Thanks a lot...😳... Will have to do something like that... What I thot, was beautiful, but, its looking horrible right now...😡Originally posted by: achiever
Oh.. dear. u r having writer's block.. tht i normally get.. 😆 so dont worry!
take a brk from story and AshuNidhi completely.. do something else.. dont pressure urself and wen u think like u wanna write something come and rite.. and dont worry.. it will b best watever u will put it.. 😳
yeah.. i read the last chapter.. and i kinda like Ashu.. k.. i will start from chpter 3 thn..😆Originally posted by: Aazeen02
But, Manisha di, Things have improvised from Chapter 3... They are not that bad anymore... Infact, they will get better, one after the other na...😳... So, if u r not reading it, coz of the torture n all, u can read now, Ab torture ka Small T bhi nahin hai...😃... And by the way, welcome to my thrd, for ur comments...😳... N I have replied to ur comment on Pg. 24 of ur fic...😃... I guess, u havnt read at yet...
Ask me!😆 Dont worry.. jst get ur mind off of AshuNidhi.. and u will b fine..😆Originally posted by: Aazeen02
Thanks a lot...😳... Will have to do something like that... What I thot, was beautiful, but, its looking horrible right now...😡
CHAP-5
"Maa, ye humesha se hi aise they?" " Nahin, 3 Saal se." "3 saal, matlab... Meri internship khatam hone ke baad se?" "Haan tabhi se.." "Par aisa kya hua thha ma ? Wo ladkiyon ke sath thoda awkward feel karte they, par unmein itni strong disliking nahin thi.." "Baat tab ki hai, jab wo tumhe PG ke liye coach kar raha tha... Main Ashu ke peeche padi rehti thi kea b usey shadi kar leni chahiye, par wo har baar ye keh ke taal deta tha,"kuch saal baad"... Maine kitni baar poocha bhi, ke koi ladki pasand hai toh bata de, par har baar taal jaata... Phir tera PG mein selection ho gaya, aur tu Delhi chali gayi... Tab Ashu kaafi free ho gaya tha, mujhe laga, issey pehle, ke ye phir se khud ko busy kar le, humein iski shadi karwa deni chahiye... Ittefaq se, unhi dino, Armaan ki sagaai thi, in dono ki bohot purani friend, Avantika se... Tab, wahan, maine Avantika ki choti behen, Shivika ko dekha... Mujhe wo bohot pasand aayi. Dekh kar aisa lag raha tha, jaise bilkul Avantika ki chhavi hai... Maine aur Baba ne, wahin, uske parents se baat kar li... Ashu ko toh wo log pehle se hi jaante they, unhe Ashu bohot pasand thha, toh bas, Ashu aur Shivika se poochna hi thha... Maine jab Ashu se poocha, toh taal gaya, bola, abhi shadi ke bare mein kuch nahin socha... Wahin, Shivika, ko bhi aitraaz nahin tha, toh rishta pakka karne se pehle, humne dono ka milna, ek doosre ko samjhna, zyada zaroori samjha...
Ashu iss rishte se bilkul khush nahi tha, usney saaf taur par manaa kar diya... Par main zidd par adh gayi... sab khaana-peena chod diya... Kuch hi dino mein meri tabiyat bohot kharaab rehne lagi, toh, aakhir-kaar, meri khatir, usne Shivika se milne ke liye haami bhar di...
Dono milne lage... Aksar, shopping areas mein wo usko bulaati thi, kuch na kuch shopping karke, baahar lunch ya dinner karne chale jaate... Kuch dinon ke baad usney sabke liye, surprise party rakhi... Usney hum teeno ko, Armaan & uske parents ko, Avantika & uske parents ko, aur Apne ek 'So-called Friend' & uske parents ko bulaya... Aur secretively, Police ko bhi... Sab log aaye, par Shivika & uska friend hi nahi they, sabko laga, that she had played a prank on them, But, tabhi she came with him in a red attire & introduced him as her 'hubby'... Shivika's parents were very annoyed at this... Toh pata hai, kya boli- " Papa, apni aankhein kholiye... Maine toh infact aapko bacha liya.. Ye Ashutosh aur uska ye best friend, dono aapki property par nazar rakhe hue hain... Armaan ko laga, Avantika ko phasaana bohot aasaan hai, friend jo thehri, toh ye Ashutosh ko laga, uska chance toh gaya, toh wo mujh par line maarne laga, ke Avantika nahi, toh uski behen hi sahi, uske pita ki property se kuch toh haasil ho hi jaayega... Main jaan boojh kar isko shopping par bulati thi, jab bhi poochti, ye le loon, wo le loon, toh har baar kehta, tumhare pita ka paisa hai, tumhari marzi... Baad mein jab humara ho jaayega, toh phir dekhoonga ke tum kaise kharch karti ho.."
