Dil ka kya kasoor Ariya ff imp. Note Pg42

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey m here with new idea. Hope u will like this one also. Here all the members r same to current flow showing. Arjun has changed alot after sikander death. He had moved on. Riya is not in the team. Arjun nowadays smiles n sometimes join in chat with them. All thinks this change came after sakshi's entry but there r some secrets hidden from others. No one has any idea about it. Riya is missed by all of them. But couldn't voice it out. For them she is dead. But who knows what fate has written. Sakshi has started having soft corner for akdu boss. Raesha r seeing each other.

There r many things hidden in past. The only two people knows r the secret in itselfn it's confined person. The secret will be revealed but it will effect many lives in many ways.

Here goes my concept. This is just concept right now will write more later after my exams. Hope u like it. Plz do comment... Hehehehe... suggest name plz
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow interesting concept  yr...!!!
continue jaldi jaldi...!!! eagerly waiting for the first part...!!!😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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index:-

chapter 1- page1
chapter2- pg4
chapter 3- page 6
chapter 4(a) &(b)- page 8
chapter 5- page 10
chapter 6- page 12
chapter-7- page 14
chapter-8- page 16
chapter-9- page 17
chapter 10- page 18
chapter 11- page 22
chapter 12- page 23
chapter 13- page 25
chapter 14- page 27
chapter 15- page 31
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting concept...update soon after ur exams, ok?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Gud starting dr pls update soon nd best of luck 4 ur exams
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Posted: 11 years ago
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intresting concept dr.

looking frwrd to it.

riya is there right.

best of luck fr ur exams.

continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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here is the first one:

Chapter-1

One person is sitting in a dark room where only moonlight can penetrate that lit the room.. There u can see a man sitting on the floor surrounded by the photos of a girl who is seen doing some mischief or some serious face with frown n we can see she was not aware of the photo been taken. His self thought, ''kash woh din kavi nahi ata, kash tum hume chodke nahi jati, kash main kuch kar pata tumhare liye, kash kai har par uska koi solution nahi. Tum mujhe is dohraye pe chod k chali gayi. Par main jantaa hu koi kuch nahi kar sakta tha.. Sab tumhe bohot miss karte hai.. Par koi kuch nahi kehta ki kisi ko hurt na ho. Kash ye kavi nahi hota. Main janta hu ye kisi ko bhulne nahi deta.. Tum hum sabka ek ehem hissa ho. Main ab aur nahi chupa sakta. Ab jald hi sabko pata chal jaega. Sabka ye janna jaruri hai." Thinking so the person kept the photos back to its place n wipes his tears. Lock the door n was going out when his cell rings indicating case n replies will be there n turns once n see the room n goes n freshens up n go to office..
The case gets solved due to arjun's sharp mind n his out of box thinking.. They returns back to office n do their paperwork whereas sakshi brings their drinks for all. They finish it n head back home for new day ahead. Arjun is back to his house as now he is not haunted by the past n only sweet memories r left behind so he wants to cherish it life long n move on. He is smiling wholeheartedly nowadays n none has idea about the reason..

Here i rest the ink.. Suspense r there.. Secrets will be revealed in 3rd chapter.. Hehehehe enjoy..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awsum start...!!!
whose the girl in the pics? is it riya?
and the person whose watching those pics who is it?
aise point pe stop?😲
continue soon...!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb dr bt it is short next time plzzz big wala
Tht person who talk with pic tht is Sam I think so???
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Posted: 11 years ago
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shhh!!! Suspense rehne do na.. So my lips r sealed