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Posted: 11 years ago
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a new maaneet short story

name not yet decided...


~~MAANEET~~





Didn't you get it I don't want anyone with me.. you can go' just leave me ' just leave me alone'.

 

Her pain filled voice was ringing in his ears '. She was there looking absolutely stunning..the glow that he could see on her face was something the recesses of her past ..the past that she was still gripping with her and couldn't she when the past ..it was her life that she was holding with the little life within her..

 

Anguish filled voice , nostrils flared .. her eyes spitting fire and tears pouring out of her almond eyes were something that made him to go and let her embrace but the thin line of modesty stopped him' just because he was

 

NO ONE..

 

NO ONE TO HER..

 

NO ONE TO HER UNBORN..

 

IT WAS HERSELF AND WILL SEE TO IT'

 

A sense of pride was there on seeing her ..she was lone yet not want any support from anyone.. no one she had no one here yet she don't want aloofness but he certainly didn't want any aloofness there for her when he was there with his whole heart and soul for her' she was strong and but he wants to makes her  well occupied with life not just lost in her past..

 

She was a dead soul living just for someone she wants in her life but certainly she didn't knew that her  this attitude is making her to somewhere loose what she wants to hold'

 

Her cheeks were wet..eyes smudged with kohl..and he with kohl when he offered her the handkerchief'

 

TAKE THIS'

 

She looked at him and took it for a better view that he would show it to her'.

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Okies suha again with a new concept .. I new many wants to kill me ..

But mommy's mistake that she again said something to me and a special thanks to rakhi di that she wrote ROAD TO LOVE AND BEYOND.. one word of her last update is entire inspiration but in my way'

 

 

Title if anyone can suggest

Will start updating when I will finish COMMITMENT AND LOST RELATION ' so u have to wait.. I am just marking it for a new start



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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
Hey dear congozzz for new concept...
loved it...
ll be waiting fo u to update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: mayapari

Hey dear congozzz for new concept...
loved it...
ll be waiting fo u to update...



thanksss dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congratzz for new concept
awesome start waiting for further
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congrats on new concept
tumhe itne ideas aate kaha se hai
love the concept
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovesia

congrats on new concept

tumhe itne ideas aate kaha se hai
love the concept



tthanks

dont know yar ye ideas ki dukaan kahan se aati h
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice concept lovd  it
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Originally posted by: rsusmita

nice concept lovd  it



thanks di
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting concept dear.
eagerly waiting for the next update😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shalini28

interesting concept dear.

eagerly waiting for the next update😳



thnaks shalu