ArHi FF - Glitter - LINK TO STORY PAGE 85 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
hi...
i just came by your story...
it was a great start...i loved your khushi...
she seems to be strong and a match for asr...
waiting to read more of your work...
o and by the time i started reading glass   you had already removed it to your blog... and i regret not reading it... sorry

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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Yayyy m here!! πŸ˜ƒ so payal owns a cafe n Akash works under Guptas!??!! Hhmm its getting better ...
Khusi born with bottle if beer ... Hahahahaha... Oh my she looks like tough cookie how AsR gonna tame this wild cat!!
Great chapter... Cant wait to read more... πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
Loved the concept..2 strong characters from same background ready to collide each other...loved the way u portrayed each and every character...looking forward to read more...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
I love this establishing of the characters. They are unique and intriguing. I can't wait to read how this story continues. Awesome!   
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
I just came across this story, and it's amazing! Please continue soon! I await to read more!

I'm loving the spoilt brat Khushi; it's as if she knows what she's doing.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
i like πŸ‘πŸΌ

i loved Akash's description of Khushi!!! it was so different... but helpful 4 us to understand her better...
 ..most of d ffs have payal as rich,spoilt n a bitch whereas khushi as a poor simple middle class girl...however here itz just d opposite ...luk 4ward to it!





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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Hey! Just got to read this FF...love the concept...this Khushi is so different to the one's written about...also I like the fact that you have shown Arnav, Khushi, Payal and Akash as 4 different individuals with different background and outlook on life...looking forward to more of this!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
I find Payal the peaceful one; you know the inner peace kinda thing? That one. Just happy what was in hand right now. Living in the moment. Okay I am going too far away now.
Aakash- an another dissatisfied man, not happy what's in hands and still looking for that peace. But so not in Khushi.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
SO LESS OF ARSHI...no worries but payal is facing so much crisis:(
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
Going nicely enough!!😊 Could increase the pace a littleπŸ˜‰ Get the confrontation going hard not just gutter stuff... Please PM updates.