~MG~Darr~Th#1~completed. - Page 2

Hey there!

awesome intro
cont soon

Thanky to all of u for liking & commenting on d FF. Hoping of getting more comments & likes. Here is the next chapter-

chapter-1

khurana mansion-

geet is madly searching here & there , but she is unable to find her red saree. & because of this she panicks badly.

'hey babaji yeh maine meri laal saari kaha rakh di, kahin mil hi nhi rhi hai, agar maan ko pata chal gya toh?'

At khurana constructions-

maan- adi that's it for today.

adi-but sssir aapki meeting?

maan-cancel kar do.

adi-but sirr---

maan angrily glares at him.

'mujhe duhrane ki aadat nhi hai aur yeh tum achi tarah se jante ho'.

adi-ji sir

& with this adi leaves.

maan puts his head back & relaxes thinking about his mishty.

'mishty bas kuch aur pal phir main tumhare paas bahut paas aur aj tum mujhe rok nhi paogi'

at the mansion-

geet is crying madly , she has searched everywhere but she is unable to find her red saree.

'babaji please help me, madad kijiye meri , aap toh jaante ho na agar woh saree nhi mili toh maan - pata nhi mere saath----

thinking about the consequence she panicks severely.

at the khurana construction-

maan is leaving with his bodyguards , a devilish & dangerous aura is surrounding him.

a dark evil atmosphere covers his every feature.

entering his mercedes he gestures the driver to drive.

His guards following him in other cars.

a long trail of cars leaves the premises of KC.

at KM-

geet is now in hysterics , suddenly her mob. rings 'mishty loves maan'-----'mishty loves maan'---

hearing the tone the glass of water falls from her hand & she rushes to pick it up , but in this process she hurts her feet which makes her wince in pain but she ignores it & picks the phone-

geet- hhhelloo----

no sound from the other side---

geet-hheelloo---

again no sound---

geet-Maan.

but instead of any reply someone pulls her around & picks her up in his arms.

Precap-maaneet & red saree.

please do like & comment tell me how u all like it.

Edited by Thesaurus - 10 years ago

Superb update dear:-)
like it very much but its too short plz try to make it long next time.

Hello Buddy,
Welcome to Maaneet world.
Darr-----The name itself attractd me towards ur story.I read d prologue and first part and found it very interesting and actually loved it.

So pls add me and pm me whenever u update and if u find it difficult then inform me abt d frequency of ur updates,i'll check myself.But pls do inform me,i really want to know wat happens next.

great part . Is maan is obseesive type ?😕Edited by hermoso - 11 years ago

Wow interesting👍🏼 concept can't wait for the next part

It was a very nice chp. But why is Geet so scared just because she can't find her red sari?😕 And what would Maan do when he comes to know that she can't find it?Looking forward to the next chp. Update soon😊

Originally posted by: shruthiR

Hey there!

Welcome to the forum🤗

Just read the prologue of your FF. I must say,it was impressive👍🏼 Looking forward to the first chp. Update soon😊

hii dear thanky so much for welcoming me here in d maaneet world.

i am really happy that you loved d prologue of my story thanky for commenting on my story .

will be updating daily hopefully i guess.😊

Originally posted by: Romanaxx

continue soon

thanky so much. will upd. soon.😊