Originally posted by: achiever
really amazing last chapter.. luved it a loot..Thanx Manisha Di...😃 especially those cute scenes which describe Ashu's patience.. maturity and his immense love for Nidhi.. i luved all those scenes..Glad that u liked all those scenes... But, didn't u like that mirror scene... I felt it to be super cute...😆 thr is sweet nothing and yet it said a lot abt thr frank and friendly r'ship.. the way thy slowly got comfortable and allowed each other access.. Earlier, this thing really scared me, if this story is going a platonic way... N I had this last chap to progress their r'ship... U would have seen, I had put the word "Slowly" a lot in this chap... They had to be slow, with u know, allowing access to each other... Not actually each other, it was from Nidhi's side... Ashu, had always given her every right... Only he waited for her indication to proceed... U remember, when he learnt her comfort with the hugs n all, I had written there, 'he left no chance unused to hug her n all'... So, Basically, it was Nidhi, who needed it, n Ashu more than willingly, offered her that...😳
I really luved the way Nidhi accepted him.. and her dialogue of "u own me.. i own u.. we jst need to claim each other.." Awww... U observed that dialogue... I loved it... That is the sheer acceptance from her side... I'm so happy, u caught that line...😳😃Ashu has always been so caring and loving.. totally adorable the way he handled her in thr special nite and the way he sees thr union.. totally holy and so pious! I don't know, if I ever told u, but for me, its always that holy n pious... Subtlety, is the element of my writings... I'm never comfy with writing the expessive love... I luved all tht he did and said b4 thr union.. it was so subtely hearttouchingly romantic.. Tht is essentially wat Nidhi needed i guess.. I had kept that in my mind, when I wrote it... U know, the sensitivity of Nidhi towards these feelings... No wildness, no harshness, no cheapness, no teasing... Just plain, deep, subdued, subtle love making...a complete opposite of Jagan's cheapness! Yeah! that was what I was saying, right from the begining of the story... He would sub-consciously fulfil the responsibilities n undo or say correct all the mess that Jagan had done... U see, I had almost covered all those points, n made things cleaner for Nidhi...And luved tht Ashu provide it all.. .I said na, he is a real sweetheart... U know, that song fits best in his role- " Na kuch poocha, na kuch maanga, tuney dil se diya jo diya... Na kuch bola, na kuch tola, muskurake diya jo diya... tu hi dhoop tu hi chaaya, tu hi apna paraaya... Aur kuch na jaanu, bas itna hi janu, Tujhme rabb dikhta hai yaara main kya karoon..."u chose a brilliant song ..it expressed her feelings sooo welll.. Thank u... I too felt, thats the best song to describe her feelings...and the morning after described in its own brief way how thr future life is going to b.. and i luved tht she placed a loving kiss in reply and acknowledged his luv wholeheartedly! Thats kind of accepting the love he had showered on her... Glad u liked, that morning scene... But, did I make it clear enough, that Nightie was kept by Ashu, coz he himself was back in his night suit... U know, I did not feel like putting that in words...
Fabulous story.. i was apprenhensive in the begining bt u gave such a beautiful end.. Oh! Thank God! U finally didn't regret reading my story... Yeah! I know, how apprehesive u were to read my fic.. Glad u found the end worth reading...😃and it seemed worth all tht Nidhi went thru..thrs a bright morning for her after a dark nite 😳 Absolutely!!!!
thnk u for the update..:)).. My pleasure...!!!😳
btw.. u didnt make him find his name.. eh!------ 🤣🤣🤣
🤣 Ur wish granted in the epilogue... I hadn't thot u were so willing on that part...😆😆😆... I have suddenly thot of an idea to put that thing there... Ok!!! Now relish that scene in the epilogue...😆😆😆
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