new os: confusion series. sequel updated on page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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They two were alone, walking on the lonely streets in outskirts of Mumbai...
wo dono... aur unki tanhaayi...

" tumhe nahin lagta now its time you say it...???!"

"what!!! noways i am going to do that thing..."

"till when will you be silent??? ek na ek din to tumhe batana hi padega na... to aaj kyun nahin????!!!!!!"

"you know the reason... i mean..you know i am not good at these things... i ll ruin everything..."

"sirf ek simple sa i love you bhi chalega..."

"no... never. i want that moment between us to be something special..."

"comeon... it cant be that difficult..."

"urrrggghhh... you dont understand my plight... how can i simply say i love you... that too with no roses, no orchids... no bg music o no diamond ring... how can you expect me do that??? never"

"pyaar karne wala dil saaf ho to in sab ke bina bhi izhaar kiya ja sakta hai... try it... atleast for me... please..."

"no arjun... how can i???? its not possible..."

" tum mere liye itna bhi nahin kar sakte sameer???"

" arjun tumhare liye to main kuch bhi kar sakta hun... but this..."
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"comeon i promise... she will definitely like it... after all ankita is my sister and no one knows her better than me... when arjun here bhy phear??? ja mere sher... ankita raute se apni dil ki baat bol daal... ek simple i love u ke intezaar mein hi wo baithi hai... jus go to her..."

"yeah main sher hun...ACP Sameer Damsingh Rathod... thanks saale... ab main pakka usse i love you bolunga..."



how is it????????
i thought of writing something else, i wrote something else, it came out to be something else...
please apne likes and comments ke through batana kaisa hai...
i welcome ande, jooti tamatar everything... its just crap... i know but please do comment...
and dont forget suggest title... i ll cosse one from ua suggestions...
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Payal_156 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nyc start dear
may be title
izhar e mohabbat
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Posted: 11 years ago
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NOTE:
story ko like karne ke saath saath ek word to comment kijiye...humare iss chote se dil ko bohut zyada khushi milegi... 😊😊😊 karo na... kardo na... kar bhi do na...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing 

wen i read arjun ka name ..i was like may b he s conversing wid ria .
but den wen  i found sameer ka name ..

i was like ..yeh kaisa dostana hian

then thankfully i scrolled further n found ki sam was practicing to propose BB ...

BB is arjun ki sis ...waah

n sameer ki wud b wifey ...wow
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Payal_156

Nyc start dear
may be title
izhar e mohabbat



nice title😊... actually ye crappy piece itna hi hai..πŸ˜›... as i said kuch likhne gayi, bana kuch aur... gol gol roti banane gayi to ye jaake amreeka ka map bangaya...πŸ˜†πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Haww...
Ankita kahan hai?????
I just loved it...
Arjun making Sameer practice how to say i love u to Ankita...
Thts really sweet.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start but a little short πŸ˜‰
Waiting eagerly
continue soon
me getting interestedπŸ˜†

Edited by saba-ramisa - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing OS :) loved it
at first i thought arjun is talking with riya but then when i found  it's sameer i was literally shocked..
so sameer was practicing to propose arjun's sis ankita :) nice
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awe...super nice os
Awesome
Title can be Arjun ki pyar ke izaar ki pathshla...lol...just joking...bakwas idea of Title...huh..anyway awesome os
You know you can write a part 2 one in which sammer confesses his love to ankita and Arjun helping and later teasing them
:)Edited by fan123GUNJ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice...
i thought he was talking with riyaπŸ˜†