NEW SS: FORGIVE ME??? updated chapter-1 page-4 :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Holla guys

This is Anamika&Maya...

We are new 2 this forum and the crazzy fans of show like u ppll 😉 😉..

Inspired by all the writers we are also starting an SS: FORGIVE ME??

here it goes

Love isn't a battle,

One you should just take,

It's not a present or a gift,

Everybody makes mistakes,

Love isn't something time can't lift,

Love isn't a goal,

Where the perfect begins and the bad starts,

And accepting the hole,

It's about accepting the difference,

And realizing the others life may just be as tart,

It's about using patience,

And using care,

Because from my point of view,

It isn't fair...

So here we are to present A-Beautiful-Tale-Of-Love as we are die hard fan of Ariya Riya is very much alive in this..story rewinds between past and future..

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sameer daam singh rathod: A business man!!!! Had a terrible past.. loves his family, married to Ayesha. A gud hearted person . but hates only 1 person in this world

Arjun suryakanth rawte: A super cop. Etf chief. a true son of soil . serious abt his profession  his the etf cheif . but once if he is off the work, Full on masti .waitng for his rightful partner.

Shaleen Malhotra : No nonsense cop fully akdu types.. very strick.. totally broken from inside.. fully devoted to his countryand a best friend of Arjun.

Riya mukerjee: a fun loving girl.. lost her parents in a very young young age. a software engineer..

Ayesha daamsingh rathod : Sameer's wife.. works in etf as second in command.. knows about her husband past and helps him to get over with it.. a true partner whom everyone dreams.

Shreekanth Sen(shree) : techie expert in etf, bestiee of arjun

Chandrakanth patil (Chotu): commando in etf .. friend of arjun and shree,

Sakshi Anand : research specialist in etf.. shares a good bond with team

Liza D'cruz: forensic expert of etf.  shares a good bond with team like sakshi .

Edited by crazyforarjun - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Prologue

6:00  P.M London U.K

She is struggling to zip her crammed carry-on, cursing herself loud for shopping too much..she has a mild shoe and clothing addiction,so its no wonder she had a hard time fitting all of her goodies into her pin-sized leopard-print luggage..may be its for the umpteenth time she asked her friend sneha to check the time..

and there came the reply its 6:15.. for a  second she felt weak a fear gripped her heart she does'nt wana miss the flight at any cost..she is very exited to go back to home..After four long years she is gona meet her only family.. her brother..  whom she respect alot...words will fall short if we intend to explain about the beautiful bond they share...(will be explained later)

finally she is done with packing... after a little quick good bye session with her friends she sat in cab and left for Airport.. there is unknown happiness building up in her heart..her eyes welled up with tears..


On the other side :

He is furiously searching for his ticket as he misplaced it some where its already 6:45 he got frustated and banged his feet on floor. after a long search he finally found it.then he took his belongings and rushed to airport.

both were unaware of what's coming up next. because "MAN PROPOSES, GOD DISPOSES"

ok thats it for now.. hope we did'nt bored you much.. friendly critism is alwys welcome..share your views :)

With love
❤️ anamika&maya
❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
Oh...
Nice title...
Starting was good.
Loved the poem...
Charecter Sketch is interesting and superb.
Wow...
Arjun is the ETF chief here...
Thats cool.
Sounds interesting.
Please continue.
Edited by zebbie - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: zebbie

Oh...
Nice title...
Starting was good.
Loved the poem...
Charecter Sketch is interesting and superb.
Wow...
Arjun is the ETF chief here...
Thats cool.
Sounds interesting.
Please continue.



thnkss dear.. posted prologue... do read
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Posted: 11 years ago
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"riya aur sakshi ek he ff me"
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: aliya_begh


"riya aur sakshi ek he ff me"



yes yes 😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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great start continue soon and plz pm me when you update next
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesum start dear
love d poem
grt cs...
ch amazing
waiting fr more
nyc title
n welcum to our arjun family..!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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frst of all welcm to da forum :) wow
Nice title..
Lovd dose lines abt love...
CS in great..
Intrstng start...
Continue soon :) nd do pm me whn u update :)