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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
Awesome concept Jasmin.But I can't imagine Barun with other girl...Imagined Drashti with a random guy.Like the OS.Thanks for PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
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AW love the os
Thanks for pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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[QUOTE=jasminerahul]

The Train I request my readers to make a VM FOR bARUN dRASHTI on the song 'Teri meri love stories'(Title song)

I dedicate this OS to Teri Meri Love Stories fans as TMLS introduces fresh pairs.Most f my readers wanted Drashti to be paired opposite Barun.So i wrote Barun Drashti OS.

I thank my friend Ratna for making this siggy for my OS.
 
Train journeys have always fascinated Prem Mishra.Looking out through the window and touching the nature with his eyes and admiring the beauty of nature gave him pleasure.Now also he is enjoying a train journey.But his attention got diverted when a pretty girl entered the compartment and sat opposite to him.She was as beautiful as nature or even more beautiful than nature.A ravishing Princess.
She looked at him.Immediately he turned off his face as he was embarrassed to face her.He doubted if she realized that his eyes were following her.They did'nt look at each other.
After some time Prem realized that she was not there.
P:Where did she go?Why should i bother?
He went to the toilet.When he came out of the toilet he saw her standing near the door.
She was crying:Sorry...i can't live this life anymore.I am going to die.
He was shocked:My God!

She was about to jump.He held her tightly by her waist and pulled her towards him.She was shocked.
P:You decided to travel by train only to commit suicide?You did'nt get any other way to die?I won't let you die.
She burst into tears.
Sad music which flowed from her heart portrayed her pain.
Zindagi Ne Zindagi Bhar Gam Diye
Jitne Bhi Mausam Diye Sab Nam Diye] ' 3
[Jab Tadapta Hai Kabhi Apna Koi
Khoon Ke Aansoo Rula De Bebasi] ' 2
[Jee Ke Phir Karna Kya Mujhko Aisi Zindagi] ' 2
Jisne Zakhmon Ko Nahi Marham Diye
[Zindagi Ne Zindagi Bhar Gam Diye
Jitne Bhi Mausam Diye Sab Nam Diye]
Zindagi Ne Zindagi Bhar Gam Diye ...(The train)

She::Why don't you let me die?
P:I don't know.All i know is i don't want you to die.
She:I can't live without him.
P:Who?Your boy friend?
She:Yes.He cheated on me.But i loved him sincerely.Living without him is impossible.
P:You fool...are you not ashamed to die for a person who does'nt love you?Dying for yor lover is bearable.But dying for a cheater is ridiculous.If you are a human being live your life happily forgetting that cheater.
He pointed his finger at the nature:Look at the nature.It's so beautiful.I choose train over plane,so that i can see the beauty of nature.But you chose train to die.That's unfair.You don't know how nice train is.Come on...enjoy the beauty of the nature for sometime.You will be able to forget your pain caused by betrayal.
She looked at the nature or a few moments and looked at him.
She:You are right.No i feel i am getting some relief.I did a blunder by trying to commit suicide.Thanks a lot.
 


He smiled:Very good.You get down at the next station and catch a taxi and go back home.Freshen yourself.Don't think of unnecessary things.
She smiled:Yes.
The train stopped at the next station.
She:I am getting down here.Bye.
P:Bye.
She got down at the station.He kept looking at her.She turned back to get a glimpse of him as her eyes thirsted for him.
He felt an unknown happiness when she looked at him with her star like glittering eyes.Her dimpled smile made him very happy.They both felt that a mgical force was pulling them towards each other.
She thought:This stranger is not an ordinary passenger or an ordinary man in my life.He is the one who saved my life...he is the one who opened the door of hope for me.
Her heart sang:O Ajnabee Mere Ajnabee
Na Jaane Aaye Tum Kahan Se
Itna Pyaara Laaye Tum Kahan Se
Yeh Raat Bhi Hai Saji Saji
O Ajnabee Mere Ajnabee...(Main Prem ki diwani hoon).
The train moved.He waved his hands at her.She waved her hands back.

After 2 weeks...
She was dancing on stage.The song was...
Prem Meri Aankhon Mein Hain

Prem Meri Saason Mein Hain
Prem Mere Hoto Pe Hain
Prem Meri Baaton Mein Hain
Bani Bani Bani Re Bani
Prem Deewani Bani
Ab Kya Kare Dil Deewana
Hai Ab Kya Kare Dil Deewana
Lagi Lagi Lagi Re Lagi
Prem Ki Dhun Lagi
Ab Kya Kare Dil Deewana
Hai Ab Kya Kare Dil Deewana
Prem Meri Aankhon Mein Hain

Prem Meri Saason Mein Hain...(Main Prem ki diwani hoon).


She felt that Prem was watching her as an auidence.
She became shy.She thought:Why i am seeing this man everywhere?

After a few months...
She got inside the train and sat.Suddenly she was surprised to see Prem sitting next to him.
She got excited:You?
That time only he saw her.He was surprised:You?
She:I never thought i would be able to meet you again.
P:But i knew that i will meet you again.
She could'nt believe it:How?
P:Because train journeys always give me hope and train always gives me happiness.
She smiled:So seeing me you became happy?
He smiled:Yes.
They talked a lot till the train reached the next station.
P:I have to get down here.
She:Surpisingly even i have to get down here.
P:Wow!We both will get down together.
She:Ok.
They both got down at the station together.
Prem said 'Bye' with so much of hesitation.
She also hesitated to bid 'bye'.
They started walking in the opposite direction.
Suddenly Prem turned back and called her:Hey...
She was not sure if she was being called,still she turned back with hope.She as happy when she realized that he called her only.
P:Sorry for calling you.

We talked a lot.Still i forgot to ask your name.
She smiled:I am Madhu.
Drashti Dhami at Madhubala premier

P:You are sweet like honey.
She blushed.
M:And you?
P:Prem.
She could'nt believe it.Because she remembered dancing to the song 'Prem Meri Aankhon Mein Hain
Prem Meri Saason Mein Hain
Prem Mere Hoto Pe Hain
Prem Meri Baaton Mein Hain
Bani Bani Bani Re Bani
Prem Deewani Bani..'
During dancing to this song she had imagined Prem watching her there.
She thought:What a coincidence?
He came towards her.
P:Since we have become good train companions now why can't we be with each other?
She blushed with surprise.
Prem extended her hand towards her:Let us walk together.Who knows our destination may be same.
She held his hand.They smiled at each other.They walked together holding each other's hand.

The end



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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
thats soo cutee...loved it πŸ˜³ good jobπŸ‘
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
I like maneet and arhi,i don't know who liked arnav and geet as a PAIR! Well,i just see them as a brother and sister now!Sorry,i didn't read one word in this!
Posted: 11 years ago
#26
short ...
sweet...
and lovely...
I loved it !!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
Os was nice but Sorry jashmin, arnav n khushi forever.. I cant see or read anyother with arnav . The name suit him but Arnav made for khushi.. Arshi just arshi.. Sorry if u hurt..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
beautiful one
thanks for pm 
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
Wow this is so different and nice πŸ˜ƒ
Loved it dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
awww...loved this...it was a surprise ...i never expected this combination...i guess they will work coz it not always possible to see maaneet and Asrhi (iam trying to be practical n guys plz dont bash meπŸ˜‰)...i actually went back n listened to the song zindagi ne zindagi bhar to get the effect and that song is always emotional...