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Posted: 11 years ago
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HAP 5
MANYATA ROOM
M: oh god ! why mom is forcing me to go to the party and i don't even have clothes to wear
J AND MATS BEST FIREND
sana:( mats and j best friend) hello, mats on your bed there are some many dresses that the whole India can wear it. So chill
M: RIGHT! DRESSES DO I LOOK LIKE TO YOU A BARBIE DOLL TO YOU.
S: FROM NO ANGLE .
JAI ENTER
J: MATS YOU ARE NOT READY YET? IF MOM SEE YOU LIKE THIS YOU ARE DEAD
MATS GOT HER SHOES
J: YOU ARE NOT WEARING THOSE SINKKI SHOES
M: what should i do ? look like and right now you are looking like a PINK PUFFY PASTRY to me ( Sana and mats laugh and give a high five)

J : I DIDN'T ASK FOR YOU OPINION AND IT WAY BETTER TO LOOK LIKE A PINK PUFFY PASTRY THEN A TOMBOY
SANA PICK A BOX FROM MATS'S TABLE
S: hey, what is this?
M: r u blind ! can't you see its a boxxx!
S: it looks like a gift to me
M: actually, mom gave me a dress to wear for the party tonight .
S: why dont you wear this tonight?
M: becz i know her choice and she likes girly dresses and i HATE those kind of dresses. IT MAKE ME PEPUK!!!
j : JUST OPEN IT SANA!!
SANA OPEN THE GIFT AND SHE SAW THE WORLD PRETIEST SLAWAR KWART AWERE!!!





