OS Ariya: Action Speaks Louder Than Words...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is my 1st written material on ARIYA!!!!!!!!!!

Hope u all like it'.

Arjun sat in his car tired and helpless for the 1st time in these many years''.. Even after Roshni's death he didn't feel helplessness .. because he had revenge on his mind'.

But there he sat lifelessly' He seemed so much tired, exhausted and sad' All these emotions were due to an just finished case which involved the same NGO in which Roshni used to work'' The NGO had many pictures of Roshni with the children' and 15 children from that NGO itself went missing'.. If Roshni would had been there she could not have bared it'. He had therefore desparately solved this case and brought the children back safely back' He felt it was his duty for that NGO and also for Roshni'

It had been a long day today'.. After the case had finally been solved Arjun had started his car'. His car was speeding the empty roads of Mumbai when suddenly he felt exhausted.. That's y he had parked his car on the road side and slept'.

Mixed dreams were pouring in'. Days with Roshni  and now days with Riya'. His subconscious mind was asking  him y was he having dreams of roshni blending to become Riya' Riya he saw''''..

A girl in white shirt with a gun in hands aiming at him'. Riya was the only girl whom he walked n talked after Roshni'. Yes she was beautiful, sexy, sensuous, bold yet simple, dedicated and devoted''..

A girl who worked with 4 men but still carried a pink pen and used a red hair clip''. She was proud to be a woman '. And always hated whenever underestimated'..

Her sighed in sleep and smiled'. He thought she looked sexy in that peach coloured 1 piece'. curved n  creamy legs.. broad shoulders and long neckline'. God had gifted  her beautiful skin and  the most spectacular thing was her dimpled smile!!!!!!!!!!

She was smiling at him' Suddenly he felt peace at heart' all the exhaustion, sadness withered'.. wen he heard a knock on the window'''.

 

Was it riya????????????

Yes' indeed she was'.

 

Part 2 : Page 3

Part 3 : Page 5

Part 4 : Page 8 

Part 4 (extended) : coming soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
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First 1 to comment...
It was really nice and lovely...
2nd part post karo,jaldi se.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i hope its ok... never written any stuff before...

plsss do give me replies about how is it?

iam relly going nervous!!😲😲😲
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: zebbie

First 1 to comment...
It was really nice and lovely...
2nd part post karo,jaldi se.


Thank u.. thank u sooo much..
it really means a lot...
will post 2nd part soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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pretty good!!!! do continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow.nyc start...hoping good story ahead..
Plzz ad me in ur buddy list...i dnt knw how to send request..n plzz pm ne wen next update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing start... do continue soon...
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nice start dr...like it
arjun alrdyy drmd of hr ...😳
post da nxt 1 as soo as u can
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing dear
update fast
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Nice start... Arjun already dreaming abt her... hmmm interesting... update soon...