RishBala FF~A Heart's Obsession~

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Greetings all! This is my first ever story, but I love the show Madhubala so much. So I couldn't help myself. All remarks welcome! The character sketch is as follows.



Summary - A dark story depicting an unexpected turn of events, once a girl by the name Madhubala publicly humiliates the infamous philanderer Rishabh Kundra. The mysterious superstar takes matters into his own hands, changing the fate of that one girl who dared ruin his pride. The story continues with the journey of these two different individuals. Thus, bringing in the question whether they would actually fall for each other in the process of this cruel game started by the ruthless Prince of Darkness in the name of revenge.


Rishabh Kundra - A star icon, a business tycoon & the man of every girl's dreams. He is a handsome devil, whose arrogant and flamboyant lifestyle has made him the topic of every magazine & newspaper. Despite everything there's something amiss.

Madhubala - She is a high spirited girl who values her family more than anything in the world. She is courageous and does not tolerate injustice. A classic beauty, whose charms works like magic on everyone. She never had proper exposure of the cruel world having brought up midst the heavy protection of her family. Therefore, quite naive.

Balraj Chaudhary - Madhubala's actual father. He's an evil, autocratic, blood-hungry man who is filthy rich, but abuse and subjugates the helpless people. He was married twice. The first wife died from childbirth and the second fled with the unborn daughter and the stepdaughter before he kills them, as Balraj only wanted an heir for his wealth.

Padmini Chaudhary - She is Madhubala's mother. She fled from Balraj's wrath to save her unborn child. She is a kind hearted woman, to whom family comes first. She loves both her daughters equally.

Trishna Chaudhary - A girl who is beauty conscious and spends half of the day pampering herself or shopping. She has a temper herself, inherited from Balraj, her father. She loves Madhu so dearly and the two share their secrets with each other like friends do.

Shamsher Mallik - He is a film producer & a rival of RK's stepfather. He & his sister Roma gave shelter to Padmini, when she was in need. He considers Madhu & Trishna as his own daughters.

Roma Mallik - Shamsher's sister and a popular actress herself. She is Padmini's childhood best friend. Therefore, helped her during her hard times like an own sister.


Chapter Index

Chapter 1 - Page 02
Chapter 2 - Page 06
Chapter 3 - Page 08
Chapter 4 - Page 12
Chapter 5 - Page 17
Chpater 6 - Page 23
Chapter 7 - Page 26
Chapter 8 - Page 37
Chapter 9 - Page 54
Chapter 10 - Page 67
Chapter 11 - Page 77
Chapter 12 - Page 99
Chapter 13 - Page 110
Chapter 14 - Page 122


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sounds nice...!👍🏼
Do continue..
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Thanks all for the encouragement! I'll try to update as soon as possible, if not tonight. 😊

Much love
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Very Interesting!
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Originally posted by: Mlle_Fabuleux

Thanks all for the encouragement! I'll try to update as soon as possible, if not tonight. 😊


Much love
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Yay! I'll be waiting.
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Nice concept! Pls continue :)
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Chapter 1

It was a dark, starless night. The moon was nowhere to be seen either as it was hidden behind clouds. Rishabh Kundra was silently cursing his step-father for getting him into this unwanted mess. It was bad enough he despised him. He was surprised he agreed to fulfil his request in the first place. Maybe it was his arrogant ego willing to prove that he could succeed in anything or maybe it was the thirst for revenge from that one person who humiliated him.

Rishabh parked his sleek black Mercedes Benz a good mile away from the mansion hovering in the dark shadows. He started recollecting why he was here in the first place past midnight. It was all because of her.

'Madhubala..' He whispered hoarsely. 'I am a predator and tonight you are my prey.' He smirked to himself. He walked towards the mansion, getting past the great walls easily moving lithely like a jaguar seeking for his prey. He looked around and moved forward since the watchmen were nowhere in sight, and the coast was clear. He eyed the balcony of the room in which Madhubala was sleeping peacefully, clueless of her fate tonight. He climbed the huge tree near her room and got into the balcony with ease. The French-windows were left open. 'This was easier than I thought. I'm surprised she wasn't kidnapped before.' He thought to himself.

He sneaked inside the room carefully, as not to make any noise by knocking on anything. He could figure out the dark silhouette of the queen-size bed which was directly opposite the window. He strode towards it trying to get a glimpse of her. The only thing that was visible for him was her silky dark waves sprawled across the pillows. Suddenly, the moon appeared through the clouds, and she turned giving Rishabh a better view of her face. His breath hitched in his throat. She looked like a porcelain doll. Her dark fringe partly covered her closed eyes. Her face was a flawless ivory colour with high cheek bones, but there was a soft roundness that made her look kind even in sleep. Her cheeks were tinted pink from the cold air coming from outside and her full lips... Rishabh Kundra silently cursed himself. 'Bloody hell! What am I thinking?' He held back his thoughts and was back in his cold-hearted demeanour.

He went towards the door and locked it from inside. 'Don't want any disturbances.' He sneered. He checked his watch with the help of the moonlight. It was half past midnight. He went back near the bed and couldn't help but admire the sleeping form lying on the bed and knelt down beside her. 'Mine.' He thought possessively. For once he was glad he agreed to help his step-dad in his plan of destroying the Malliks. He was thanking his stars that his step-dad didn't give this task to his step-brother. The thought of him even near Madhubala boiled his blood. He got an abrupt flashback of Madhubala slapping him. He clenched his fists growling, 'Yes. Mine. Only mine.' He smirked.

Rishabh personally didn't have anything against the Malliks. His priority was Madhubala and he had his reasons for that. She was the only person who dared speak up against him. Even dared slap him and send him to jail for causing a mere accident. "Phht. Big deal! That bloody Mukund Dixit should have died that day!", he quietly muttered to himself. He knew, his stepdad was aware of his little escapade with Madhubala and knew he'd involve him in his plans at some point. 'As if I didn't see it coming. That good for nothing loser. RK knows everything. EVERYTHING', he snorted. 'And Madhubala, you are going to pay for what you did, sweetheart.' He caressed her face and she shifted slightly still sleeping soundly. Rishabh smirked. 'You sealed your own fate.. Madhubala.. Ahaan!'

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A Heart's Obsession - Chapter 2


Thanks all for the encouragement. 😊 This is the first story I'm writing. So if you all have any remarks please feel free to let me know. Hope you enjoy and thank you so much for taking time to read my story.

Love
xxx


Edited by RuthlessQueen - 10 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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First to comment!!!😃

Awesome update. I really liked that you got straight to the point with only brief details of what happened in the past. Thank you for updating :)
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Thank you so much! 😊 Glad you enjoyed it! Hugs!
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