Dev and can't see him sad but how can she do this with Geet...

she very well knows that Geet loves Maan and Maan loves Geet... ..watching her own pain of Love how can she saw any other person in pain...will she get happiness watching Maan-Geet separated and in pain... how can she help Dev to separate two lovers...so pathetic...she should make Dev understand that he should forget Geet because she don't love him...

very interesting update...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 10 years ago
fantastic updtae dear:)

superb:)
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nice update
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