A cutie pie cutie pie story…
A worthy for a calm read…as it can bring a sweet smile to your face…
N if you are a rajat mugdha fan, den a blush too…
Bst prt described was the way she moved towards him…her 3 yrs old buried legs..shoving them up…
Line which strikes your head through ws- I have lifetime to answer them all..(the q's)..
Mermaid…nice imagination indeed…
Lovly wrk.
lovely work pari too good...
what to say about the story n u...u r such an awesum writer...really amazing piece of writing...very well written...
do write more sweety...
luv u...
by the way i m hoping to get my lappy back before x-mas,then again i m able to ud my ff...like nandu i m also on 9th cloud... :-))
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