Ashu ko iss baat se bohot shock laga, ke kaise, iss ladki ne uske words ko manipulate kar diya tha... Wo ussey, ye kehta thha, ke ye paise uske pita ke hain, wo jaise chahe, kharch kar sakti hai... aur shadi ke baad humare paise, yaani, jo Ashu khud kamaata hai, wo uske bhi honge, aur phir usey kaise kharch karna hai, wo baad mein dekh lenge..
Uss party mein, Shivika ne, hum par tak ilzaam laga daaley they... Usko ye baat pata thi, ke, meri ek beti thi, lekin uski bohot hi jaldi death ho gayi thi, matlab, within few days... Usney hum par, apni beti ka, Infanticide karne ka ilzaam thop daala... Itna bada ilzaam, main toh poori tarah se toot gayi thi...
In sabse bhi uska dil bhala nahi hua toh, Armaan aur uske Ghar waalon par Dowry maangne ka aarop laga diya... Aur Nidhi, main Armaan aur uske ghar waalon ko jaanti hoon, aur main iss baat ko hargiz nahin maan sakti thi ke un logon ne kabhi aisa kiya hoga, wo khud hi millionaire businessman hain, wo unke kuch crores ki property ka kya karenge...?
Lekin phir Avantika ne baat sambhaali, usney Shivika ko bohot daant lagayi, iss baat ko bhi nakaar diya ke, Armaan n uski family ne aisi koi maang ki hai... Hum par bhi infanticide wali baat par side liya... Uss ladke ke parents ko shak hua toh unhone apne bte ko threaten karna shuru kiya, toh wo ladka, apne pita ke darr se, sab kuch ugal diya... Usne khud qubool kiya ke, ye saari baatein n situations, uski aur Shivi ki planning thi... Unhone jaan boojh kar Ashu ko phasaana chaaha, taaki, wo dono shaadi kar sakein...
Shivi ke parents ne uske sath saare, rishte-naate todd diye.. Uski wajah se, unko hum sabke saamne, itni beizatti sehni padi... Uss ladke ke parents ne bhi, Unhe apnaane se manaa kar diya... Wo pilice waale ne unn dono ko warning deke chodd diya, aur Sabki reputation ko bachaye rakhne ke liye, iss baat ka bhi waada kiya, ke iss party ke bare mein, kisi ko bhi pata nahi chalega...
Shivika phir, apne pati ke sath, chali gayi... Suna hai, London mein hain dono...
Bas tabhi se, Ashu ke aatm sammaan ko thes lag gayi thi... Uska ego hurt ho gaya tha... Meri bhi himmat nahi hui, ussey, dubaara ussey shadi ki baat karne ki... Par Nidhi, mujhe lagta hai, wo kisi ko chahta tha pehle se hi, Jiska wo intezar kar raha tha, lekin ab shadi ki baat hi nahi karta..."
During all this, Nidhi had covered her mouth with her hands, to coverup the shock on her face... " Itna kuch ho gaya Dr. Ashutosh ki life mein, aur mujhe pata bhi nahi chala?" "Beta, tu tab Delhi mein thi, tere baba aur DB bhi wahin shift ho gaye they tere sath, tab tak ke liye, isliye tujhe pata nahi chala... Aur phir iss incident ko bohot confedential rakha gaya tha..." "Par Dr. Ashutosh ne bhi kabhi, mujhse iss baat ka zikr nahi kiya.." "Wo to hiss bare mein sochna bhi nahin chaahta, hum sab, uss baat ko ek bure sapne ki tarah, bhula rahe hain... Isiliye toh, kal jab tumne, uski shadi ki baat kit hi, toh kaise baat ko palat gaya tha..." "Bas Nidhi, ek hi khwahish hai meri, isko wo ladki mil jaaye, jise ye chaahta tha... Lekin kaise baat karoon issey?" "Maa, aap fikr mat kijiye... Dekhte hain kya kiya jaa sakta hai..."
