do comtinue soon
thankx for pm
Originally posted by: Cherishh
Hey self-called innocent girl😉😆😆...or say my Shock booster...congo for the new one dear...
The prologue is just very nice.MSK and fun-loving..now thats the first jhatka..hmmm interesting..and here he is already lost in Geet's smile now thats cool...chalo hope he becomes a good frnd to her.Geet..omg poor dear...craving for love...arre following orders from her parents and wearing their choice of clothes was like..sad.sad..but still okies..but asking her mother to make frndship...was way tooo muchhh...me wondering how this bigii bili will be sherni as I know that will happen in Maan's sangatLooking forward to it.And now..u better start giving updates including this real soon...nahi toh...nahi toh...pleaseee...request ke alawa kya kar sakte hai...humpphhh.Waiting dear...do update soon
aww that's really a sweet concept!!
Geet leading an almost robotic life!!A monotonous life following orders, wanting and waiting to be loved!!Just an apt title dear!!And our Maan'.Lattu on first sight!! he he!!I was actually shocked when she texted Maan's full name to her mom!!Gosh!!!She even can't make friends or talk to anyone without her mom's permission???Guess Maan's entry in her life is going to change everything!!!Loved the concept as well as the first part a lot!!!
awesome dear.
awesome concept
cant believe she even asked her mom to whom she should be friends!!!!!!!!!!!!
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