Ariya : Hamsafar (ch 15c pg 64 ) ( 4-2-13 ) - Page 15

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Posted: 12 years ago
wa...arjun sudhar raha hai...rathore tum to kya mein bhi shocked...

par jo bhi hai...awesome hai...

hmmm arjun and riya together...

jungle ...barish...ek chopadi...saba maar dala yaar...itna hot percap...

jaldi update kar...
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Posted: 12 years ago
sorry for late comment
and it was such a romantic one
Arjun finally controlling his anger
and the precap was so😳
please continue😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update! so they are looking at each other with love... can't wait to read abt tt! please update soon! i am so excited to read abt the jungle update!
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Posted: 12 years ago
CHAPTER 8

they both immidiatly go inside the cottage.
ufff thankgod aaj ki raat guzaarne ke liye koi to jaga mili lekin hamare kapre (clothes)ye to puri tarha bhig gaye .and i'm feeling cold said riya
haan kapde to mere bhi bhig gaye hain lekin he move his eyes here and there in cottage and he saw a dress Aweigh (latka howa) on wall.he go and take that clothes to riya and say ye to ek hi bande ke kapre (clothes) hain siad arjun worried...
ab kya karein said riya worried too..
ek kaam kar sakte hain tum kurta pehn lo mein pant pehn leta hoon said arjun
kya???mein kurta pehn loon wahan tak to thike hai lekin pant aap pehn lo sir mujhe yahaan kuch thike nahi lag raha hai siad riya shockely.
acha thike hai tum pehn lo said arjun
par aap aise hi rahenge ask riya
aur dusra koi option bhi nahi hai said arjun
tab to aap ko sardi lag jayegi said riya
to kya hua kam se kam tum to comfortable fel kargi na said arjun .
riya give him pant chalein sir turn ur face to wall.
they both change their clothes and turn back in front of eachother.they both was trying t ake their eye's away from eachother.arjun move and sit in a corner while riya also sir in another corner. arjun burn the wood .
and sit back to the corner and stair at eachother for a moment .
riya : arjun sir i'm getting bored
arjun : to kya uth ke naachna hai
riya : very funny sir sach mein i'm getting bore chalo sing karte hain.
arjun : pagal ho mujhe nahi aata koi gana wana.
riya : acha agar mein start karun to aap mera saath denge plz .
arjun : ok
(pink is for riya's line and green is for arjun's line)

(she standup and move to wall)
Saans me teri saans mili toh mujhe saans aayi
Mujhe saans aayi, Mujhe saans aayi

Rooh ne chhu li jism ki khushboo tu jo paas aayi
Tu jo paas aayi, tu jo paas aayi

Saans me teri saans mili toh mujhe saans aayi
Mujhe saans aayi, Mujhe saans aayi
(she stand with wall)

(arjun also standup and was comming slowly slowly to her )
Kab tak hosh sambhale koi
Hosh ude toh ud jaane do

Dil kab seedhi raah chala hai
Raah mude toh mud jaane do

Tere khayal me doob ke aksar achhi lagi tanhaai
Saans me teri saans mili toh mujhe saans aayi
Mujhe saans aayi, Mujhe saans aayi


Raat teri baahon me kate toh
Subah badi halki lagti hai

Aankh me rehne lage ho kya tum
Kyu chhalki chhalki lagti hai

Mujhko phir se chhu ke bolo
(he come more closer to her and touch her face)
Meri kasam kya khaai
Saans me teri saans mili toh mujhe saans aayi
Mujhe saans aayi, Mujhe saans aayi

Rooh ne chhu li jism ki khushboo tu jo paas aayi
Tu jo paas aayi, tu jo paas aayi...
(they both was staring in eachother's eyes )


suddenly arjun quickly move his hand from her face and move back and say sorry wo mein song mein itna kho gaya tha pata hi nahi chala kab tumhare itne paas aagaya i'm really ver sorry.
riya : mene aap se koi shiqayet ki??? and smile a littel

sorry guys for such a short update but kya karun adde pe masruf hoti hoon.
btw do tell me how was the chapter wth ur lovely comment's...

Saba-ramisa
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kaveriw2008 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
this time i will comment...but first come to adda
Edited by kaveriw2008 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice romantic update.. wonder what happens next πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow wow romantic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! need more!πŸ˜³πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Queen.Bee

nice romantic update.. wonder what happens next πŸ˜‰

thanks dear πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nivanthi2

wow wow romantic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! need more!πŸ˜³πŸ˜‰

haye thanks dearπŸ˜›
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg i waz too lost in d sng awsomeee updatee
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