Three Shot - Fortitudo || Complete

Vee

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Posted: 11 years ago

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sakthi25

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Posted: 11 years ago

Well, I am first!!!!😊

Strength!!!

Loved it...

'Aapki mom bi tho nhi hai' 😉 That was so nice to read...

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vgedin

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Posted: 11 years ago

Vee! Arnav spells fortitude. We know that.

Whats with Khush who is like Khushi. When will Khushi come to her Arnav?

Jaldi batao Vee!

I like the tone of narration here, btw. Passive, detached, vivid.

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1chilly

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Posted: 11 years ago

Loved Arnav's interaction with Khush. What a coincidence! He has Khushi's eyes and his name is Khush. When do we get the next part?

Just saw an old mail from you where you had sent me the link to Glitter. When I clicked on it I found this story. Good, I found this as I really liked it. But I also want to read Glitter. Will send you another mail to make it easy or ou to find me.

Charu

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nnhk

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Posted: 11 years ago

arnav, khushi aur khush...

agay sunaao kahani

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Nidsubh007

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Posted: 11 years ago

Loved the title!

The hazel eyed boy seems to be Arnav's guardian angel.

Loved how he told Arnav that he too is without his mom. That was just so innocent and something a small child would say.

Really looking forward to reading the next part.

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masam

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Posted: 11 years ago

Gah, I love it!
Arnav- the fortitudo!
The train catching fire was actually scary, but the child, what a innocent, strong significance
Love it V, do continue soon. ❤️

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Arani_Kumar

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Posted: 11 years ago

hey thanks for the pm!

i thought this was a good start to the three-shot story...is khush an integral part of the story? will he have a connection to arnav?? curious to know where you take that relationship...

good writing...keep it up...can't wait for more...

(and thanks for the blog link as well)
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