THE NEXT MORNING...
Ashu observed Nidhi to be extremely quiet, Neither during their morning walk& jog, nor at the breakfast table, she uttered a single word, except, what she is asked for... She was actually thinking over Ashutosh & his past & a way, to ask about the girl, he liked... On the other hand, Nidhi's silence was becoming unbearable to him... He thought "Maine kal shayad, kuch zyaada hi rudely, ussey baat ki... May be, wo phir se darr gayi ho, ya usey bura lag gaya ho... yaw o abhi bhi apni purani yaadon se nikal nahi paa rahi ho...kuch toh karna hi padega..."
Nidhi was sitting on the sette in her room, playing with the pendant of the only gold chain that she wore, pondering over her thoughts, when Ashutosh came & sat next to her, with his favourite guitar in hand... "Nidhi, maine tumhaare liye, ek gaana prepare kiya hai... sunaoon?" Nidhi looked at him, & smiled to continue... Ashu started tapping his feet and then played on his guitar, a beautiful tune...
Inn aansuon se kisko, kya hua haasil...
Maana kehna hai aasaan, nibhaana hai mushkil...
Phir bhi ae yaar mere, sunn le meri iltejaa...
Bhool jaa... Jo hua usey bhool jaa...
Hai kasam tujhe, muskura...
Khud ko yu na de tu sazaa...
Unn yaadon ko tu bhool ja...
Wo toh nahin tha teri wafaaon ke kaabil...
Jaane kya sochkar tuney de diya apna dil...
Iss baar dil ka sauda, karna na yu bewajaa...
Bhool jaa... Jo hua usey bhool jaa...
Hai kasam tujhe, muskura...
Khud ko yu na de tu sazaa...
Unn yaadon ko tu bhool ja...
Teri zindagi teri hai, kisi ki amaanat nahin...
Jab chaahe todd de, aisi ek imaarat nahin...
Iss baar dil ka sauda, karna na yu bewajaa...
Bhool jaa... Jo hua usey bhool jaa...
Hai kasam tujhe, muskura...
Khud ko yu na de tu sazaa...
Unn yaadon ko tu bhool ja...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a01ntAEcTYs
Nidhi, very indulgently heard the song... When the song got over, she clapped for him saying, "Kitni ajeeb baat hai na Dr. Ashutosh, Ye gaana, mere par toh kya, aap par bhi, kitna suit karta hai na?" Till now, Ashu had a smile on his face, but, it disappeared, the moment, he heard her saying this... "Tum... tumhe ye sab maa ne bataaya?" "Hmmm... maine poocha tha..." "Nidhi, dekho, main iss bare mein baat nahin karna chahta... Main wo sab bhool chuka hoon..." " Hmmm... Aap kehte ho, lekin bhoole nahin ho... Wohi toh main keh rahi thi, Bhool ja..." "Haan toh bhool toh gaya hoon..." "Nahin Dr. Ashutosh, agar aisa hota, toh aap ab bhi sab females se chidhte kyu hain?" " Bas, ab mujhe kisi par vishwaas nahi hota" "Par aap jaise mujse kehte hain, ke har male bura nahin hota, waise hi har female buri nahi hoti..." "Jaanta hoon..." "Toh ab dil ka sauda karna nay u bewajaa..." "Nidhi... maine usey kabhi apna dil nahin diya tha..." "Toh kisi aur ko diya tha?" Unconsciously, he nodded a yes... But, then to correct, vigourosly, nodded a no... "Jhoot mat boliye Dr. Ashutosh... Kaun hai wo?" "Koi nahi..." "Aap mujhe bhi nahin bataaenge?" "NO... N.O. NO!" "Par kyu Dr. Ashutosh? Main toh aapki best friend hoon na?" "Still a no..." "Achha theek hai... naam mat bataiye... ye bataiye, main jaanti hoon usko?" "Haan..." " Achha... kab se?" "Pata nahi..." "Mujhse badi hai?" "Pata nahin..." "Aapko uski age pata nahi hai?" "Pata hai.." "Toh bataiye na..." "Tumhe kya karna hai Nidhi?" "Achha ye bataiye, usey pata hai, that you like her?" "Pata nahin..." "Toh aapne, ussey kaha kyu nahi ab tak..." "Wait kar raha tha, usko uske career mein settle hone ke liye..." "Toh ab ho gayi?" "Haan..." "Toh ab kya problem hai? Go & propose her..." "Usney pakka manaa kar dena hai..." "Par aap itne pessimist kyu ban rahe hain? Ho sakta hai wo maan jaaye..." "pata