FF:Jo Hua Usey Bhool Ja:Ch13(Epilogue)Pg:78,Question Pg83 - Page 55

deepali.rock

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Sorry aazeen, mera chap 11 and 12 ka review abhi pending h. Last nite gave Anuji's review, then manisha di's and then ekdum subah college start hone se pehle sujatha di ka. Came home a while back and dead tired now. Will try to give both reviews by tonight. Vaise when are u planning the epilogue?

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ssktlk

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Posted: 11 years ago

#542

Aazeen, beautiful beautiful ff and last chap. U are a natural writer, please keep writing. The gradual progression of ashni's relation shown is wonderful, and how ashu describes their SR with the moonlight, in nightdress, with nidhi wearing alta, is too good. Simple, subtle yet touching,romantic, impactful, true to our ktlk style. Absolutely loved it, and will miss your ff terribly. Hope you come up with another one soon.😊

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aru29

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Posted: 11 years ago

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IT was a very very very beautiful piece of work ...Aazeen awesome👏👏👏

really loved it lots...❤️

6 months is not less...but in the present story it doesn't seem like more that is how well u have been able to justify ur story so kudos to u👍🏼

loved how ashu was ever so gentle loving giving and understanding for nidhi...loved his patience and how he at no point took her for a guilt trip and always made her feel loved and wanted...his love is so incapacitating...how could nidhi have lived away from him...⭐️⭐️

and at the same time if he waited then so did nidhi and she had to overcome sooo many things her own inner demons and the horrors of her past to have taken the plunge with ashu...it is never easy...but that's how much she trusts and loves ashu

u did an amazing job with the gradual progression of intimacy between them..superb is the word...

and ashu perfectly describes the m as a different couple and i'd say unique as well👍🏼

the "thank you" dialogue of nidhi was amazing👏

all in all it was a great chapter and a beautiful and sweet FF...and it seems as if it ended all tooo soon maybe that's what great writing is all about...pls continue to write u are really good at it⭐️

shall be eagerly waiting for the epilogue

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rayafan17

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Posted: 11 years ago

#544

Nice FF loved it - waiting for epilogue.

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Suvika.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#545

Ok...here is the review...

1. i liked the way Ashu reasssured Nidhi on their SR...ya phir yun kahoo ki i liked the way they reasssured each other on their SR...

2. i liked the way you made Nidhi open up to Ashu step by step...talking about her pregnancy is the ultimate show of her trust in him...the stages are very well covered...you know..from the way they got themselves into a routine both at home and at work...then Ashu trying to help Nidhi and Nidhi refusing...then slowly the sharing of bed space...etc...loved the way the fight for the mirror...thats such a cute scene to envision...

3. and i guess the way she cried after telling about her days in US...they were cleansing tears...they wiped away her past along with them...that breakdown in front of her husband was much needed...

4. loved that song of course...the song portrayed that Nidhi finally has a complete contented life now...with Ashutosh.

Good job with the FF Aazeen...real good story and real good work...very well done...

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PMithalee

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Awesome babes... 👏 and vo gaana jo select kari ekdum apt tha re 'saiyaan'...u know jab Ashu nidhi ko woh alta lagakar unke pyaar ke jo saakshi hain describe kar raha tha mere khayal main ek gaana aa raha tha "Samarpan ki bela
aayi re aayi sajni, ye tera man hain yaa darpan,yaha bhi sajan hain waha bhi sajan hain...dil jispe haara hain tan uspe waarde...aaj ki raat ke saare adhikar de,na vo paraaya ab na tu paraayi sajani...oh samarpan ki bela aayi re aayi sajani...mast ff tha Aazeen too good yaar...

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Anjani9

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Aazeen, This is the best update of the FF...you have written it beautifully...

The highlight of the update 😳

That made Ashutosh super happy as he again threw his arms & legs around her & held her light, snuggling deep into her nape...

N: ( Chuckling) I provide u with a finger,& u grab my entire hand...

The slow development of relation between AshNi is sweet...

Nidhi also become darling of the house...but Ashu will lose his importance in the house...😛 he does not have problem??

and the SR part...looking for the epilogue...

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: deepali.rock
Sorry aazeen, mera chap 11 and 12 ka review abhi pending h. Last nite gave Anuji's review, then manisha di's and then ekdum subah college start hone se pehle sujatha di ka. Came home a while back and dead tired now. Will try to give both reviews by tonight. Vaise when are u planning the epilogue?

Main toh jab bhi epilogue doon, tum review kab de rahi ho? Tumhara tonight bhi nikal gaya n still no review...😡😡😡... Mujhe gussa mat dila...😡😡😡... Jab bhi free ho, tb de dena... lekin jldi...

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 11 years ago

#549

Originally posted by: swati62
Loved the FF.

Thnx Swati... glad to know, u liked my ff...😃

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: ssktlk
Aazeen, beautiful beautiful ff and last chap. Thank you...😃U are a natural writer, please keep writing. Thannnxxx a lottt Sanya Di... This compliment means a lot...😃The gradual progression of ashni's relation shown is wonderful, and how ashu describes their SR with the moonlight, in nightdress, with nidhi wearing alta, is too good. Simple, subtle yet touching,romantic, impactful, true to our ktlk style.Glad u liked the subtle element in it... Thank u... Absolutely loved it, and will miss your ff terribly. Awww... U'll miss my ff... Thats so sweet of u... Thanx 4 the compliment...Hope you come up with another one soon.😊Abhi toh coming up with the epilogue of this ff... As to new one, no new ff in the recent future... my personal life requires more attention... Lets see when it is possible...

Thanx a lot Sanya di for ur nice review...😊

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