ANJAAN RISHTAY prt8 on 37 7/5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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HELLO dr frnds,myself  jass. my all dr frnds call me jass, mishtind choti. it is first time to attempt.so please bear me😉
sorry 4 my mistakes thanx i love ariya so i want to write some stuff on them
can i continue frnds tell me😊
Index
1st part--------1 page pr by mishti
2nd part-------5 page by mishti
Cs on----------7 page by mishti
Note on --------10
3rd part a -------12 by any 
Part4-------------18 by me
Part5--------------21 by me 
Part6---------------25 by me 
Part 7--------------29 by me 
Part 8--------------37 by me 
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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
Neki aur puch puch...??!!!

Arjun-Riya se to mai kabhi bore hu hi nehi sakti...

So plzzz...continu sooon!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ohh choti jaldi start karooo..
me waitinggg
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
bhagbhan ka name lia or mai shuru ho gae 
maf krna ager koe galti hue😉 bura na mano holi thi
PART 1 
one girl has in her thought world she has one letter in her hand say to photo which is hanged on wall
GIRL : kash aap yaha hotay [her eyes full wth tears😭] uss incident k baad mainai apna sab kush kho diya apko aur apni pehchan v...
FLASHBACK 
in hospital
LADY: mai tumai sach batana chahti hoo beta e...ek aisa sach jo tumari zindagi badal dega
NURSE:please mam aap mat bolea is say apko takleaf hogi
LADY:nurse mujhay bolnai degeea...
LADY TO GIRL:beta tu...tum hamari beti na..nahi hoo mainai tumai apni khukh sai janam nahi diya 
[girl in shocked😲]
GIRL: maa aisa kush nahi hai yeh sach nahi hai mai sirf apki or baba ki beti ho {girl crying]
MAA:no beta it...is truth is sai badha sach yeh bhi hai ki tu...tum humari sagi alud sai v badh ker ho.. tumarai sath kush anjaanay rishtay judhai hai jo tum sai dur hai mai jaa rhe ho... pr mai chahti ho k...ki vo anjaan rishtay tumari jeenay ki vajay ho..vo...vo tasveer tumari help kregi jo tumarai pass thi jab hm tumai leker aaye...
the lady is dead
...FLASHBACK END...
girl disturbed by door knock
[girl wipe her tears nd went to open the door]
GIRL:shanti dede aap
shanti:g baby  vo phone aap k lea aya hai vo keh rhai hai ki aap pick nahi kr rhe to...aap thik ho baby
GIRL:vo...vo mai bat krti ho
{she took the the phone from shanti]
GIRL:hello who?
BOY: me... bhol gae mujhai pata nahi tha yehi din baki tha dekhnai k lea😒
[girl has little smile😊 when she listen his talking girl intrpt him]
GIRL:mai tujhay kaisai bhul sakti ho nutangi shuru ho gaya bhahana chehea tujhai to huhhh?
BOY : mainai socha ab tum etf ka member bannai k baad mujhay bhul gae hogi?
GIRL:asha g... yeh mat bhulo tum bhi member ho..
BOY:ok...ok coffe penai chalay is khushi mai[girl kush keh pati is sai phelai}
boy say to girl:nah mat kehna hmari dosti khatir plss...
GIRL:ok mai ready hoti ho pick krnay k lea aa jana
BOY:ok mam jo hukam apka
GIRL :ok bye 
BOY:bye 



tht is 1st part frnds i hope aapko pasand aye sorry 4 any mistakes and ek baat yaad rakho pls apni opinion jarur dena i need ur opinion 

Posted: 11 years ago
#5
awesome start :) loved it
i think that girl is riya and the boy is shree
looking forward to read it
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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great start mishti...
wadia story hai g... 😉
whose the girl and the boy?? title mast hai...
continue soon... eagerly waiting for the next prt...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#7
Gud start dear
may be girl is riya
do cont soon...
all d best dear..!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#8
u shuld cntnue dr.

its lookng great.

update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start dr ...
lvld its..
is the girl is riya..??
So mishtiii dr..update soon..
me call u mishtiii now...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#10
thanx dr 4 lovely cmmnt  nd mai jaldi update kr dongi 
piya de u call me mishti it is ur right de😉
nd nxt time mai jarur long update krogi 
sorry 4 shot update b
thanx again love u