OS: Without You*Removed*

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Posted: 11 years ago

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asrcraze

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Posted: 11 years ago

I still can't believe I res'd first !!

I was so sleepy I thought I'll be on the tenth page pakka !!

You know what I knew this wasn't a sad OS...When I read the first few lines even then...When I read it the first time even then...

I thought she must be staying at her Maika for a day or two with Kids...Since they already had two kids, it didn't even occur to me that she could be pregnant 😆
And he was talking about the next kid already !! 🤣

When Garima said, you promised ...
What would they do with such a husband for their daughter ! They don even get to stay with their daughter !🤣

But then, he's such a dream husband ! He couldn't stay away from her and Since she couldn't come back to Shantivan, he decided to stay there...Awww

Think twice before calling any of your work crap.. You told me right? Maar Kayegi !!
It was Awesome :)

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Posted: 11 years ago

I let the kid res first today

Enjoy La😆

Un'res

Firstly, did you call this crap😲...

I knew it tera screw dhila hain 😆

Secondly, when I read the first three four lines I was scared which way is this story going

but then I thought of your line "trust me" and I did

and what to say Lazy "I LOVE IT"

Only one day without his wife aur ye halat hain🤣

Garima's tears were the cherry on top

bechare garima aur shashi

aise damad kisiko na mile😆

Glad he decided to stay

nahi to meri under ki aurat jaag uth raha tha😆

you need not thank me because it was my pleasure to read it twice

*hugs*

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adithyan

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Posted: 11 years ago

LOVELY...

u scared me for few seconds yaar...i was afraid something happened to khushi and kids...

he cant keep himself sane without her even for 15 hrs...

3 kids and he is ready for 4th one...lol...

can u continue this?

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Paru

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Posted: 11 years ago

RES ...coz I know you're worth it 😆

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For a second there I thought you had given us angst Aalsi which is fine normally ... but abhi anyways with Little weirdo being shoved down our throats, I need happy ... & happy is what you gave ⭐️

Just one kostin -- pray tell us why Arnav ji performs in the forum's OS/FF's only 😆
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Farah

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Posted: 11 years ago

Stop saying it's crappy..& I'll say what I said before, loved it..Loved Arnav..

can't even stay away from his wife for 15 hours..now that's a loving husband!😉

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Kamala

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Posted: 11 years ago

I don't think that it is crappy OS. It is beautifully written . Initially I thought that something wrong must had happen to Kushi but it turned to be a happy ending.

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