Superb undate
Previously did'nt know much abt the book but when u mentioned that this ff is inspired from it I checked it out. to be honest I did'nt like the book but ur story seems much more interesting.
I did'nt like the dark side of grey's character, it was too much. plz don't take abhay's character to that extent. Portraying him as control freak n arrogant is ok but don't make him lustfull sadist.
Continue soon
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