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You write well but thoda romance aur hona chahiye. it feels that something is missing.
song selection for sangeet was very good.
Thanx Dr. Vidya... Sorry, I could not keep up to ur expectations this time... But, don't worry... Romance coming up in kilos in the next update... Oficially to be the last chapter before the Epilogue...Originally posted by: vidyasabde
You write well but thoda romance aur hona chahiye. it feels that something is missing.
song selection for sangeet was very good.
hey Aazeen...what a coincidence haan!! ek hi din mein do do AshNi sangeet for the readers..🥳Yeah!!! just a coincidence...😆
great song selections buddy...love them... Thank you...😃need more AshNi moments in the next chapter ok?? baaki characters ko chutti par bhejdo...ya phir inn dono ko honeymoon par...😉 Nahi-nahi!!! No honeymoon yaar... mere andar itna stamina nahi hai ab ke ye aur likhoon... Next chap mein, Ashni-ashni aur sirf Ashni... Unke relation ko bhi toh proper karna hai... That would be apparently the last chap of the fic, before Epilogue...
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Originally posted by: Aazeen02
Yaar jaisa bhi tha, bas likh diya...it was cute😛Kuch different karna tha, then, aapko ye toh pata hi hoga k main kitni filmy hoon... Toh idea copy kar liya...ya ya aazeen the filmy😆😆Ye wala song, main kab se daalna chah rahi thi... Jab Nidhi DB ke paas rukne lagi thi, tab main iss scene ko daalna chahti thi... Lekin bhool hi gayi... n chap post karne ke 1-2 din baad yaad aaya... then yahan par fir se chance mil gaya iss song ko daalne ka, toh daal diya... But I guess, Man chooses, God disposes... N disposed for good... I think, yahan par zyada achha lag raha hai...absolutely...personally i really like this song😛😳Yeah!!! that would be super soon...Wow!! that's a good news...😃
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Agar sirf ghoomna hi hai, toh bhej dete hain honeymoon par, nahin toh aur kisi kaam ka nahi hai inke liye... 😉 u know na... It will take time for them... Bas isiliye...what no honeymoon?? bhej de yaar am sure budget mein ho jayega!!!😉😆😆
Originally posted by: Aazeen02
Agar sirf ghoomna hi hai, toh bhej dete hain honeymoon par, nahin toh aur kisi kaam ka nahi hai inke liye... 😉 u know na... It will take time for them... Bas isiliye...
jab ye dono baaki sab ke liye ready ho jayenge n baaki sab ke baad, ff hi khatm ho jaayega😉... Only an epilogue then...
Chaliye koi ni ...jaisa aap theek samjhein...😉😆but jab ye baki sab😉ke liye ready ho jayen tab bhej dena😃
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