nahin..." "Achha main pataa loongi usko, aapke behalf par... Agar manaa bhi karegi, toh at the max kya karegi... Thappad maaregi? Main khaa loongi aapke liye..." "Tum pagal ho gayi ho Nidhi..." "Aapko jo samajhna hai, samajh lijiye... Thats final... Main baat karoongi ussey.." "Koi faayda nahin hai..." "Mujhe kuch nahi sunna...Kahan rehti hai wo, India mein, ya kahin aur...?" "Nidhi... M not going to answer any of your questions now... Chup chaap aaraam karo, main jaa raha hoon..." And Ashutosh stood to leave her room, but she stood behind him... He went out of her room, she followed him... "Rukiye Dr. Ashutosh... aap mujhe bina bataaye nahi jaa sakte..." and she held his wrist in her hands... "Nidhi... ye bachpana chodo... mujhe jaane do..." "No, no, no,no, NO!" "Nidhi please..." "NAHIN!!!!" "Nidhi please..." Nidhi again shook her head in a no... This time, he lost it... He shouted on her..."PLEASE NIDHI...!!!!! LEAVE ME...!!!!" Nidhi got way too scared, the way he shoute on her... Instantly tears welled up in her eyes... She immediately, backed off from him & ran into her room & locked herself up... The moment, she locked, Ashu realised what he did... Her backing off was an alarming bell to him, she's again going into her shell... He has to talk to her... RIGHT NOW...!!!!
He went on to her door, and slightly, banged on it... "M... M sorry Nidhi... Very-very sorry... Please open the door... please..." Still there was no response from her... The more time was passing, the more tensed, he was getting... This has turned into something horrible right now... "Sorry Nidhi... Main ab dubaara tum par kabhi gussa nahin honga... Please Nidhi... Open the door.. You are scaring me sweety..." Again no response... He was getting very-very restless... "Nidhi... please, darwaaza kholo... Achha theek hai, main tumko uss ladki ka naam batata hoon... Ab toh please darwaaza khol do?" Still Ashutosh could see no response... Then suddenly, the door of her room Was open... And she peeked outside the door & asked, "Pakka?" " Haan baba, pakka..." "Toh phir aayiye andar..." Ashu hesitantly entered into the room... "Haan... Boliye... kaun hai wo?" Ashutosh was getting really nervous... Sweat was clearly visible on his forehead... He opened loose, his collar button of his shirt... "Boliye...! I'm waiting... Kaun hai wo?" "Wo... wo... wo ladki hai..." "Haan boliye na..." "W...wo... wo TUM ho Nidhi..." Nidhi was hell shocked, with what she heard... "Kaun...? Kya kaha aapne?" "It's you Nidhi... I love you..." Hearing this, Nidhi took three steps backward... Ashu came near her, to say something... But she hit a big slap on his cheek & said... " I hate you... I hate you Dr. Ashutosh... I hate you from now on... Did you hear me... I hate you..."
Ok guys... Thats it... Happy reading... Happy weekend... Comments welcome...
Just wait and watch buddy... I won't disclose anything right now... Ok... Hum Nidhi se uss thappad ka compensation le lenge...😆😳😃... Thanx a lot deepali, for such a sweet review...⭐️Originally posted by: deepali.rock
Nice development aazeen. Whole chap was really smooth,
i was wondering jhatka kab aaeyga, and then it came in the end. So ashu loves nidhi haan, not bad, infact dats really gud. But ashu ko thapad pada. I can understand nidhi's state of mind but still dat slap and hate u for ashu sadened me. Dont worry i m not complaining, i knw its needed for the story to move forward. Lets see how nidhi reacts and ashu assures her. I knw it will take time but she will accept him. As for the slap, make sure nidhi compensates for it when ashni are finally together.:-)
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