YESS!!!!!!!!!! I'm first!!!
V TAKE THAT!! 😉
-Unres-
Babyyy!! I'm crying again! And this is not regular crying that I'm prone to do daily as a result of You-Know-What, but I'm profusely crying!
Now before I say anything about the OS, you wanted our opinion, so here it is -If you ever, EVER, as much as THINK of stopping to write, I swear I will call you, scream like a Banshee on the phone till your eardrums burst and then come all the way to Mumbai and beat you up, but before that I will ask Saiyu to do already!
This is a fine piece of an OS. Now you know how sensitive I am about stuff that makes me cry, so it's a favorite already :') At first I thought you killed Arnav, despite knowing how much we hate that at the moment, but then I discovered there's more to the plot than I am assessing. Kudos to your writing in that regard. :)
It felt like a journey that I was living via Khushi. She had endured so much right from being misunderstood by Arnav, to her getting married to NK, to never loving him the way she should have loved, to his untimely death.(Pained me to know that he died while getting jalebis 😭)
She suffered all the more believing herself to be the cause of his death, while Arnav thought that he was the cause of it all, but none knew that destiny plays games, sometimes dirty games, and they were but a mere prey to it.
Love that he chose to rectify what he had once done. I am a huge fan of the redemption seeking Arnav, but alas! (whatever. I should shut up.)
The end brought a smile to my face, although I was crying, so I was the typical "Smiling-through-tears-girl" :')
This OS just goes on to say, and I'm not saying this because I love you so, just how brilliant you are when it comes to imagination and putting that very imagination into words that just touch your heart, your soul. It makes you smile a genuine smile, and for that I love you and this OS so much more :*
p.s.- I write a lot when I'm emotional. You know the state of my heart. tehe <3
Edited by jessicad - 11 years ago
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