Arjuhi OS#11: Pyar Ko Ho Janay Do...Completed - Page 11

dishdirection

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

beautiful update waiting for it to complete and even a update of btoomh

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cooljaya11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

superb ending

so finally its arohi who take step

hahahaahah

kya turn mara he

wohooo

superb

i have to read it one more time

muahhh jaan

no plz my boomh time ok

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Madhusmita das

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

La la la la la la
kya cuteness tha inke lovestory main. OMG! M drming drming nw. Di,let me go to my drmland nw...

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lazyblues

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

The os was beautiful seriously. Very good one "Di"
I like the impatient but understanding arjun very much.
He helped her everday . And that is very cute of him. Their 1st walk was funny n cute.
Arohi is very cute in this one.
Oh. That lingerie shop incident 😳
And manali made me go 😳 .
Wonderful union of the two soul.
Hehehe that couch god good punishment for being there and making arjun seelp there 😆
Special mentions "girne nahi dunga" that made me aww.
U no Di Idk y but I luv arrange marriage concept where ppl tow people become one. They help and support each other through thick n thin of their life. I don't oppose luv marriage it's one of the best things in the world. but the concept of arranged marriage makes me think how understanding two ppl are and how they spend their life together.

Edited by mansi_47 - 12 years ago

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Arjuhisis

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

wow what a superb one -

will read once more and will comment ana

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Rimpi_kmh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

oo super uodate... honeymoon is so romantic n ...😉

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Pranjal K.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

Fabulous 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Fabulous is the only word comes to mind after reading a beautiful OS written by you 😃 its a Most cutest & Beautiful Write up :⭐️ Thanks you so much dear for writing it, Loved it totally. 👏

I always Adore this Concept where two people gets connected by Souls😃 the bond of relationship is created with Slow & soothing steps of love. 😊...u have beautifully painted the canvas of Arjuhi Love with care, affection, Romance, Desires , shyness .,,,,,wow i am at loss of words really beautiful !!! 👏

I loved the beautiful pharse of life discribed by you ,,,,,,,,Dheere dheere badhati nazdikiyaan between two of them is just tooo cute 😉 The wat arjun takes care of her each & every need & tried to fullfill them is cutee 😃 the awkwardness & hesitance was visible on Arjuhi's face. kitchen scene was beautiful I loved the way u are portraying their cuteness her innocence, pure angelic beauty engrossed in work 😳 & Arjun stealing glances at her sometime & sometime his gaze fix on her wondering how can someone be sooo Cute 😊 Wohhaaa the dream was super sizzling dear 😉 u rocked it completely ...fantastic !!!

The bestest part was when first time Arjun hold her hand while walking ...Sooo cute yaar the way he said "girne nahi dunga " was ubber cute 😃 Rashi & Shefali are sweetest yaar ...loved the sweet bond between nanad bhabhi :) Arjun wanted to buy night wear for her but her hesitance didnt let him force her 😃 i just loved this man yaar ...he is Sooo lovable & decent ...he is sooo perfect 👏 I just loved the honeymoon sequance Finally Arohi took a step forward 😉 & Finally the two bodies became one soul 😊

Last part was super fantabulous 👏...Loved the way described their togetherness.☺️,,,,,,,,It was sooo romantic & peaceful .Amazing Ana Loved it totally . Super hotty hawt update dear.☺️ but reading their innocence & their fragrance of pure love is like a sheer bliss 😳...U are such a Star writer yaar ...Loved it ⭐️

Thank you for letting me know abt this ,,,i was an awesome read 😊 Sorry for long reply 😳

Kudos to you dear !!! Bless you ...keep writing 😊

Love

Pranjal.

Edited by -pranjal- - 12 years ago

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karanika_praja

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Posted: 12 years ago

#108

v v v nyc 😊 awsome 😆

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zoya_naziya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#109

A beautiful and a perfect ending:) They went as two and came back as one:):) Wow kya baat kahi hai apne:)

Their first walk was cute and funny:):)

Arjun jitna understanding person sabko milna chahiye:):)

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Arjuhisis

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Posted: 12 years ago

#110

wow ana what a romantic one - their honeymoon has done the trick - honeymoon always give the newly weds the required comfort to become one - Honeymoon always does the magic

luved this beautiful story ana - its another golden feather in ur cap

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