ff "Truth makes our future Dark" On Hold

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this is another my new ff.this will be dark ff.

              "TRUTH MAKES OUR FUTURE DARK"

PROLOGUE:

              my present was beautiful with my fiance but
              truth about my past has come out today .
              today is the day i got married to my love
              "Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada"
            
               WHAT WILL HAPPEN TO OUR FUTURE???
              
 
                will
my husband accept me after knowing my past or
                will he ignore me?

           
 
character sketch:

Arnav Singh Raizada/ ASR:
                             one of the great businessmen in the world.
                              he is married to Khushi  mehra.
 
Khushi Mehra/Khushi Singh Raizada:
                              she is wife of Mr.Arnav singh Raizada in
                              present but what about her past?

Meena Mehra   :

                           khushi's mom

Nani     :
             ASR and Anjali nani


Anjali  jha:

               ASR sister and married to Shyam jha
               



more characters will revealed later.
                  
can anyone guess what happened to khushi in past.?
 
what will be Arnav's reaction after knowing her dark past. ?

will khushi's dark past makes her future also dark ?

will Arnav support her ?
                       


part1 =pgno: 2
part 2= pgno: 8
part 3=pgno: 12
part4(a)=pgno:13
part4(b)=pgno:17
part 5 = pgno: 23
part 6 = pg no:27
           
 

                 


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Nice start
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nice story line..
waiting for d update
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Edited by ilakia - 11 years ago
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seems interesting😊

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halo frnds i am updating part1 . this update will be little short.
more characters will be added in this story


                                                                   PART 1

this story begins with ARHI marriage and one hour After their marriage Arnav comes to know aboutr khushi's Past (half truth)


in RM:


after Arnav-khushi's marriage they all reached RM and did some rasam.

after one hour Arnav received one parcel he opened it saw some photos, letters.. then he received one phone call and after that he  become shocked and shouted ...


Arnav     : (shouted) KHUSHI...

on hearing his voice whole family came to living room  to see what happened, then Arnav came near khushi and throw those photos and letters on her face and said


Arnav     :
why did you do this to me khushi? why? you know
                   i loved you from bottom of  my heart, but you broke
                   my heart..

Khushi and everyone was shocked.then she told him...


Khushi  :
(crying)Arnavji please believe me. i really love you
                   and i dint hurt you.please believe me.


Arnav     :
No khushi i wont believe you. you have cheated me
                   and my feelings.



Khushi  :
(crying) i didnt cheat you arnavji . my (cuts off by Arnav)


Arnav     :
then you could have said this truth before itself but
                   what you did. you have broken my trust.



Khushi  :
(crying) believe me what you heard was just half truth,
                   and. (cuts off by Arnav) 


Arnav    :
half truth??? what a joke.


Khushi  : (crying)
Arnavji what he said was half truth. please just
                  listen to me i will tell you what happened in my past.
                  please give me one chance to prove me innocent.


Arnav    :
what innocent ?? i dont think so you are innocent and
                  from now i broke this marriage. we are no more husband
                  and wife. i dont need any characterless girl like you in
                  my life.



with that he broke her mangalsutra from her neck which he tied just before an hour. then he erase her sindoor from her maang .

while he doing this khushi was lifeless . she forgot to breath. and her heart skipped to beat.

meena came forward and slapped Arnav for his act and then she told him.



Meena  :
Arnav please hear her once.she didnt do any mistake.
                 it was me and my family who made her past dark, she is
                 very innocent.

hearing this Anjali came forward  and said...

Anjali     :
  chote i believe her please give her atleast one chance.
                    i know khushiji is nice girl and now she is bahu of this
                    house.


Arnav     :
No di she is not bahu and moreover she is not my wife.
                   i hate her to the hell.


Nani       :
chote you are doing biggest mistake, (cuts off by arnav)

arnav got angry and broke the window glass which was near him


Arnav     :
its better i may leave this family and this country forever,
                   because you all are my family but you are supporting her
                  

on hearing this khushi comes to sense and she went near him and said..

Khushi    : (crying) its okay Arnav , you dont have to live your family
                     its better i leave you  and moreover i will leave this world
                     because  without you my life is incomplete .
                     I LOVE YOU ARNAVJI...   I LOVE YOU...

with that she took two steps back from him to near broken window glass and took one broken piece of glass and cut her neck and her neck started to bleed then she felt down on the ground.

On seeing this everyone  was shocked and Arnav was dumbfolded,
and his heart was stopped for a moment.

to be continue...


Is khushi alive or death?

what will Arnav going to do now?

what is going to happen next?

what happened in khusi's past?

who send those photos and letters? and moreover what is written in that letter ? whose photo is that?

whose call Arnav received and what that caller told Arnav?


frnds no Tomatos plsss. its just starting i will give you next part by 2mrow afternoon
 
comment me if you like

i will try to update "revenge by my own daughter " at today ni8 or 2mrow mrng.







Edited by jenji08 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting story

luvd it

updt soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved it... do continue :d

thanks u