Can I just say that I absolutely love
love loved this? I mean it was written beautifully. And this is just the first chapter but you just have such a way with words that I'm now dying to read the rest.
When I saw the word 'raven', I immediately thought 'Vampire diaries. It has to be vampire diaries...' 😆 and then there's the note saying that it is inspired by it. 😆
Well, since you seem to be a Delena fan, I'm hoping it's gonna be biased to Delena...And our hottie Asad is like our other hottie Damon. 😳
So anyway, just wondering about that whole 'undead' thing and how it'd work. But I'm pretty sure you will nail this FF.
I actually thought you wrote this better than LJ Smith...You're a brill writer.
I honestly cannot wait for the next chapter.
Faye x
Edited by ..Labyrinth.. - 10 years ago
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