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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ch 1.

An old man goes to ETF headquarters with an envelope in his hand.

The old man stops at the reception and asks for ACP Sameer Rathod.
The receptionist shows the way to Rathod's cabin.

As the old man entered the main lounge,Rathod immediately recognized him.
Rathod called him and went towards him and took his blessings.
Rathod: Arey,Kaka.Aap yahaan? Kaise hai aap? Kaki kaisi hai? Aur,aaj Riya kyun nahi aai?
Manohar Kaka: Jeete raho,beta.Main bhi thik hu aur tumhari Kaki bhi acchi hai.Yeh dene aaya thha tumhe.
Manohar kaka hands him the envelope.
Rathod takes the envelope.
Rathod: Yeh toh mere naam ki khat hai.Par,Riya ne kyun bheja?
Manohar Kaka: Samajh lena ki koi baat hai jo woh tumhe samne se nahi batana chahti thi,par,khat ke zariye se batana chahti ho.
Rathod looked confused.
Rathod: Par hai kya isme,Kaka?
Before Manohar kaka could answer his question,Arjun,Shree,Chotu and Ayesha came from the conference.
They all greeted Manohar Kaka.
Shree: Kaka,tumi ekhane?(Kaka,aap yahaan?)
Manohar Kaka: Haan,Shree.Ami ekhane ekta chithi dite eshechi Rathod er kache,Riya'r torof theke.(Haan,Shree.Main yahaan Rathod ko yeh khat dene aaya hu,Riya ki taraf se.)
He points to that envelope.
Everyone looks at that envelope.
Everyone is curious to know,that what is in that envelope.
Ayesha: Par,Kaka.Riya ko aisa kya hua hai,jo woh seedhe aake humein nahi bata sakti?
Chotu: Haan,Kaka... Bataiye na?
Manohar Kaka: Sun paoge tum sab log? Yeh khat Riya ka ETF se Resignation Letter hai.
Riya Mumbai ETF chor rahi hai.
Everyone in shock...
Rathod: kya??? Riya yeh nahi karsakti hai.Riya ETF kyun choregi?
Shree: Ri aise kaise karsakti hai?
Chotu: Haan...Why will she do this? Itna sudden change of behaviour kyun?
Arjun is shocked from the core.
Arjun: Riya kahin nahi jayegi.Woh yahin rahegi.
Manohar Kaka: Kyun,Arjun beta? Tumhe kabse Riya keliye itna chinta hone laga? Tumhe kya farak parhta hai ki woh jeeye ya mare? Tum toh khush ho na apne zindagi mein,ki,tumne Riya ko apne se dur kardiya?
Rathod and others are confused at Manohar Kaka's words.
Rathod: Aap kehna kya chahte hai,Kaka? Saaf saaf boliye.
Manohar Kaka: Agar sach mein tum janna chahte ho ki mere kehne ka kya matlab hai,toh,aaj ghar zarur aana.Sab pata chal jayega.
Saying that,he leaves,keeping everyone confused.

Precap: Manohar Kaka and Asha Kaki reveals the secret.


Index:
Chapter 1: Page 1
Sneak Peak of Chapter 2 and Note: Page 4
Chapter 2A: Page 5 Edited by zebbie0504 - 10 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
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why riya is resigning?? update soon..


p.s hope its an ariya story..
Posted: 11 years ago
#3
super start :) loved it
riya resigning from ETF but why
looking forward to read it
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Gud start dear
riya resign
must be a reason!!
gud title..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start dear . But what is the reason behind riya's resignation . Please reveal soon . Please make this ariya story if you wish .
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start so riya is resigning plss reveal the mystry and plss make this ariya story and also please update your two ff chaha tha kiya paya hai kya or sun ke bhi unsuna kar diya abh or nhi
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Posted: 11 years ago
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@mastmegha: Thank u so much for liking this story,and,yes,aaj hi main woh do FF's update karungi.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing start do continue soon and do pm me when you update next
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Note:
THIS IS AN ARIYA STORY.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start zebbie continue soon.
What the secret?
 I am waiting to know