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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
Congo mel...Loved the prologue

do comtinue soon

thankx for pm



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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Hey self-called innocent girl😉😆😆...or say my Shock booster...congo for the new one dear...

The prologue is just very nice.

MSK and fun-loving..now thats the first jhatka..hmmm interesting..and here he is already lost in Geet's smile now thats cool...chalo hope he becomes a good frnd to her.

Geet..omg poor dear...craving for love...arre following orders from her parents and wearing their choice of clothes was like..sad.sad..but still okies..but asking her mother to make frndship...was way tooo muchhh...me wondering how this bigii bili will be sherni as I know that will happen in Maan's sangat

Looking forward to it.

And now..u better start giving updates including this real soon...nahi toh...nahi toh...pleaseee...request ke alawa kya kar sakte hai...humpphhh.

Waiting dear...do update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
aww that's really a sweet concept!!
Geet leading an almost robotic life!!
A monotonous life following orders, wanting and waiting to be loved!!
Just an apt title dear!!

And our Maan….

Lattu on first sight!! he he!!
I was actually shocked when she texted Maan's full name to her mom!!
Gosh!!!
She even can't make friends or talk to anyone without her mom's permission???

Guess Maan's entry in her life is going to change everything!!!

Loved the concept as well as the first part a lot!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
wonderful dear and loved as it is very different. continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Cherishh

Hey self-called innocent girl😉😆😆...or say my Shock booster...congo for the new one dear...


The prologue is just very nice.

MSK and fun-loving..now thats the first jhatka..hmmm interesting..and here he is already lost in Geet's smile now thats cool...chalo hope he becomes a good frnd to her.

Geet..omg poor dear...craving for love...arre following orders from her parents and wearing their choice of clothes was like..sad.sad..but still okies..but asking her mother to make frndship...was way tooo muchhh...me wondering how this bigii bili will be sherni as I know that will happen in Maan's sangat

Looking forward to it.

And now..u better start giving updates including this real soon...nahi toh...nahi toh...pleaseee...request ke alawa kya kar sakte hai...humpphhh.

Waiting dear...do update soon

😆what I really know myself isiliye I gave myself that name😆
Gosh feels good to see your comment. It makes me smile like always
I will update tum sirf mero ho so no need to give dhamkis cause I already got dhamkis😆
you know when I was typing that Maan says he dad is so strict and he isn't me felt like laughing. Am I the only one who found that funny😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: ruchs

aww that's really a sweet concept!!

Geet leading an almost robotic life!!
A monotonous life following orders, wanting and waiting to be loved!!
Just an apt title dear!!

And our Maan'.

Lattu on first sight!! he he!!
I was actually shocked when she texted Maan's full name to her mom!!
Gosh!!!
She even can't make friends or talk to anyone without her mom's permission???

Guess Maan's entry in her life is going to change everything!!!

Loved the concept as well as the first part a lot!!!

Thanks you Angel means a lot coming from you😃love ya
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47

awesome dear.

felt bad for geet.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
congozz on new story Mel dear

nice concept

liked it...

poor geet

thnx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Poor Geet. Friendship bhi Mama se poochke karna pad raha he.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome concept

cant believe she even asked her mom to whom she should be friends!!!!!!!!!!!!

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