Arjuhi OS#11: Pyar Ko Ho Janay Do...Completed - Page 9

Serious ally Ana you wrote something which attract me always
I read it twice n still not over
Simply superb writing skills you had
Awsomeee
I imagine Arjun's condition
N hahahahaha tht " hmmm " scene make me laugh
How can you write simply awsomeee things which usually happen regularly between husband wife :)
Dammm m gone addicted to your os

Kahatm karo then ilk comment. Aise stop karne ke liye punishment

Originally posted by: moonkmh

Di,m sorry i was out today.nt abl to read d update til nw. Wl surely read at nyt.

NP madhu baby...
i will end this tonight...stretched it too much😆😆

Originally posted by: kkian

oh god ye sab sapna tha???????:( u r such a teaser;> now m waiting fr thier walk;) plz updt sooon:p

yup yup...sapna...😉😆😆
walk tau bus awain hi hai yaar😉...you will see whats comin up😳

Originally posted by: cooljaya11

Serious ally Ana you wrote something which attract me always
I read it twice n still not over
Simply superb writing skills you had
Awsomeee
I imagine Arjun's condition
N hahahahaha tht " hmmm " scene make me laugh
How can you write simply awsomeee things which usually happen regularly between husband wife :)
Dammm m gone addicted to your os

thanku so much partner...but for this part...you gave me great ideas otherwise i was dumb...hehehe
arjun is living on the edge...at a very crucial point where he has to choose between his desires n his wife desires
and you my KMH friends are what who inspires me to write these OS's n give me confidence with each coming story...I owe you guys...
hehehe...arjun's dream now haunting him which ae already haunted by her 😉😆😆
i just wanna bring the real flavour in this OS as i bring in Javeda zindagi...😳

Originally posted by: mansi_47

Kahatm karo then ilk comment. Aise stop karne ke liye punishment

OOo meri mannu...mujhe punishment yaar...
abh kia karoon g...jitna time mila us main likh dala...😕

Hahaha then v r here for another tips
Now they r going for walk
Right so u add like arohi demand ice cream from street vendor first USA return deny cuz of hygiene but then melt to see sad arohi
Arohi eating ice cream with unmmm hummm yummm n it's enough to melt n lost for mr. USA hahahaha then he wipe ice cream from corner of the lips with his thumb n Thts the first straw for arohi starting to feel for her dear despo hubby
Rofl m going to too much romantic now hehehe but kya Karu tumharaaa os he hi aesa

oh ye to complete nahi hai😲

Originally posted by: cooljaya11

Hahaha then v r here for another tips
Now they r going for walk
Right so u add like arohi demand ice cream from street vendor first USA return deny cuz of hygiene but then melt to see sad arohi
Arohi eating ice cream with unmmm hummm yummm n it's enough to melt n lost for mr. USA hahahaha then he wipe ice cream from corner of the lips with his thumb n Thts the first straw for arohi starting to feel for her dear despo hubby
Rofl m going to too much romantic now hehehe but kya Karu tumharaaa os he hi aesa

ahem ahem...☺️
ye yahan kia ho raha hai...OMG OMG...itna romance...😳
jaya comeon mujhe apni kissi SR update ka link do...yaan hoti romance part ka...😉
i am so in mood to read that now partner...☺️

Originally posted by: M00NA

oh ye to complete nahi hai😲

i thought finish hogaya hai...😒

MOONA...i am working on it dear...
don't worry...aj aar yaan parr😉