MATS SLAWAR KWARTA
S: BEST SLAWAR KWARTA ON THIS EARTH.
J: let me see, GORGEOUS !!! I AM JELLY ( JEALOUS) FROM MATS
M: i didnt know that mom had a good choice abt slawar kwarta. ITS NOT THAT BAD
J AND SANA LOOK AT MATS WITH A SUPRISE😃😃
S: somebody told me that they know their mom every well.
M:😳 JUST SHUT UP
sana also notice something else in the box.
s: letter?
m: for me?
S: NO FOR ME!!! OFCOURSE FOR YOU MY CHILD
M: GAVE TO ME
MATS OPEN THE LETTER
DEAR MANYATA,
I KNOW YOU WOULD BE THINKING, WHY I GAVE YOU A SLAWAR KWARTA AND YOU HATE THEM. WHY I AM FORCING YOU TO GET DRESS UP? I KNOW THAT YOU ARE THE PRETIEST GIRL ON THIS EARTH. I WANT YOU TO SHOW YOUR BEAUTY AND I KNOW YOU WOULD PROBBALY SAY THAT MAKE-UP CANT COMPETATE WITH THE NAUTRAL BEAUTY BUT, EVERBODY TAUNT ME SAYING THAT J AND YOU ARE THE OPPOSITE BECZ SHE IS MORE PRETTY THAN YOU. TODAY, I WANT TO SHOW EVERYONE THAT YOU ARE THE PRETIEST GIRL IN THE PARTY. I WANT TO SHUT EVERBODIES MOUTH TODAY. BUT, I THINK I AM FORCING YOU TO DO THIS, IF YOU DONT WANT TO DRESS UP YOU DONT HAVE TO.
LOVE, MOM
MATS GOT REALLY SENTIMENTAL😭
J STANCHES THE LETTER FROM MATS
M: HEH!!
J AND SANA READ THE LETTER
J AND S: OOO HOW SWEET 😆
J: ARE GOING TO DRESS UP TODAY OR NOT.
M: WELL, I AM ALSO TIRED OF MY '' DRESSES'' AND MY SINKY SHOES ( PICK SHOES UP) SO I WANT TO GAVE IT A SHOT TO IT.I WANT TO SEE IF I CAN GAVE YOU COMPETITION TODAY GUYS!!!😆
ALL 3 OF THEM LAUGH😛
JHANKI ENTER THE ROOM
JHANKI YELLS AT MATS
J: MANYATA, YOU ARE NOT READY YET!!!!😡
MATS TURN AROUND AND DROP HER SHOES
M:😳 SUPER FAST MOM I WILL GET READY IN 5 MINS PLEASE, DONT BEAT ME UP !!!!
JA: IF YOU GET READY, IN 5 MINS I WILL BEAT YOU UP IN FRONT OF EVERYONE . THE PARTY WILL START IN 1 HR SO DRESS UP PROPERLY. LOOK AT J, SHE LOOKS GORGEOUS TODAY
J: IN YOUR FACE MATS( IN HER MIND)
M: JUST HAVE TO CUT ( '' THE PINK PTUFF PASTRY GIRL'' AND EAT HER UP)
J: WHAT EVER( IN HER MIND)
JA: BE READY
JHANKI LEFT THE ROOM
M: DO YOU GUYS NEED A PERSONAL INVETATION TO LEAVE THIS ROOM.
J: WE ARE HERE TO HELP YOU GET DRESS UP
Ml: I CAN DRESS UP MY SELF !!
J AND SANA START CRACKING UP 😆
M: DID I CRACK UP JOKE OR SOMETHING?
J: MATS, YOU AND DRESSING UP ARE JUST UNBALANCED LIKE NORTH AND SOUTH THAT CANT LIVE WITH EACHOTHER.
M: LAUGH AS MUCH YOU WANT GUYS BUT AFTER FEW MINS YOU ARE GOING TO LAUGH ON YOURSELF.
S&J : WE SHALL SEE!!
M: YOU HAVE NOT SEEN THE REAL MATS, IF I WANT I CAN MAKE THE WORLD SPIN ON MY FINGURES.
S&J : YEAH RIGHT!!!
M: SO LEAVE
J AND SANA WERE ABT TO LEAVE BUT THEN
J: MATS, JUST REMEMBER THIS IS NOT A HALLOWEN PARTY SO, DONT DRESS UP LIKE A WITCH TODAY!!!
😆
MATS THROW A PILLOW ON J
IN THE PARTY
J AND SANA ARE TALKING TO THEIR OTHER FRIENDS. A GIRL ENTERS
TIA: MATS, J AND SANA ENEMY
S: HER COMES MS. '' SPOLIGHT FREAK''.
EVERYONE STARES AT TIA (T) AS USUAL SHE LOOKS BEAUITFUL
T: WHATS UP GUYS!!
J: HEY😡😔
T: WHERE IS MATS ?
S: SHE IS GETTING DRESS UP
T: DID I JUST HEAR DRESS UP
THAT WILL TAKE HER 2 MINS BECZ JUST HAVE TO PUT JEANS, A TACKY SHIRT AND HER SINKY SHOES. MATS DOESNT EVEN KNOW THE SPELLING OF M A K E- U P
SUDDENLY EVERYONE TURNS AROUND AND LOOK AT THE STAIRS. THEY SAW A BEAUTIFUL ANGLE COMING DOWN STAIRS



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MATS IS DANCING WITH AN UNKNOW GUY
SORRY FOR THE SPELLING MISTAKES










Edited by fireroad99 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Awesome update
It was replica of the pyaar kii yeh ek kahani episode
Beautifully written
Update soon please
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
Great update
well written
thanks 4 de PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Awsome...update dear
plz...update soon thanx for PM.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Awesome update ...

Continue soon ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

Awesome update
It was replica of the pyaar kii yeh ek kahani episode
Beautifully written
Update soon please

I KNOW MY FAV CHARACTER WAS MISHA ADN MY FAV EVIL CHARACTER IS T THE BEST COMDEY WAMP GOES TO HER
ADN THANKS FOR THE REPLY
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
DO YOU GUYS KNOW HOW TO PUT BACKGROUND MUSIC PLZ DO LETS MAKE MY STORY MORE INTRESTING BY PUTTING BACKGROUND MUSIC SO PM ME IF ANYONE OF YOU KNOW HOW TO PUT BACKGROUND MUSIC IN THE STORY PLZ TELL ME STEP BY STEP
Edited by fireroad99 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Sorry there so many ff n ss so I only read one ff so Plzzz don't pm me! Sorry !
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
hey great update, Update the next part soon. And thanx for the pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
what you mean by that

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