Arjun and Riya FF : Different feeling new ch pg 37

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi guys i thought of writing an FF on our beloved couple arjun n riya..n i am writing it for the 1st time..so i hope u don't mind about the mistakes...😉
CHARACTER SKETCH :
 
1) Arjun suryakanth rawte - Here arjun is bit differnt from the original one..he has moved on his life..began to like riya.

2) Riya rathord - she is a fun loving person...much to the character of geet...she is the cousin of rathord...so she has joined ETF only few months ago...

3) Rathord - chief of ETF..n loves his sis riya..n his friend Arjun...supports them in all situations..

4) Shree and chottu's characters r same except the fact that shree n riya are not college friends..

NOTE : Rathord , Arjun n riya together live in the same house..so..we will get more Ariya scenes.😳.

SO, WHAT DO U GUYS THINK?? SHOULD I START IT OR NOT?? 


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Posted: 11 years ago
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great CS :) loved it
looking forward to read it
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved the Special Note...

Go for it dear:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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You should definitely start it! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting CS..continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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cs is interesting..!!
continue soon..!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow dear this is amazing concept...

Arjun like riya wow yaar   im just imagining him watching riya chupke chupke...

Hey r u sure this ur first ff...if yes then good going...

Waiting for first part...

And yes add me to ur pm list...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice.sahi kiya riya,rathore aur arjun ko ek hi ghar me rakh kar.i realy loved it. plz add me in ur bauddy list.cont soon.i cant wait!!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey...
Concept is very unique.
CS is interesting...
Continue soon.
Mujhe apne buddy list aur pm list me add karo.
Ati Uttam
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank u everyone for those lovely comments...😊

SO ...Let's start...

Part - 1 : 

So..it starts with etf team working on some case...Conversation btwn riya , shree , chotu about love...( Rathord n arjun are in their cabin)
Shree : Chotu u tell me..what is ishq according to u..??
Chotu : mere liye pyaar ek alag cheez hai...jo koi bhi pyaar karta hai..woh sabse bahut lucky hai..aur pyaar..pyaar..pyaar...( he starts telling about his experience about love)
Shree : are waah chotu tu toh chupa rustam nikhle ho..kya baat hai..riya ab tum batao..tumhare liye pyaar kya hai..?
Riya seems to get tensed about hearing the word love..n starts walking out of the room..this is noticed by arjun...😲

Scene shifted to the house..it' night time..everybody is asleep..arjun is thinking about riya n confused about his feelings..riya is kind of sad thinking about someone..(mystery!! lol! will describe later)

Early morning..

Rathord n arjun wakes up...It;s time for office..n riya has not come out of her room..
so rathord askes arjun to go n check it out while he is busy on the phone..

Arjun goes to riya's room...

To Be Continued...So..how was it guys?? i hope u don't mind the spelling mistakes..:P