SS: Tera hi bas hona chahoon.*COMPLETE*

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ch 1.
Riya grabbed the photo frame which had Arjun's photo in it.She looked at it and tears were dropping from her eyes. She hugged the photo frame tightly and cried a lot.Rathod,Shree,Chotu and Ayesha were the witness of this situation.
Ayesha(worried): Sameer,dekho.Riya ro ro ke apna bura haal bana rakkhi hai.Usse roko,warna woh bimar par jayegi.
Rathod: Nahi,Ayesha. Rone se agar dard kam hota hai,toh,usse rone do.Main Riya ko bohuthi acchi tarha se janta hu.Woh Arjun se bohuthi pyaar karti hai.Uske dukh aur dard ko dekh nahi pati,uske gusse ur naraazgi ko sehen nahi kar pati hai.Bohut hi emotional hai humari Riya.

BG Music.
"Khuda ko dikhraha hoga,
Ke dil tujhse juda hoga,
Tere taqdeer ne mujhko,
Ho abto likhraha hoga,
Tera hi bas hona chahoon,
Tere dard mein rona chahoon,
Tere dil ke inn zakhmo pe,
Marham main hona chahoon."


Riya wished to erase Arjun's pains and sorrows with her love.She wishes to be with him during his loneliness.She wishes to be with him during his sadness,but,today,the way he behaved with him,broke her heart.
She didnt even realize that 4 pairs of eyes were constantly looking at her.
Rathod: Mujhse toh Riya ki yeh halat dekhi nahi jati hai.
Shree: Mujhse bhi.
Ayesha: Sameer,aap ghar jaiye.Chotu aur Shree yahaan mere saath rahenge Riya ke paas.Hum usse samjhane ki koshish karte hai.
Rathod: Ok.Take care,love.
Ayesha: Same to you.

Precap: Riya in hospital.




Index.
Ch1- page1
Ch2- page2
ch3-page3
ch4-page4
ch5-page6
ch6(last part)-page7Edited by zebbie0504 - 10 years ago

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Seenavas thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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zebbie aap ki store me hamare liye kuch na kuch to hamesha rahte hai
thanks alot dear

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Seenavas

zebbie aap ki store me hamare liye kuch na kuch to hamesha rahte hai

thanks alot dear





welcome,Seenavas.
Waise,Story ka 1st part kaisa laga?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Drrr to gud n heart tuching...one of my fav songgg. ..update soon. with next part...wanna to read more...feeling sad for riya...hey plz dr pm me this sss
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start...
all of ur update was very nice...
cont soon...
do PM me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome part.
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb start zebbie dr...
loved it...
rathore aisha ek sath... wow...
ooo arjun broke riya's heart...
love how everyone is concerned for her...
precap is scary...
continue soon...
cant wait to read more...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awsomeee start!!!

so its raesha here!!!

riyaaa πŸ˜­ πŸ˜­ πŸ˜­ πŸ˜­!!

wht riya in hospital?????πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜­  πŸ˜­ πŸ˜­

update soon!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great update, very emotional. Btw where is arjun. And why is riya crying? Do update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: alee001

awsomeee start!!!


so its raesha here!!!

riyaaa😭!!

wht riya in hospital?????😭

update soon!!





hey.
Thanks a lot for liking my SS.
Precap seems to be scary.
But,dnt worry.
Nothing is going to happen to her.