SEQUEL OS: EMPTINESS... Last part. PLS READ PG11

hi evry1. This OS wil hav the same concept as by payal di, thorhe bohot changes honge... Har moments k sath mai kuch poetic lines dalna chahungi...
i hope ill do justic to it...
ha payal di ki tarha utna khubsurat bhale na kar pau... Ill try my best...
P.S payal di ko kabiliyat tareef,
PLEASE COMMENT.
i want to knw if i did justic to it...
Joote, tamatar, ande yaha tak GOBAR(cow dung) bhi chalega.
pleas ek chota sa comnt kar dena..
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here's the link to the original story.
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www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=345065650
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INDEX:- <3.

INTRO - Pg 1
pg 1 - pt 1
Pg 3 - pt 2(a,b); pt 3
Pg4 - pt4; pg5
pg5 - pt5b;pt6;pt7
pg6 - poem update.

pg7 - pt.8a
pg8 - pt.8b
pg9 - V.Imp.NOTE
pg11 - LAST PT.


Guyz DO U LYK THE TRACK PLEASE LET ME KNW. DO COMNT N HIT THE LYK BUTTON.Edited by Sumu4JayD - 11 years ago

INTRO:

ACP Sameer Rathor: ETF chief,
arjun's long lost best friend.
ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte: ETF officer second in command.
Hot temprd cop..
has a tragic past.
Roshni's husband.. Riya's love..
Ms. Riya Mukherjee: ETF research specialist..
sweet n smiling but has a tragic past.
Mrs. Roshni Rawte(dead): Arjun's wife. Murdered by Sikandar.
Sikandar: very high profile criminal. Killed arjun's wife and riya's brother Avinash.
ACP Avinash Mujherjee(dead): Riya's brother, EX Chief of NCB.
(arjun n rathor's mentor. They dnt knw he is riya's brother)
Shrikanto Sen (Shree): technical expert of ETF. Riya's best friend.
Chandrakant patil(chotu): Commando ETF. Riya's friend.
Roshan: a criminal. (UNimprtnt)

Dear meri itni tareef haw..
thank u..
well its a combined effort of me n my kunchu di..
dnt wry u justice to it..
grt cs..
waitin to read more
all d best dear.!

interesting cs...
continue soon...

Interesting CS.
Got me hooked up to the story.
Meri pyari behna,jaldi jaldi story update karna.

nice start..

WOW... go for it dear... all d best,,,,

thank u ppl. So much 4 ur support and motivation i am seriously mesmerizd & overwhelmed, socha na tha aaplog itne eagr honge...
update coming very soon...

aise hi sath rehna n ill try 2 giv great updates...

KOI APNA JAB BICHAR JAYE,
KOI GHAR JAB UJAR JAYE...
NA MALUM MERE HAATHO KI LAKEERO MEI KYA HAI,
JAB BHI HIMMAT KARU DEKHNE KI HAR SAPNA TOOT JAYE...
MERE TAN K YE GHAV BHAR JAYENGE, TOOTE HUE SHEESHE JUR JAYENGE..
US PE NA KARTI HU AFSOS MAI AB,
KYU DARD DENE K LIYE DAAG REH JAYENGE...
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Paisa, property yehi kya sab kuch hoti hai, log kyu ye bhul jaate hai k agr ye chale gaye to ek phir se loataye jaa sakte hai magar agar koi apna ruth jaye, bichar jaye to kabhi wapis nahi aata, koi itna lalachi kaise ho sakta hai k paise k liye khud ki patni ki jaan ley le...
us patni k jis k sath 7 phere lekar hamesha use mehfooz rakhne ki, uski raksha karne ki kasam khaithi...
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her chain of thoughts were broken as she saw arjun storming out of the interogaton room,
she lookd at rathor n chotu who wer coming out...
she tried to signal chotu 2 ask wat happnd.
he got it n replied isharo mei, a pressur cooker seeti something.
riya samajh gayi k arjun ka para char gaya..
zarur unhe roshni ki yaad agyi...
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SCROL

Originally posted by: Payal_156

Dear meri itni tareef haw..
thank u..
well its a combined effort of me n my kunchu di..
dnt wry u justice to it..
grt cs..
waitin to read more
all d best dear.!

di, tareef to unhi ki kiyi jaati hai, jo tareef k haqdar ho, n u sach me deserv it..!
n kunchu di ki to bat na kariyo, unki tareef karne gayi to Dictnary k chakkar katne parhenge...
she makes me speechless...

larka hota to unke hath chum leta... LOL!!!